Battledore and Shuttlecock

Amy Lowell (1874–1925) · 1916

iambic pentameter · 86 lines · from Men, Women and Ghosts

The shuttlecock soars upwardIn a parabola of whiteness,Turns,And sinks to a perfect arc.Plat! the battledore strikes it,And it rises again,Without haste,Winged and curving,Tracing its white flightAgainst the clipped hemlock-trees.Plat!Up again,Orange and sparkling with sun,Rounding under the blue sky,Dropping,Fading to grey-greenIn the shadow of the coned hemlocks."Ninety-one." "Ninety-two." "Ninety-three."The arms of the little girlsCome up--and up--Precisely,Like mechanical toys.The battledores beat at nothing,And toss the dazzle of snowOff their parchment drums."Ninety-four." Plat!"Ninety-five." Plat!Back and forthGoes the shuttlecock,Icicle-white,Leaping at the sharp-edged clouds,Overturning,Falling,Down,And down,Tinctured with pinkFrom the upthrusting shineOf Oriental poppies.

The little girls sway to the counting rhythm;Left foot,Right foot.Plat! Plat!Yellow heat twines round the handles of the battledores,The parchment cracks with dryness;But the shuttlecockSwings slowly into the ice-blue sky,Heaving up on the warm airLike a foam-bubble on a wave,With feathers slanted and sustaining.Higher,Until the earth turns beneath it;Poised and swinging,With all the garden flowing beneath it,Scarlet, and blue, and purple, and white--Blurred colour reflections in rippled water--Changing--streaming--For the moment that Stella takes to lift her arm.Then the shuttlecock relinquishes,Bows,Descends;And the sharp blue spears of the airThrust it to earth.

Again it mounts,Stepping up on the rising scents of flowers,Buoyed up and under by the shining heat.Above the foxgloves,Above the guelder-roses,Above the greenhouse glitter,Till the shafts of cooler airMeet it,Deflect it,Reject it,Then down,Down,Past the greenhouse,Past the guelder-rose bush,Past the foxgloves.

"Ninety-nine," Stella's battledore springs to the impact.Plunk! Like the snap of a taut string."Oh! Minna!"The shuttlecock drops zigzagedly,Out of orbit,Hits the path,And rolls over quite still.Dead white feathers,With a weight at the end.

Words in this poem

plat a.
Plain; flat; level. Gower. [F. plat. See Plate, n.]
rounding a.
Round or nearly round; becoming round; roundish.
fading n.
An Irish dance; also, the burden of a song.
dazzle v. t.
To overpower with light; to confuse the sight of by brilliance of light. [Freq. of daze.]
streaming a.
Sending forth streams.
greenhouse n.
A house in which tender plants are cultivated and sheltered from the weather.
cooler n.
That which cools, or abates heat or excitement.
impact v. t.
To drive close; to press firmly together: to wedge into a place. Woodward. [L. impactus, p. p. of impingere to push, strike against. See Impinge.]
plunk v. t.
To pluck and release quickly (a musical string); to twang.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Battledore and Shuttlecock is in the public domain. This text is taken from Men, Women and Ghosts, Project Gutenberg ebook #841; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Amy Lowell, Battledore and Shuttlecock, in Men, Women and Ghosts (1916), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #841, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lowell-amy-men-women-ghosts/battledore-and-shuttlecock.html, id L24264.

