False Prophets

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

trochaic trimeter · ABAB · 16 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

Would-be prophets tell usWe shall not re-knowThem that walked our fellowsIn the ways below!

Smoking, smouldering TophetsSteaming hopeless plaints!Dreary, mole-eyed prophets!Mean, skin-pledging saints!

Knowing not the FatherWhat their prophecies!Grapes of such none gather,Only thorns and lies.

Loving thus the brother,How the Father tell?Go without each otherTo your heavenly hell!

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
smouldering a.
Being in a state of suppressed activity; quiet but not dead.
dreary a.
Sorrowful; distressful. [OE. dreori, dreri, AS. dreórig, sad; akin to G. traurig, and prob. to AS. dreósan to fall, Goth. driusan. Cf. Dross, Drear, Drizzle, Drowse.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

False Prophets is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

False Prophets is 16 lines in 4 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 2 of its 4 stanzas. The metre is trochaic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).

See other poems in trochaic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A us · knowA · fellows · belowA
  2. 2 ABAB tophetsA · plaintsB · prophetsA · saintsB
  3. 3 -A-A father · propheciesA · gather · liesA
  4. 4 ABAB brotherA · tellB · otherA · hellB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Would-be prophets tell us6··/˘··
We shall not re-know5·····
Them that walked our fellows7···/˘/˘
In the ways below!5·····
Smoking, smouldering Tophets7/˘·····
Steaming hopeless plaints!5/˘/˘·
Dreary, mole-eyed prophets!6/˘··/˘
Mean, skin-pledging saints!5··/˘·
Knowing not the Father6/˘··/˘
What their prophecies!5··/˘˘
Grapes of such none gather,6····/˘
Only thorns and lies.5/˘···
Loving thus the brother,6/˘··/˘
How the Father tell?5··/˘·
Go without each other6····/˘
To your heavenly hell!6··/˘˘·

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