A Prisoner

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

iambic trimeter · 8 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

The hinges are so rustyThe door is fixed and fast;The windows are so dustyThe sun looks in aghast:Knock out the glass, I pray,Or dash the door away,Or break the house down bodily,And let my soul go free!

About this text

A Prisoner is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: George MacDonald, A Prisoner, in A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems (1893), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9984, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macdonald-poems/a-prisoner.html, id L22319.

Form and metre

A Prisoner is 8 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCC-- rustyA · fastB · dustyA · aghastB · prayC · awayC · bodily · free
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The hinges are so rusty7·/˘··/˘
The door is fixed and fast;6······
The windows are so dusty7·/˘··/˘
The sun looks in aghast:6····˘/
Knock out the glass, I pray,6······
Or dash the door away,6····˘/
Or break the house down bodily,7·····/˘
And let my soul go free!6······

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