After an Old Legend
The monk was praying in his cell,With bowed head praying sore;He had been praying on his kneesFor two long hours and more.
As of themselves, all suddenly,His eyelids opened wide;Before him on the ground he sawA man's feet close beside;
And almost to the feet came downA garment wove throughout;Such garment he had never seenIn countries round about!
His eyes he lifted tremblinglyUntil a hand they spied:A chisel-scar on it he saw,And a deep, torn scar beside.
His eyes they leaped up to the face,His heart gave one wild bound,Then stood as if its work were done--The Master he had found!
With sudden clang the convent bellTold him the poor did waitHis hand to give the daily breadDoled at the convent-gate.
Then Love rose in him passionate,And with Duty wrestled strong;And the bell kept calling all the timeWith merciless iron tongue.
The Master stood and looked at himHe rose up with a sigh:"He will be gone when I come backI go to him by and by!"
He chid his heart, he fed the poorAll at the convent-gate;Then with slow-dragging feet went backTo his cell so desolate:
His heart bereaved by duty done,He had sore need of prayer!Oh, sad he lifted the latch!--and, lo,The Master standing there!
He said, "My poor had not to standWearily at thy gate:For him who feeds the shepherd's sheepThe shepherd will stand and wait."
Yet, Lord--for thou would'st have us judge,And I will humbly dare--If he had staid, I do not thinkThou wouldst have left him there.
Thy voice in far-off time I hear,With sweet defending, say:"The poor ye always have with you,Me ye have not alway!"
Thou wouldst have said: "Go feed my poor,The deed thou shalt not rue;Wherever ye do my father's willI always am with you."
Words in this poem
- wove
- p. pr. & rare vb. n. of Weave.
- clang v. t.
- To strike together so as to produce a ringing metallic sound. [L. clangere; akin to Gr. clank.]
- went n.
- Course; way; path; journey; direction.
- latch v. t.
- To smear; to anoint. [Cf. F. lécher to lick (of German origin). Cf. Lick.]
- wearily adv.
- In a weary manner.
- humbly adv.
- With humility; lowly.
- shalt
- 2d per. sing. of Shall.
- wherever adv.
- At or in whatever place; wheresoever.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
After an Old Legend is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: George MacDonald, After an Old Legend, in A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems (1893), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9984, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macdonald-poems/after-an-old-legend.html, id L22277.
Form and metre
After an Old Legend is 56 lines in 14 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%).
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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -A-A cell · soreA · knees · moreA
- 2 -A-A suddenly · wideA · saw · besideA
- 3 -A-A down · throughoutA · seen · aboutA
- 4 -A-A tremblingly · spiedA · saw · besideA
- 5 -A-A face · boundA · done · foundA
- 6 -A-A bell · waitA · bread · gateA
- 8 -A-A him · sighA · back · byA
- 9 -A-A poor · gateA · back · desolateA
- 10 -A-A done · prayerA · lo · thereA
- 11 -A-A stand · gateA · sheep · waitA
- 12 -A-A judge · dareA · think · thereA
- 14 -A-A poor · rueA · will · youA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| The monk was praying in his cell, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| With bowed head praying sore; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| He had been praying on his knees | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| For two long hours and more. | 7 | ···/˘·· |
| As of themselves, all suddenly, | 8 | ··˘/·/˘˘ |
| His eyelids opened wide; | 6 | ·/·/˘· |
| Before him on the ground he saw | 8 | ········ |
| A man's feet close beside; | 6 | ····˘/ |
| And almost to the feet came down | 8 | ·/······ |
| A garment wove throughout; | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Such garment he had never seen | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| In countries round about! | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| His eyes he lifted tremblingly | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Until a hand they spied: | 6 | ······ |
| A chisel-scar on it he saw, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| And a deep, torn scar beside. | 7 | ·····˘/ |
| His eyes they leaped up to the face, | 8 | ········ |
| His heart gave one wild bound, | 6 | ······ |
| Then stood as if its work were done-- | 8 | ········ |
| The Master he had found! | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| With sudden clang the convent bell | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Told him the poor did wait | 6 | ······ |
| His hand to give the daily bread | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Doled at the convent-gate. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Then Love rose in him passionate, | 8 | ·····/˘˘ |
| And with Duty wrestled strong; | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| And the bell kept calling all the time | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| With merciless iron tongue. | 7 | ·/˘˘/˘· |
| The Master stood and looked at him | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| He rose up with a sigh: | 6 | ······ |
| "He will be gone when I come back | 8 | ········ |
| I go to him by and by!" | 7 | ······· |
| He chid his heart, he fed the poor | 8 | ········ |
| All at the convent-gate; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Then with slow-dragging feet went back | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| To his cell so desolate: | 7 | ····/˘· |
| His heart bereaved by duty done, | 8 | ··˘/·/˘· |
| He had sore need of prayer! | 6 | ······ |
| Oh, sad he lifted the latch!--and, lo, | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| The Master standing there! | 6 | ·/˘/˘· |
| He said, "My poor had not to stand | 8 | ········ |
| Wearily at thy gate: | 6 | /˘˘··· |
| For him who feeds the shepherd's sheep | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| The shepherd will stand and wait." | 7 | ·/˘···· |
| Yet, Lord--for thou would'st have us judge, | 8 | ········ |
| And I will humbly dare-- | 6 | ···/˘· |
| If he had staid, I do not think | 8 | ········ |
| Thou wouldst have left him there. | 6 | ······ |
| Thy voice in far-off time I hear, | 8 | ········ |
| With sweet defending, say: | 6 | ··˘/˘· |
| "The poor ye always have with you, | 8 | ···/···· |
| Me ye have not alway!" | 6 | ····/˘ |
| Thou wouldst have said: "Go feed my poor, | 8 | ········ |
| The deed thou shalt not rue; | 6 | ······ |
| Wherever ye do my father's will | 9 | ˘/˘···/˘· |
| I always am with you." | 6 | ·/···· |
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