A Make-Believe

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

trochaic trimeter · 162 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

Oh, delightIn the nightWhen the moonSets the tuneTo the woods!And the broodsAll run out,Frisk about,Go and come,Beat the drum--Here in groups,There in troops!Now there's one!Now it's gone!There are none!And now they are dancing like chaff!I look, and I laugh,But sit by my door, and keep to my habit--A wise, respectable, clean-furred old rabbit!

Now I'm going,Business calls me out--Going, going,Very knowing,Slow, long-heeled, and stout,Loping, lumbering,Nipping, numbering,Head on this side and on that,Along the pathway footed flat,Through the meadow, through the heather,Through the rich dusky weather--Big stars and little moon!

Dews are lighting down in crowds,Odours rising in thin clouds,Night has all her chords in tune--The very night for us, God's rabbits,Suiting all our little habits!Wind not loud, but playful with our fur,Just a cool, a sweet, a gentle stir!And all the way not one rough bur,But the dewiest, freshest grasses,That whisper thanks to every foot that passes!

I, the king the rest call Mappy,Canter on, composed and happy,Till I come where there is plentyFor a varied meal and dainty.Is it cabbage, I grab it;Is it parsley, I nab it;Is it carrot, I mar it;The turnip I turn upAnd hollow and swallow;A lettuce? Let us eat it!A beetroot? Let's beat it!If you are juicy,Sweet sir, I will use you!For all kinds of corn-cropI have a born crop!Are you a green top?You shall be gleaned up!Sucking and feazing,Crushing and squeezingAll that is feathery,Crisp, not leathery,Juicy and bruisy--All comes properTo my little hopperStill on the dance,Driven by hunger and drouth!

All is welcome to my crunching,Finding, grinding,Milling, munching,Gobbling, lunching,Fore-toothed, three-lipped mouth--Eating side way, round way, flat way,Eating this way, eating that way,Every way at once!

Hark to the rain!--Pattering, clattering,The cabbage leaves battering,Down it comes amain!--Home we hurryHop and scurry,And in with a flurry!Hustling, jostlingOut of the airy landInto the dry warm sand;Our family white tails,The last of our vitals,Following hard with a whisk to them,And with a great sense of risk to them!

Hear to it pouring!Hear the thunder roaringFar off and up high,While we all lieSo warm and so dryIn the mellow dark,Where never a spark,White or rosy or blue,Of the sheeting, fleeting,Forking, frightening,Lashing lightningEver can come through!

Let the wind chafeIn the trees overhead,We are quite safeIn our dark, yellow bed!Let the rain pour!It never can boreA hole in our roof--It is waterproof!So is the cloakWe always carry,We furry folk,In sandhole or quarry!It is perfect blissTo lie in a nestSo soft as this,All so warmly drest!No one to flurry you!No one to hurry you!No one to scurry you!Holes plenty to creep in!All day to sleep in!All night to roam in!Gray dawn to run home in!And all the days and nights to come after--All the to-morrows for hind-legs and laughter!

Now the rain is over,We are out again,Every merry, leaping rover,On his right leg and his wrong leg,On his doubled, shortened long leg,Floundering amain!Oh, it is merryAnd jolly--yes, very!

But what--what is that?What can he be at?Is it a cat?Ah, my poor little brother,He's caught in the trapThat goes-to with a snap!Ah me! there was never,Nor will be for ever--There was never such another,Such a funny, funny bunny,Such a frisking, such a whisking,Such a frolicking brother!He's screeching, beseeching!They're going to--

Ah, my poor foot,It is caught in a root!No, no! 'tis a trapThat goes-to with a snap!Ah me, I'm forsaken!Ah me, I am taken!I am screeching, beseeching!They are going to--

No more! no more! I must stop this play,Be a boy again, and kneel down and prayTo the God of sparrows and rabbits and men,Who never lets any one out of his ken--It must be so, though it be bewild'ring--To save his dear beasts from his cruel children!

