Clear, with Light, Variable Winds
The fountain bent and straightened itselfIn the night wind,Blowing like a flower.It gleamed and glittered,A tall white lily,Under the eye of the golden moon.From a stone seat,Beneath a blossoming lime,The man watched it.And the spray patteredOn the dim grass at his feet.
The fountain tossed its water,Up and up, like silver marbles.Is that an arm he sees?And for one momentDoes he catch the moving curveOf a thigh?The fountain gurgled and splashed,And the man's face was wet.
Is it singing that he hears?A song of playing at ball?The moonlight shines on the straight column of water,And through it he sees a woman,Tossing the water-balls.Her breasts point outwards,And the nipples are like buds of peonies.Her flanks ripple as she plays,And the water is not more undulatingThan the lines of her body.
"Come," she sings, "Poet!Am I not more worth than your day ladies,Covered with awkward stuffs,Unreal, unbeautiful?What do you fear in taking me?Is not the night for poets?I am your dream,Recurrent as water,Gemmed with the moon!"
She steps to the edge of the poolAnd the water runs, rustling, down her sides.She stretches out her arms,And the fountain streams behind herLike an opened veil.
In the morning the gardeners came to their work."There is something in the fountain," said one.They shuddered as they laid their dead masterOn the grass."I will close his eyes," said the head gardener,"It is uncanny to see a dead man staring at the sun."
Words in this poem
- outwards adv.
- From the interior part; in a direction from the interior toward the exterior; out; to the outside; beyond; off; away; as, a ship bound outward. [AS. . See Out, and -ward, -wards.]
- gardener n.
- One who makes and tends a garden; a horticulturist.
- uncanny a.
- Not canny; unsafe; strange; weird; ghostly.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Clear, with Light, Variable Winds is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sword Blades and Poppy Seed, Project Gutenberg ebook #1020; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Amy Lowell, Clear, with Light, Variable Winds, in Sword Blades and Poppy Seed (1914), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #1020, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lowell-amy-sword-blades/clear-with-light-variable-winds.html, id L08234.
Form and metre
Clear, with Light, Variable Winds is 49 lines in 6 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 78%). 90% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.1 syllables. 19 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 16% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic trimeter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ------A---A itself · wind · flower · glittered · lily · moon · seatA · lime · it · pattered · feetA
- 3 ------AA-- hears · ball · water · woman · balls · outwards · peoniesA · playsA · undulating · body
- 6 -A---A work · oneA · master · grass · gardener · sunA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| The fountain bent and straightened itself | 10 | ·/˘··/˘˘˘/ |
| In the night wind, | 4 | ···· |
| Blowing like a flower. | 6 | /˘··/˘ |
| It gleamed and glittered, | 5 | ···/˘ |
| A tall white lily, | 5 | ···/˘ |
| Under the eye of the golden moon. | 9 | ······/˘· |
| From a stone seat, | 4 | ···· |
| Beneath a blossoming lime, | 7 | ···/˘˘· |
| The man watched it. | 4 | ···· |
| And the spray pattered | 5 | ···/˘ |
| On the dim grass at his feet. | 7 | ······· |
| The fountain tossed its water, | 7 | ·/˘··/˘ |
| Up and up, like silver marbles. | 8 | ····/˘/˘ |
| Is that an arm he sees? | 6 | ······ |
| And for one moment | 5 | ···/˘ |
| Does he catch the moving curve | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Of a thigh? | 3 | ··· |
| The fountain gurgled and splashed, | 7 | ·/˘/˘·· |
| And the man's face was wet. | 6 | ······ |
| Is it singing that he hears? | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| A song of playing at ball? | 7 | ···/˘·· |
| The moonlight shines on the straight column of water, | 12 | ·/·····/˘·/˘ |
| And through it he sees a woman, | 8 | ······/˘ |
| Tossing the water-balls. | 6 | /˘·/˘· |
| Her breasts point outwards, | 5 | ···/˘ |
| And the nipples are like buds of peonies. | 11 | ··/˘····/˘˘ |
| Her flanks ripple as she plays, | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| And the water is not more undulating | 11 | ··/˘···/˘·˘ |
| Than the lines of her body. | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| "Come," she sings, "Poet! | 5 | ···/˘ |
| Am I not more worth than your day ladies, | 10 | ········/˘ |
| Covered with awkward stuffs, | 6 | /˘·/˘· |
| Unreal, unbeautiful? | 6 | ˘/···· |
| What do you fear in taking me? | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Is not the night for poets? | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| I am your dream, | 4 | ···· |
| Recurrent as water, | 6 | ˘/˘·/˘ |
| Gemmed with the moon!" | 4 | ···· |
| She steps to the edge of the pool | 8 | ········ |
| And the water runs, rustling, down her sides. | 10 | ··/˘·/˘··· |
| She stretches out her arms, | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| And the fountain streams behind her | 8 | ··/˘···· |
| Like an opened veil. | 5 | ··/˘· |
| In the morning the gardeners came to their work. | 11 | ··/˘·/˘···· |
| "There is something in the fountain," said one. | 10 | ··/˘··/˘·· |
| They shuddered as they laid their dead master | 10 | ·/˘·····/˘ |
| On the grass. | 3 | ··· |
| "I will close his eyes," said the head gardener, | 11 | ········/˘˘ |
| "It is uncanny to see a dead man staring at the sun." | 15 | ··˘/˘·····/˘··· |
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