Form and metre

Battledore and Shuttlecock is 86 lines in 4 stanzas. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -------------A---A-------------------- upward · whiteness · turns · arc · it · again · haste · curving · flight · trees · plat · again · sun · skyA · dropping · green · hemlocks · threeA · girls · up · precisely · toys · nothing · snow · drums · plat · plat · forth · shuttlecock · white · clouds · overturning · falling · down · down · pink · shine · poppies
  2. 2 -AA-----B---C-C----DD-B- rhythm · footA · footA · plat · battledores · dryness · shuttlecock · sky · airB · wave · sustaining · higher · itC · swinging · itC · white · water · streaming · arm · relinquishesD · bowsD · descends · airB · earth
  3. 3 ---A---BBBCC--A mounts · flowers · heat · foxglovesA · roses · glitter · air · itB · itB · itB · downC · downC · greenhouse · bush · foxglovesA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The shuttlecock soars upward7·/˘˘·/˘
In a parabola of whiteness,9··˘/˘˘·/˘
Turns,1·
And sinks to a perfect arc.7····˘/·
Plat! the battledore strikes it,7·······
And it rises again,6··/˘˘/
Without haste,3···
Winged and curving,4··/˘
Tracing its white flight5/˘···
Against the clipped hemlock-trees.7····/··
Plat!1·
Up again,3·˘/
Orange and sparkling with sun,7/˘·/˘··
Rounding under the blue sky,7/˘·····
Dropping,2/˘
Fading to grey-green5/˘···
In the shadow of the coned hemlocks.10··/····˘/·
"Ninety-one." "Ninety-two." "Ninety-three."9/˘·/˘·/˘·
The arms of the little girls7····/˘·
Come up--and up--4····
Precisely,3˘/˘
Like mechanical toys.6·˘/˘˘·
The battledores beat at nothing,8······/˘
And toss the dazzle of snow7···/˘··
Off their parchment drums.5··/˘·
"Ninety-four." Plat!4/˘··
"Ninety-five." Plat!4/˘··
Back and forth3···
Goes the shuttlecock,5··/˘˘
Icicle-white,4/˘˘·
Leaping at the sharp-edged clouds,7/˘·····
Overturning,4/˘·˘
Falling,2/˘
Down,1·
And down,2··
Tinctured with pink4/˘··
From the upthrusting shine6······
Of Oriental poppies.7··˘/˘/˘
The little girls sway to the counting rhythm;11·/˘····/˘/˘
Left foot,2··
Right foot.2··
Plat! Plat!2··
Yellow heat twines round the handles of the battledores,13/˘····/˘·····
The parchment cracks with dryness;7·/˘··/˘
But the shuttlecock5··/˘˘
Swings slowly into the ice-blue sky,9·/˘······
Heaving up on the warm air7/˘·····
Like a foam-bubble on a wave,8···/˘···
With feathers slanted and sustaining.9·/˘/˘·˘/˘
Higher,2/˘
Until the earth turns beneath it;8········
Poised and swinging,4··/˘
With all the garden flowing beneath it,10···/˘/˘···
Scarlet, and blue, and purple, and white--9/˘···/˘··
Blurred colour reflections in rippled water--11·/˘˘/˘·/˘/˘
Changing--streaming--4/˘/˘
For the moment that Stella takes to lift her arm.12··/˘·/˘·····
Then the shuttlecock relinquishes,9··/˘˘˘/˘˘
Bows,1·
Descends;2˘/
And the sharp blue spears of the air8········
Thrust it to earth.4····
Again it mounts,4˘/··
Stepping up on the rising scents of flowers,11/˘···/˘··/˘
Buoyed up and under by the shining heat.11/˘······/˘·
Above the foxgloves,5···/·
Above the guelder-roses,7·····/˘
Above the greenhouse glitter,7···/·/˘
Till the shafts of cooler air7····/˘·
Meet it,2··
Deflect it,3˘/·
Reject it,3˘/·
Then down,2··
Down,1·
Past the greenhouse,4··/·
Past the guelder-rose bush,6······
Past the foxgloves.4··/·
"Ninety-nine," Stella's battledore springs to the impact.13/˘·/˘······˘/
Plunk! Like the snap of a taut string.8········
"Oh! Minna!"3·/˘
The shuttlecock drops zigzagedly,9·/˘˘·····
Out of orbit,4··/˘
Hits the path,3···
And rolls over quite still.6······
Dead white feathers,4··/˘
With a weight at the end.6······

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