Poem VIII

James Macpherson (1736–1796) · 1760

trochaic pentameter · unrhymed · 71 lines · from Fragments of Ancient Poetry

By the side of a rock on the hill, beneaththe aged trees, old Osciansat on the moss; the last of the race ofFingal. Sightless are his aged eyes;his beard is waving in the wind. Dullthrough the leafless trees he heard thevoice of the north. Sorrow revived inhis soul: he began and lamented thedead.

How hast thou fallen like an oak,with all thy branches round thee! Whereis Fingal the King? where is Oscur myson? where are all my race? Alas! inthe earth they lie. I feel their tombswith my hands. I hear the river belowmurmuring hoarsely over the stones.What dost thou, O river, to me? Thoubringest back the memory of the past.

The race of Fingal stood on thybanks, like a wood in a fertile soil.Keen were their spears of steel. Hardywas he who dared to encounter theirrage. Fillan the great was there. ThouOscur wert there, my son! Fingal himselfwas there, strong in the grey locksof years. Full rose his sinewy limbs;and wide his shoulders spread. Theunhappy met with his arm, when thepride of his wrath arose.

The son of Morny came; Gaul, thetallest of men. He stood on the hill likean oak; his voice was like the streams ofthe hill. Why reigneth alone, he cries,the son of the mighty Corval? Fingal isnot strong to save: he is no support forthe people. I am strong as a storm inthe ocean; as a whirlwind on the hill.Yield, son of Corval; Fingal, yield tome.

Oscur stood forth to meet him;my son would meet the foe. But Fingalcame in his strength, and smiled atthe vaunter's boast. They threw theirarms round each other; they struggledon the plain. The earth is ploughed withtheir heels. Their bones crack as the boaton the ocean, when it leaps from wave towave. Long did they toil; with night,they fell on the sounding plain; as twooaks, with their branches mingled, fallcrashing from the hill. The tall sonof Morny is bound; the aged overcame.

Fair with her locks of gold, hersmooth neck, and her breasts of snow;fair, as the spirits of the hill when atsilent noon they glide along the heath;fair, as the rainbow of heaven; cameMinvane the maid. Fingal! She softlysaith, loose me my brother Gaul.Loose me the hope of my race, the terrorof all but Fingal. Can I, replies theKing, can I deny the lovely daughterof the hill? take thy brother, O Minvane,thou fairer than the snow of thenorth!

Such, Fingal! were thy words; butthy words I hear no more. SightlessI sit by thy tomb. I hear the wind inthe wood; but no more I hear myfriends. The cry of the hunter is over.The voice of war is ceased.

Words in this poem

sightless a.
Wanting sight; without sight; blind.
lamented a.
Mourned for; bewailed.
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
hoarsely adv.
With a harsh, grating sound or voice.
crashing n.
The noise of many things falling and breaking at once.
saith
3d pers. sing. pres. of Say.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Poem VIII is in the public domain. This text is taken from Fragments of Ancient Poetry, Project Gutenberg ebook #8161; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: James Macpherson, Poem VIII, in Fragments of Ancient Poetry (1760), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8161, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macpherson-ossian/poem-viii.html, id L09647.

Form and metre

Poem VIII is 71 lines in 7 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is trochaic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 74%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.3 syllables. 6 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 70% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in trochaic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -----A-A- beneath · oscian · of · eyes · dull · theA · in · theA · dead
  2. 3 --------AA- thy · soil · hardy · their · thou · himself · locks · limbs · theA · theA · arose
  3. 4 A-------A- theA · like · of · cries · is · for · in · hill · toA · me
  4. 5 -------A-A--- him · fingal · at · their · struggled · with · boat · toA · night · twoA · fall · son · overcame
  5. 6 --------A--A- her · snow · at · heath · came · softly · gaul · terror · theA · daughter · minvane · theA · north
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
By the side of a rock on the hill, beneath11···········
the aged trees, old Oscian6······
sat on the moss; the last of the race of10··········
Fingal. Sightless are his aged eyes;8··/˘····
his beard is waving in the wind. Dull9···/˘····
through the leafless trees he heard the8··/˘····
voice of the north. Sorrow revived in9····/˘˘/·
his soul: he began and lamented the10···˘/·˘/˘·
dead.1·
How hast thou fallen like an oak,8···/˘···
with all thy branches round thee! Where8···/˘···
is Fingal the King? where is Oscur my10··········
son? where are all my race? Alas! in9······˘/·
the earth they lie. I feel their tombs8········
with my hands. I hear the river below10······/˘··
murmuring hoarsely over the stones.9/˘˘/˘····
What dost thou, O river, to me? Thou9····/˘···
bringest back the memory of the past.10/˘··/˘˘···
The race of Fingal stood on thy8········
banks, like a wood in a fertile soil.9······/˘·
Keen were their spears of steel. Hardy8······/˘
was he who dared to encounter their9·····˘/˘·
rage. Fillan the great was there. Thou8········
Oscur wert there, my son! Fingal himself10········˘/
was there, strong in the grey locks7·······
of years. Full rose his sinewy limbs;9·····/˘˘·
and wide his shoulders spread. The7···/˘··
unhappy met with his arm, when the9˘/˘······
pride of his wrath arose.6····˘/
The son of Morny came; Gaul, the8········
tallest of men. He stood on the hill like10/˘········
an oak; his voice was like the streams of9·········
the hill. Why reigneth alone, he cries,9···/˘˘/··
the son of the mighty Corval? Fingal is11····/˘·····
not strong to save: he is no support for10·······˘/·
the people. I am strong as a storm in10·/˘·······
the ocean; as a whirlwind on the hill.10·/˘··/····
Yield, son of Corval; Fingal, yield to9·········
me.1·
Oscur stood forth to meet him;7·······
my son would meet the foe. But Fingal9·········
came in his strength, and smiled at7·······
the vaunter's boast. They threw their7·······
arms round each other; they struggled8···/˘·/˘
on the plain. The earth is ploughed with8········
their heels. Their bones crack as the boat8········
on the ocean, when it leaps from wave to10··/˘······
wave. Long did they toil; with night,7·······
they fell on the sounding plain; as two9····/˘···
oaks, with their branches mingled, fall8···/˘/˘·
crashing from the hill. The tall son8/˘······
of Morny is bound; the aged overcame.10·······/˘/
Fair with her locks of gold, her7·······
smooth neck, and her breasts of snow;7·······
fair, as the spirits of the hill when at10···/˘·····
silent noon they glide along the heath;9/˘···˘/··
fair, as the rainbow of heaven; came9···/··/˘·
Minvane the maid. Fingal! She softly9·······/˘
saith, loose me my brother Gaul.7····/˘·
Loose me the hope of my race, the terror10········/˘
of all but Fingal. Can I, replies the10·······˘/·
King, can I deny the lovely daughter10···˘/·/˘/˘
of the hill? take thy brother, O Minvane,10·····/˘···
thou fairer than the snow of the8·/˘·····
north!1·
Such, Fingal! were thy words; but7·······
thy words I hear no more. Sightless8······/˘
I sit by thy tomb. I hear the wind in10··········
the wood; but no more I hear my8········
friends. The cry of the hunter is over.10·····/˘···
The voice of war is ceased.6······

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