Greville Matheson Macdonald

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

iambic pentameter · ABBAABBACDCCDD · 14 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

First, most, to thee, my son, I give this bookIn which a friend's and brother's verses blendWith mine; for not son only--brother, friend,Art thou, through sonship which no veil can brookBetween the eyes that in each other look,Or any shadow 'twixt the hearts that tendStill nearer, with divine approach, to endIn love eternal that cannot be shookWhen all the shakable shall cease to be.With growing hope I greet the coming dayWhen from thy journey done I welcome theeWho sharest in the names of all the three,And take thee to the two, and humbly say,Let this man be the fourth with us, I pray.

Words in this poem

sonship n.
The state of being a son, or of bearing the relation of a son; filiation. Dr. H. More.
shook v. t.
To pack, as staves, in a shook.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
humbly adv.
With humility; lowly.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Greville Matheson Macdonald is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Greville Matheson Macdonald is 14 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes ABBAABBACDCCDD. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBAABBACDCCDD bookA · blendB · friendB · brookA · lookA · tendB · endB · shookA · beC · dayD · theeC · threeC · sayD · prayD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
First, most, to thee, my son, I give this book10··········
In which a friend's and brother's verses blend10·····/˘/˘·
With mine; for not son only--brother, friend,10·····/˘/˘·
Art thou, through sonship which no veil can brook10···/˘·····
Between the eyes that in each other look,10·······/˘·
Or any shadow 'twixt the hearts that tend10·/˘/······
Still nearer, with divine approach, to end10·/˘·˘/˘/··
In love eternal that cannot be shook10··˘/˘·˘/··
When all the shakable shall cease to be.10··········
With growing hope I greet the coming day10·/˘····/˘·
When from thy journey done I welcome thee10···/˘··/˘·
Who sharest in the names of all the three,10·/˘·······
And take thee to the two, and humbly say,10·······/˘·
Let this man be the fourth with us, I pray.10··········

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