Connal

James Macpherson (1736–1796) · 1760

iambic pentameter · 17 lines · from Fragments of Ancient Poetry

They live. I saw them return fromthe chace, like a stream of light. Thesun was on their shields: In a line theydescended the hill. Loud is the voice ofthe youth; the war, my love, is near.To-morrow the enormous Dargo comesto try the force of our race. The race ofFingal he defies; the race of battle andwounds.

Connal, I saw his sails like grey miston the sable wave. They came to land.Connnal, many are the warriors ofDargo!

Bring me thy father's shield; the ironshield of Rinval; that shield like thefull moon when it is darkened in thesky.

Words in this poem

chace v. t.
To pursue. See Chase v. t.
sable n.
A carnivorous animal of the Weasel family (Mustela zibellina) native of the northern latitudes of Europe, Asia, and America, -- noted for its fine, soft, and valuable fur. [OF. sable, F. zibeline sable (in sense 4), LL. sabellum; cf. D. sabel, Dan. sabel, zobel, Sw. sabel, sobel, G. zobel; all fr. Russ. sóbole.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Connal is in the public domain. This text is taken from Fragments of Ancient Poetry, Project Gutenberg ebook #8161; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: James Macpherson, Connal, in Fragments of Ancient Poetry (1760), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8161, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macpherson-ossian/connal.html, id L09640.

Form and metre

Connal is 17 lines in 3 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.8 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 71% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ---A--A-- from · the · they · ofA · near · comes · ofA · and · wounds
  2. 3 -AA- iron · theA · theA · sky
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
They live. I saw them return from8·····˘/·
the chace, like a stream of light. The8········
sun was on their shields: In a line they9·········
descended the hill. Loud is the voice of10˘/˘·······
the youth; the war, my love, is near.8········
To-morrow the enormous Dargo comes10·/˘·˘/˘···
to try the force of our race. The race of11·····/˘····
Fingal he defies; the race of battle and11···˘/···/˘·
wounds.1·
Connal, I saw his sails like grey mist9·········
on the sable wave. They came to land.9··/˘·····
Connnal, many are the warriors of10··/˘··/˘˘·
Dargo!2··
Bring me thy father's shield; the iron9···/˘··/˘
shield of Rinval; that shield like the8········
full moon when it is darkened in the9·····/˘··
sky.1·

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