Words in this poem 23
lumbering n.
The business of cutting or getting timber or logs from the forest for lumber. [U.S.]
pathway n.
A footpath; a beaten track; any path or course. Also used figuratively.
canter n.
A moderate and easy gallop adapted to pleasure riding. [An abbreviation of Caner bury. See Canterbury gallop, under Canterbury.]
dainty n.
Value; estimation; the gratification or pleasure taken in anything. [OE. deinie, dainte, deintie, deyntee, OF. deintié delicacy, orig., dignity, honor, fr. L. dignitas, fr. dignus worthy. See Deign, and cf. Dignity.]
grab n.
A vessel used on the Malabar coast, having two or three masts. [Ar. & Hind. ghur crow, raven, a kind of Arab ship.]
carrot n.
An umbelliferous biennial plant (Daucus Carota), of many varieties.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
squeezing n.
The act of pressing; compression; oppression.
hopper n.
One who, or that which, hops. [See 1st Hop.]
amain adv.
With might; with full force; vigorously; violently; exceedingly. [Pref. a- + main. See 2d Main, n.]
scurry v. i.
To hasten away or along; to move rapidly; to hurry; as, the rabbit scurried away. [Cf. Scur, Skirr.]
flurry n.
A sudden and brief blast or gust; a light, temporary breeze; as, a flurry of wind. [Prov. E. flur to ruffle.]
vitals n.
Organs that are necessary for life; more especially, the heart, lungs, and brain.
sheeting n.
Cotton or linen cloth suitable for bed sheets. It is sometimes made of double width.
lashing n.
The act of one who, or that which, lashes; castigation; chastisement. South. Lashing out, a striking out; also, extravagance.
furry a.
Covered with fur; dressed in fur. [From Fur.]
folk n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]
warmly adv.
In a warm manner; ardently.
rover n.
One who practices robbery on the seas; a pirate. [D. roover a robber. See Rove, v. i.]
funny a.
Droll; comical; amusing; laughable. Funny bone. See crazy bone, under Crazy. [From Fun.]
bunny n.
A great collection of ore without any vein coming into it or going out from it.
whisking a.
Sweeping along lightly.
kneel v. i.
To bend the knee; to fall or rest on the knees; -- sometimes with down. [OE. knelen, cneolien; akin to D. knielen, Dan. knæle. See Knee.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

A Make-Believe is 162 lines in 12 stanzas. The metre is trochaic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

