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Vyasa (about 400 BC), translated by Romesh Chunder Dutt · 1899

trochaic octameter · rhyming couplets · 60 lines · from The Mahabharata (condensed)

Vanished then the Sable Monarch, and Savitri held her wayWhere in dense and darksome forest still her husband lifeless lay,

And she sat upon the greensward by the cold unconscious dead,On her lap with deeper kindness placed her consort's lifeless head,

And that touch of true affection thrilled him back to waking life,As returned from distant regions gazed the prince upon his wife!

"Have I lain too long and slumbered, sweet Savitri, faithful spouse?But I dreamt a Sable Person, in a noose took forth my life!"

"Pillowed on this lap," she answered, "long upon the earth you lay,And the Sable Person, husband, he hath come and passed away,

Rise and leave this darksome forest if thou feelest light and strong,For the night is on the jungle and our way is dark and long."

Rising as from happy slumber looked the young prince on all around,Saw the wide-extending jungle mantling all the darksome ground,

"Yes," he said, "I now remember, ever loving faithful dame,We in search of fruit and fuel to this lonesome forest came,

As I hewed the gnarled branches, cruel anguish filled my brain,And I laid me on the greensward with a throbbing piercing pain,

Pillowed on thy gentle bosom, solaced by thy gentle love,I was soothed, and drowsy slumber fell on me from skies above.

All was dark and then I witnessed, was it but a fleeting dream,God or Vision, dark and dreadful, in the deepening shadows gleam!

Was this dream my fair Savitri, dost thou of this Vision know?Tell me, for before my eyesight still the Vision seems to glow!"

"Darkness thickens," said Savitri, "and the evening waxeth late,When the morrow's light returneth I shall all these scenes narrate,

Now arise, for darkness gathers, deeper grows the gloomy night,And thy loving anxious parents trembling wait thy welcome sight,

Hark the rangers of the forest! how their voices strike the ear!Prowlers of the darksome jungle! how they fill my breast with fear!

Forest-fire is raging yonder, for I see a distant gleam,And the rising evening breezes help the red and radiant beam,

Let me fetch a burning faggot and prepare a friendly light,With these fallen withered branches chase the shadows of the night,

And if feeble still thy footsteps,--long and weary is our way,--By the fire repose, my husband, and return by light of day."

"For my parents, fondly anxious," Satyavan thus made reply,"Pains my heart and yearns my bosom, let us to their cottage hie,

When I tarried in the jungle or by day or dewy eve,Searching in the hermitages often did my parents grieve,

And with father's soft reproaches and with mother's loving fears,Chid me for my tardy footsteps, dewed me with their gentle tears!

Think then of my father's sorrow, of my mother's woeful plight,If afar in wood and jungle pass we now the livelong night,

Wife beloved, I may not fathom what mishap or load of care,Unknown dangers, unseen sorrows, even now my parents share!"

Gentle drops of filial sorrow trickled down his manly eye,Pond Savitri sweetly speaking softly wiped the tear-drops dry:

"Trust me, husband, if Savitri hath been faithful in her love,If she hath with pious offerings served the righteous gods above,

If she hath a sister's kindness unto brother men performed,If she hath in speech and action unto holy truth conformed,

Unknown blessings, mighty gladness, trust thy ever faithful wife,And not sorrows or disasters wait this eve our parents' life!"

Then she rose and tied her tresses, gently helped her lord to rise,Walked with him the pathless jungle, looked with love into his eyes,

On her neck his clasping left arm sweetly winds in soft embrace,Round his waist Savitri's right arm doth sweetly interlace,

Thus they walked the darksome jungle, silent stars looked from above,And the hushed and throbbing midnight watched Savitri's deathless love.

