The Ruined Home
Who was the far-off founder of the house,With its red gates abutting to the road? --A palace, though its outer wings are shorn,And domes of glittering tiles. The wall withoutHas tottered into ruin, yet remainThe straggling fragments of some seven courts,The wreck of seven fortunes: roof and eavesStill hang together. From this chamber coolThe dense blue smoke arose. Nor heat nor coldNow dwells therein. A tall pavilion standsEmpty beside the empty rooms that faceThe pine-browed southern hills. Long purple vinesFrame the verandahs.Mount the sunken stepOf the red, joyous threshold, and shake downThe peach and cherry branches. Yonder groupOf scarlet peonies hath ringed aboutA lordly fellow with ten witnessesOf his official rank. The taint of meatLingers around the kitchen, and a traceOf vanished hoards the treasury retains.
Who can lay hold upon my words? Give heedAnd commune with thyself! How poor and meanIs the last state of wretchedness, when coldAnd famine thunder at the gates, and noneBut pale endurance on the threshold standsWith helpless hands and hollow eyes, the dumbBeholder of calamity. O thouThat would protect the land a thousand years,Behold they are not that herein once bloomedAnd perished; but the garden breathes of them,And all the flowers are fragrant for their sakes.Salute the garden that salutes the dead!
Words in this poem
- straggling a.
- from Straggle, v.
- pavilion n.
- A temporary movable habitation; a large tent; a marquee; esp., a tent raised on posts. [F. pavillon, fr. L. pavilio a butterfly, also, a tent, because spread out like a butterfly's wings.]
- yonder adv.
- At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
- commune n.
- The commonalty; the common people. [F., fr. commun. See Common.]
- famine n.
- General scarcity of food; dearth; a want of provisions; destitution. [F. famine, fr. L. fames hunger; cf. Gr. hani loss, lack, ha to leave.]
- beholder n.
- One who beholds; a spectator.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Ruined Home is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Various, The Ruined Home, in A Lute of Jade (1909), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #390, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lute-of-jade/the-ruined-home.html, id L15601.
Form and metre
The Ruined Home is 33 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.7 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 70% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ---A------B-----A--B- house · road · shorn · withoutA · remain · courts · eaves · cool · cold · stands · faceB · vines · verandahs · step · down · group · aboutA · witnesses · meat · traceB · retains
- 2 -----A---A-- heed · mean · cold · none · stands · dumbA · thou · years · bloomed · themA · sakes · dead
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Who was the far-off founder of the house, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| With its red gates abutting to the road? -- | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| A palace, though its outer wings are shorn, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| And domes of glittering tiles. The wall without | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Has tottered into ruin, yet remain | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| The straggling fragments of some seven courts, | 10 | ·/˘˘/˘··/· |
| The wreck of seven fortunes: roof and eaves | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Still hang together. From this chamber cool | 10 | ··˘/˘··/˘· |
| The dense blue smoke arose. Nor heat nor cold | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Now dwells therein. A tall pavilion stands | 10 | ······˘/˘· |
| Empty beside the empty rooms that face | 10 | /˘˘/·/˘··· |
| The pine-browed southern hills. Long purple vines | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Frame the verandahs. | 5 | ····· |
| Mount the sunken step | 5 | ··/˘· |
| Of the red, joyous threshold, and shake down | 10 | ···/˘/···· |
| The peach and cherry branches. Yonder group | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| Of scarlet peonies hath ringed about | 10 | ·/˘/˘˘···· |
| A lordly fellow with ten witnesses | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘˘ |
| Of his official rank. The taint of meat | 10 | ··˘/˘····· |
| Lingers around the kitchen, and a trace | 10 | /˘···/˘··· |
| Of vanished hoards the treasury retains. | 10 | ·/˘··/˘˘˘/ |
| Who can lay hold upon my words? Give heed | 10 | ·········· |
| And commune with thyself! How poor and mean | 10 | ·/˘·˘/···· |
| Is the last state of wretchedness, when cold | 10 | ·····/˘˘·· |
| And famine thunder at the gates, and none | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| But pale endurance on the threshold stands | 10 | ··/˘˘··/·· |
| With helpless hands and hollow eyes, the dumb | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Beholder of calamity. O thou | 10 | ˘/˘·˘/˘˘·· |
| That would protect the land a thousand years, | 10 | ··˘/···/˘· |
| Behold they are not that herein once bloomed | 10 | ˘/····˘/·· |
| And perished; but the garden breathes of them, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| And all the flowers are fragrant for their sakes. | 10 | ···/·/˘··· |
| Salute the garden that salutes the dead! | 10 | ˘/·/˘·˘/·· |
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