See other poems in trochaic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB--CCDDEEF-FGGHH delightA · nightA · moonB · tuneB · woods · broods · outC · aboutC · comeD · drumD · groupsE · troopsE · oneF · gone · noneF · chaffG · laughG · habitH · rabbitH
  2. 2 ABAABCCDDEE- goingA · outB · goingA · knowingA · stoutB · lumberingC · numberingC · thatD · flatD · heatherE · weatherE · moon
  3. 3 AA-BBCCCDD crowdsA · cloudsA · tune · rabbitsB · habitsB · furC · stirC · burC · grassesD · passesD
  4. 4 AA--BBBC-BB--DDDCEEFF-GG-- mappyA · happyA · plenty · dainty · itB · itB · itB · upC · swallow · itB · itB · juicy · you · cropD · cropD · topD · upC · feazingE · squeezingE · featheryF · leatheryF · bruisy · properG · hopperG · dance · drouth
  5. 5 A-AA-BB- crunchingA · grinding · munchingA · lunchingA · mouth · wayB · wayB · once
  6. 6 ABBACCC-DDEEFF rainA · clatteringB · batteringB · amainA · hurryC · scurryC · flurryC · jostling · landD · sandD · tailsE · vitalsE · themF · themF
  7. 7 AABBBCCD-EED pouringA · roaringA · highB · lieB · dryB · darkC · sparkC · blueD · fleeting · frighteningE · lightningE · throughD
  8. 8 ABABCCDDE-E-FGFGHHHIIIIJJ chafeA · overheadB · safeA · bedB · pourC · boreC · roofD · waterproofD · cloakE · carry · folkE · quarry · blissF · nestG · thisF · drestG · youH · youH · youH · inI · inI · inI · inI · afterJ · laughterJ
  9. 9 ABACCBDD overA · againB · roverA · legC · legC · amainB · merryD · veryD
  10. 10 AAABCCDDB--B-- thatA · atA · catA · brotherB · trapC · snapC · neverD · everD · anotherB · bunny · whisking · brotherB · beseeching · to
  11. 11 --AABB-- foot · root · trapA · snapA · forsakenB · takenB · beseeching · to
  12. 12 AABB-B playA · prayA · menB · kenB · bewild'ring · childrenB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Oh, delight3·˘/
In the night3···
When the moon3···
Sets the tune3···
To the woods!3···
And the broods3···
All run out,3···
Frisk about,3···
Go and come,3···
Beat the drum--3···
Here in groups,3···
There in troops!3···
Now there's one!3···
Now it's gone!3···
There are none!3···
And now they are dancing like chaff!8····/˘··
I look, and I laugh,5·····
But sit by my door, and keep to my habit--11·········/˘
A wise, respectable, clean-furred old rabbit!11··˘/˘˘···/˘
Now I'm going,4··/˘
Business calls me out--5/˘···
Going, going,4/˘/˘
Very knowing,4/˘/˘
Slow, long-heeled, and stout,5·····
Loping, lumbering,5··/˘˘
Nipping, numbering,5/˘/˘˘
Head on this side and on that,7·······
Along the pathway footed flat,8˘/·/·/˘·
Through the meadow, through the heather,8··/···/˘
Through the rich dusky weather--7···/˘/˘
Big stars and little moon!6···/˘·
Dews are lighting down in crowds,7··/˘···
Odours rising in thin clouds,7/˘/˘···
Night has all her chords in tune--7·······
The very night for us, God's rabbits,9·/˘····/˘
Suiting all our little habits!9/˘·/˘/˘/˘
Wind not loud, but playful with our fur,10····/˘·/˘·
Just a cool, a sweet, a gentle stir!9······/˘·
And all the way not one rough bur,8········
But the dewiest, freshest grasses,8····/˘/˘
That whisper thanks to every foot that passes!11·/˘··/˘··/˘
I, the king the rest call Mappy,8········
Canter on, composed and happy,9/˘·˘/˘·/˘
Till I come where there is plenty8······/˘
For a varied meal and dainty.8··/˘··/˘
Is it cabbage, I grab it;7··/˘···
Is it parsley, I nab it;7··/˘···
Is it carrot, I mar it;7··/˘···
The turnip I turn up6·/˘···
And hollow and swallow;6·/˘·/˘
A lettuce? Let us eat it!7·/˘····
A beetroot? Let's beat it!6······
If you are juicy,5···/˘
Sweet sir, I will use you!6······
For all kinds of corn-crop6······
I have a born crop!5·····
Are you a green top?5·····
You shall be gleaned up!5·····
Sucking and feazing,5/˘···
Crushing and squeezing5/˘·/˘
All that is feathery,6···/˘˘
Crisp, not leathery,5··/˘˘
Juicy and bruisy--5/˘···
All comes proper4··/˘
To my little hopper6··/˘/˘
Still on the dance,4····
Driven by hunger and drouth!7/˘·/˘··
All is welcome to my crunching,8··/˘··/˘
Finding, grinding,4/˘/˘
Milling, munching,4/˘/˘
Gobbling, lunching,5/˘˘/˘
Fore-toothed, three-lipped mouth--5·····
Eating side way, round way, flat way,8/˘······
Eating this way, eating that way,8/˘··/˘··
Every way at once!6/˘˘···
Hark to the rain!--4····
Pattering, clattering,6/˘˘/˘˘
The cabbage leaves battering,7·/˘·/˘˘
Down it comes amain!--5···˘/
Home we hurry4··/˘
Hop and scurry,4··/˘
And in with a flurry!6····/˘
Hustling, jostling6/˘˘/˘˘
Out of the airy land6···/˘·
Into the dry warm sand;6······
Our family white tails,7/˘/˘˘··
The last of our vitals,7···/˘/˘
Following hard with a whisk to them,9/˘˘······
And with a great sense of risk to them!9·········
Hear to it pouring!5···/˘
Hear the thunder roaring6··/˘/˘
Far off and up high,5·····
While we all lie4····
So warm and so dry5·····
In the mellow dark,5··/˘·
Where never a spark,5·/˘··
White or rosy or blue,6··/˘··
Of the sheeting, fleeting,6··/˘/˘
Forking, frightening,5/˘/˘˘
Lashing lightning4/˘/˘
Ever can come through!5/˘···
Let the wind chafe4····
In the trees overhead,6···/˘/
We are quite safe4····
In our dark, yellow bed!7·/˘·/˘·
Let the rain pour!4····
It never can bore5·/˘··
A hole in our roof--6···/˘·
It is waterproof!5··/˘·
So is the cloak4····
We always carry,5·/·/˘
We furry folk,4·/˘·
In sandhole or quarry!7·····/˘
It is perfect bliss5··˘/·
To lie in a nest5·····
So soft as this,4····
All so warmly drest!5··/˘·
No one to flurry you!6···/˘·
No one to hurry you!6···/˘·
No one to scurry you!6···/˘·
Holes plenty to creep in!6·/˘···
All day to sleep in!5·····
All night to roam in!5·····
Gray dawn to run home in!6······
And all the days and nights to come after--10··········
All the to-morrows for hind-legs and laughter!11···/˘····/˘
Now the rain is over,6······
We are out again,5···˘/
Every merry, leaping rover,9/˘˘/˘/˘/˘
On his right leg and his wrong leg,8········
On his doubled, shortened long leg,10··/˘˘/˘˘··
Floundering amain!5/˘˘˘/
Oh, it is merry5···/˘
And jolly--yes, very!6·/˘·/˘
But what--what is that?5·····
What can he be at?5·····
Is it a cat?4····
Ah, my poor little brother,7···/˘/˘
He's caught in the trap5·····
That goes-to with a snap!6······
Ah me! there was never,6····/˘
Nor will be for ever--6····/˘
There was never such another,8··/˘·˘/˘
Such a funny, funny bunny,8··/˘/˘/˘
Such a frisking, such a whisking,8··/˘··/˘
Such a frolicking brother!7··/˘˘/˘
He's screeching, beseeching!6·/˘˘/˘
They're going to--4·/˘·
Ah, my poor foot,4····
It is caught in a root!6······
No, no! 'tis a trap5·····
That goes-to with a snap!6······
Ah me, I'm forsaken!6···˘/˘
Ah me, I am taken!6····/˘
I am screeching, beseeching!7··/˘˘/˘
They are going to--5··/˘·
No more! no more! I must stop this play,9·········
Be a boy again, and kneel down and pray10···˘/·····
To the God of sparrows and rabbits and men,11····/˘·/˘··
Who never lets any one out of his ken--10·/·/˘·····
It must be so, though it be bewild'ring--10··········
To save his dear beasts from his cruel children!11·······/˘/˘

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