Words in this poem 23
sable n.
A carnivorous animal of the Weasel family (Mustela zibellina) native of the northern latitudes of Europe, Asia, and America, -- noted for its fine, soft, and valuable fur. [OF. sable, F. zibeline sable (in sense 4), LL. sabellum; cf. D. sabel, Dan. sabel, zobel, Sw. sabel, sobel, G. zobel; all fr. Russ. sóbole.]
darksome a.
Dark; gloomy; obscure; shaded; cheerless.
greensward n.
Turf green with grass.
spouse v. t.
To wed; to espouse. [See Espouse, and Spouse, n.]
pillowed a.
Provided with a pillow or pillows; having the head resting on, or as on, a pillow.
jungle n.
A dense growth of brushwood, grasses, reeds, vines, etc.; an almost impenetrable thicket of trees, canes, and reedy vegetation, as in India, Africa, Australia, and Brazil. [Hind. jangal desert, forest, jungle; Skr. ja desert.]
mantling n.
The representation of a mantle, or the drapery behind and around a coat of arms: -- called also lambrequin.
dame n.
A mistress of a family, who is a lady; a womam in authority; especially, a lady. [F. dame, LL. domna, fr. L. domina mistress, lady, fem. of dominus master, ruler, lord; akin to domare to tame, subdue. See Tame, and cf. Dam mother, Dan, Danger]
lonesome a.
Secluded from society; not frequented by human beings; solitary.
gnarled a.
Knotty; full of knots or gnarls; twisted; crossgrained.
dreadful a.
Full of dread or terror; fearful.
eyesight n.
Sight of the eye; the sense of seeing; view; observation.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
fondly adv.
Foolishly. Verstegan (1673).
plight v. t.
To weave; to braid; to fold; to plait. [OE. pliten; probably through Old French, fr. LL. plectare, L. plectere. See Plait, Ply.]
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
livelong a.
Whole; entire; long in passing; -- used of time, as day or night, in adverbial phrases, and usually with a sense of tediousness. [For lifelong. Cf. Lifelong.]
mishap v. i.
To happen unluckily; -- used impersonally.
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
filial a.
Of or pertaining to a son or daughter; becoming to a child in relation to his parents; as, filial obedience. [L. filialis, fr. filius son, filia daughter; akin to e. female, feminine. Cf. Fitz.]
pathless a.
Having no beaten path or way; untrodden; impenetrable; as, pathless woods.
deathless a.
Not subject to death, destruction, or extinction; immortal; undying; imperishable; as, deathless beings; deathless fame.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Return Home is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Mahabharata (condensed), Project Gutenberg ebook #19630, the Romesh Chunder Dutt translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Return Home is 60 lines in 30 stanzas of 2 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 93% of the lines. The metre is trochaic octameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 15.0 syllables.

