The Ruined Home

Various (about 750), translated by L. Cranmer-Byng · 1909

iambic pentameter · 33 lines · from A Lute of Jade

Who was the far-off founder of the house,With its red gates abutting to the road? --A palace, though its outer wings are shorn,And domes of glittering tiles. The wall withoutHas tottered into ruin, yet remainThe straggling fragments of some seven courts,The wreck of seven fortunes: roof and eavesStill hang together. From this chamber coolThe dense blue smoke arose. Nor heat nor coldNow dwells therein. A tall pavilion standsEmpty beside the empty rooms that faceThe pine-browed southern hills. Long purple vinesFrame the verandahs.Mount the sunken stepOf the red, joyous threshold, and shake downThe peach and cherry branches. Yonder groupOf scarlet peonies hath ringed aboutA lordly fellow with ten witnessesOf his official rank. The taint of meatLingers around the kitchen, and a traceOf vanished hoards the treasury retains.

Who can lay hold upon my words? Give heedAnd commune with thyself! How poor and meanIs the last state of wretchedness, when coldAnd famine thunder at the gates, and noneBut pale endurance on the threshold standsWith helpless hands and hollow eyes, the dumbBeholder of calamity. O thouThat would protect the land a thousand years,Behold they are not that herein once bloomedAnd perished; but the garden breathes of them,And all the flowers are fragrant for their sakes.Salute the garden that salutes the dead!

Words in this poem

straggling a.
from Straggle, v.
pavilion n.
A temporary movable habitation; a large tent; a marquee; esp., a tent raised on posts. [F. pavillon, fr. L. pavilio a butterfly, also, a tent, because spread out like a butterfly's wings.]
yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
commune n.
The commonalty; the common people. [F., fr. commun. See Common.]
famine n.
General scarcity of food; dearth; a want of provisions; destitution. [F. famine, fr. L. fames hunger; cf. Gr. hani loss, lack, ha to leave.]
beholder n.
One who beholds; a spectator.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Ruined Home is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, The Ruined Home, in A Lute of Jade (1909), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #390, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lute-of-jade/the-ruined-home.html, id L15601.

Form and metre

The Ruined Home is 33 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.7 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 70% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ---A------B-----A--B- house · road · shorn · withoutA · remain · courts · eaves · cool · cold · stands · faceB · vines · verandahs · step · down · group · aboutA · witnesses · meat · traceB · retains
  2. 2 -----A---A-- heed · mean · cold · none · stands · dumbA · thou · years · bloomed · themA · sakes · dead
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Who was the far-off founder of the house,10·····/˘···
With its red gates abutting to the road? --10····˘/˘···
A palace, though its outer wings are shorn,10·/˘··/˘···
And domes of glittering tiles. The wall without10···/˘·····
Has tottered into ruin, yet remain10·/˘··/˘·˘/
The straggling fragments of some seven courts,10·/˘˘/˘··/·
The wreck of seven fortunes: roof and eaves10···/˘/˘···
Still hang together. From this chamber cool10··˘/˘··/˘·
The dense blue smoke arose. Nor heat nor cold10····˘/····
Now dwells therein. A tall pavilion stands10······˘/˘·
Empty beside the empty rooms that face10/˘˘/·/˘···
The pine-browed southern hills. Long purple vines10···/˘··/˘·
Frame the verandahs.5·····
Mount the sunken step5··/˘·
Of the red, joyous threshold, and shake down10···/˘/····
The peach and cherry branches. Yonder group10···/˘/˘/˘·
Of scarlet peonies hath ringed about10·/˘/˘˘····
A lordly fellow with ten witnesses10·/˘/˘··/˘˘
Of his official rank. The taint of meat10··˘/˘·····
Lingers around the kitchen, and a trace10/˘···/˘···
Of vanished hoards the treasury retains.10·/˘··/˘˘˘/
Who can lay hold upon my words? Give heed10··········
And commune with thyself! How poor and mean10·/˘·˘/····
Is the last state of wretchedness, when cold10·····/˘˘··
And famine thunder at the gates, and none10·/˘/˘·····
But pale endurance on the threshold stands10··/˘˘··/··
With helpless hands and hollow eyes, the dumb10·/˘··/˘···
Beholder of calamity. O thou10˘/˘·˘/˘˘··
That would protect the land a thousand years,10··˘/···/˘·
Behold they are not that herein once bloomed10˘/····˘/··
And perished; but the garden breathes of them,10·/˘··/˘···
And all the flowers are fragrant for their sakes.10···/·/˘···
Salute the garden that salutes the dead!10˘/·/˘·˘/··

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