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in trochaic octameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA wayA · layA
  2. 2 AA deadA · headA
  3. 3 AA lifeA · wifeA
  4. 5 AA layA · awayA
  5. 6 AA strongA · longA
  6. 7 AA aroundA · groundA
  7. 8 AA dameA · cameA
  8. 9 AA brainA · painA
  9. 10 AA loveA · aboveA
  10. 11 AA dreamA · gleamA
  11. 12 AA knowA · glowA
  12. 13 AA lateA · narrateA
  13. 14 AA nightA · sightA
  14. 15 AA earA · fearA
  15. 16 AA gleamA · beamA
  16. 17 AA lightA · nightA
  17. 18 AA wayA · dayA
  18. 20 AA eveA · grieveA
  19. 21 AA fearsA · tearsA
  20. 22 AA plightA · nightA
  21. 23 AA careA · shareA
  22. 24 AA eyeA · dryA
  23. 25 AA loveA · aboveA
  24. 26 AA performedA · conformedA
  25. 27 AA wifeA · lifeA
  26. 28 AA riseA · eyesA
  27. 29 AA embraceA · interlaceA
  28. 30 AA aboveA · loveA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic octameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Vanished then the Sable Monarch, and Savitri held her way15/˘··/˘/········
Where in dense and darksome forest still her husband lifeless lay,15····/˘/˘··/˘/˘·
And she sat upon the greensward by the cold unconscious dead,15······/˘····/˘·
On her lap with deeper kindness placed her consort's lifeless head,15····/˘/˘··˘//˘·
And that touch of true affection thrilled him back to waking life,15·····˘/˘····/˘·
As returned from distant regions gazed the prince upon his wife!15·˘/·/˘/˘·······
"Have I lain too long and slumbered, sweet Savitri, faithful spouse?15······/˘····/˘·
But I dreamt a Sable Person, in a noose took forth my life!"15····/˘/˘·······
"Pillowed on this lap," she answered, "long upon the earth you lay,15/˘····/˘·······
And the Sable Person, husband, he hath come and passed away,15··/˘/˘/˘·····˘/
Rise and leave this darksome forest if thou feelest light and strong,15····/˘/˘··/˘···
For the night is on the jungle and our way is dark and long."15······/˘·/·····
Rising as from happy slumber looked the young prince on all around,16/˘··/˘/˘········
Saw the wide-extending jungle mantling all the darksome ground,15···˘/˘/˘/˘··/˘·
"Yes," he said, "I now remember, ever loving faithful dame,15·····˘/˘/˘/˘/˘·
We in search of fruit and fuel to this lonesome forest came,15······/˘··/˘/˘·
As I hewed the gnarled branches, cruel anguish filled my brain,15···˘··/˘/˘/˘···
And I laid me on the greensward with a throbbing piercing pain,15······/˘··/˘/˘·
Pillowed on thy gentle bosom, solaced by thy gentle love,15/˘··/˘/˘/˘··/˘·
I was soothed, and drowsy slumber fell on me from skies above.15····/˘/˘·······
All was dark and then I witnessed, was it but a fleeting dream,15······/˘····/˘·
God or Vision, dark and dreadful, in the deepening shadows gleam!15··/˘··/˘··/˘/··
Was this dream my fair Savitri, dost thou of this Vision know?15············/˘·
Tell me, for before my eyesight still the Vision seems to glow!"15······/···/˘···
"Darkness thickens," said Savitri, "and the evening waxeth late,15/˘/˘······/˘···
When the morrow's light returneth I shall all these scenes narrate,15··/˘·˘/˘·····/·
Now arise, for darkness gathers, deeper grows the gloomy night,15·˘/·/˘/˘/˘··/˘·
And thy loving anxious parents trembling wait thy welcome sight,15··/˘/˘/˘/˘··/˘·
Hark the rangers of the forest! how their voices strike the ear!15··/˘··/˘··/˘···
Prowlers of the darksome jungle! how they fill my breast with fear!15/˘··/˘/˘·······
Forest-fire is raging yonder, for I see a distant gleam,15/˘/·/˘/˘····/˘·
And the rising evening breezes help the red and radiant beam,15··/˘/˘/˘····/˘·
Let me fetch a burning faggot and prepare a friendly light,15····/˘/˘·˘/·/˘·
With these fallen withered branches chase the shadows of the night,15··/˘/˘/˘··/····
And if feeble still thy footsteps,--long and weary is our way,--15··/˘··/···/˘·/·
By the fire repose, my husband, and return by light of day."15··/˘/·/˘·˘/····
"For my parents, fondly anxious," Satyavan thus made reply,15··/˘/˘/˘·····˘/
"Pains my heart and yearns my bosom, let us to their cottage hie,15······/˘····/˘·
When I tarried in the jungle or by day or dewy eve,14·····/˘····/˘·
Searching in the hermitages often did my parents grieve,15/˘··/˘˘˘/˘··/˘·
And with father's soft reproaches and with mother's loving fears,15··/˘·˘/˘··/˘/˘·
Chid me for my tardy footsteps, dewed me with their gentle tears!15····/˘/·····/˘·
Think then of my father's sorrow, of my mother's woeful plight,15····/˘/˘··/˘/˘·
If afar in wood and jungle pass we now the livelong night,15·˘/···/˘····/˘·
Wife beloved, I may not fathom what mishap or load of care,15·˘/···/˘·/·····
Unknown dangers, unseen sorrows, even now my parents share!"15˘//˘˘//˘/˘··/˘·
Gentle drops of filial sorrow trickled down his manly eye,15/˘··/˘/˘/˘··/˘·
Pond Savitri sweetly speaking softly wiped the tear-drops dry:15····/˘/˘/˘·····
"Trust me, husband, if Savitri hath been faithful in her love,15··/˘······/˘···
If she hath with pious offerings served the righteous gods above,15····//˘˘··/˘···
If she hath a sister's kindness unto brother men performed,15····/˘/˘··/˘·˘/
If she hath in speech and action unto holy truth conformed,15······/˘··/˘·˘/
Unknown blessings, mighty gladness, trust thy ever faithful wife,15˘//˘/˘/˘··/˘/˘·
And not sorrows or disasters wait this eve our parents' life!"15··/˘·˘/˘···//˘·
Then she rose and tied her tresses, gently helped her lord to rise,15······/˘/˘·····
Walked with him the pathless jungle, looked with love into his eyes,15····/˘/˘·······
On her neck his clasping left arm sweetly winds in soft embrace,15····/˘··/˘···˘/
Round his waist Savitri's right arm doth sweetly interlace,14·········/˘·˘/
Thus they walked the darksome jungle, silent stars looked from above,15····/˘/˘/˘·····
And the hushed and throbbing midnight watched Savitri's deathless love.15····/˘/·····/˘·

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