Benvenuto. Hypocrite!
He says I show mankind that I am wantingIn piety and religion, in proportionAs I profess perfection in my art.Profess perfection? Why, 't is only menLike Bugiardini who are satisfiedWith what they do. I never am content,But always see the labors of my handFall short of my conception.
I perceiveThe malice of this creature. He would taint youWith heresy, and in a time like this!'T is infamous!
I represent the angelsWithout their heavenly glory, and the saintsWithout a trace of earthly modesty.
Incredible audacity!
The heathenVeiled their Diana with some drapery,And when they represented Venus nakedThey made her by her modest attitude,Appear half clothed. But I, who am a Christian,Do so subordinate belief to artThat I have made the very violationOf modesty in martyrs and in virginsA spectacle at which all men would gazeWith half-averted eyes even in a brothel.
He is at home there, and he ought to knowWhat men avert their eyes from in such places;From the Last Judgment chiefly, I imagine.
But divine Providence will never leaveThe boldness of my marvellous work unpunished;And the more marvellous it is, the more'T is sure to prove the ruin of my fame!And finally, if in this compositionI had pursued the instructions that he gave meConcerning heaven and hell and paradise,In that same letter, known to all the world,Nature would not be forced, as she is now,To feel ashamed that she invested meWith such great talent; that I stand myselfA very idol in the world of art.He taunts me also with the MausoleumOf Julius, still unfinished, for the reasonThat men persuaded the inane old manIt was of evil augury to buildHis tomb while he was living; and he speaksOf heaps of gold this Pope bequeathed to me,And calls it robbery;--that is what he says.What prompted such a letter?
Vanity.He is a clever writer, and he likesTo draw his pen, and flourish it in the faceOf every honest man, as swordsmen doTheir rapiers on occasion, but to showHow skilfully they do it. Had you followedThe advice he gave, or even thanked him for it,You would have seen another style of fence.'T is but his wounded vanity, and the wishTo see his name in print. So give it notA moment's thought; it soon will be forgotten.
I will not think of it, but let it passFor a rude speech thrown at me in the street,As boys threw stones at Dante.
And what answerShall I take back to Grand Duke Cosimo?He does not ask your labor or your service;Only your presence in the city of Florence,With such advice upon his work in handAs he may ask, and you may choose to give.
You have my answer. Nothing he can offerShall tempt me to leave Rome. My work is here,And only here, the building of St. Peter's.What other things I hitherto have doneHave fallen from me, are no longer mine;I have passed on beyond them, and have left themAs milestones on the way. What lies before me,That is still mine, and while it is unfinishedNo one shall draw me from it, or persuade me,By promises of ease, or wealth, or honor,Till I behold the finished dome upriseComplete, as now I see it in my thought.
And will you paint no more?
No more.
'T is well.Sculpture is more divine, and more like Nature,That fashions all her works in high relief,And that is sculpture. This vast ball, the Earth,Was moulded out of clay, and baked in fire;Men, women, and all animals that breatheAre statues, and not paintings. Even the plants,The flowers, the fruits, the grasses, were first sculptured,And colored later. Painting is a lie,A shadow merely.
Truly, as you say,Sculpture is more than painting. It is greaterTo raise the dead to life than to createPhantoms that seem to live. The most majesticOf the three sister arts is that which builds;The eldest of them all, to whom the othersAre but the hand-maids and the servitors,Being but imitation, not creation.Henceforth I dedicate myself to her.
And no more from the marble hew those formsThat fill us all with wonder?
Many statuesWill there be room for in my work. Their stationAlready is assigned them in my mind.But things move slowly. There are hindrances,Want of material, want of means, delaysAnd interruptions, endless interferenceOf Cardinal Commissioners, and disputesAnd jealousies of artists, that annoy me.But twill persevere until the workIs wholly finished, or till I sink downSurprised by death, that unexpected guest,Who waits for no man's leisure, but steps in,Unasked and unannounced, to put a stopTo all our occupations and designs.And then perhaps I may go back to Florence;This is my answer to Duke Cosimo.
Words in this poem 16
- incredible a.
- Not credible; surpassing belief; too extraordinary and improbable to admit of belief; unlikely; marvelous; fabulous. [L. incredibilis: cf. OF. incredible. See In- not, and Credible.]
- audacity n.
- Daring spirit, resolution, or confidence; venturesomeness.
- veiled a.
- Covered by, or as by, a veil; hidden.
- diana n.
- The daughter of Jupiter and Latona; a virgin goddess who presided over hunting, chastity, and marriage; -- identified with the Greek goddess Artemis. [L. Diana.]
- averted a.
- Turned away, esp. as an expression of feeling; also, offended; unpropitious.
- ought p. p.
- Was or were under obligation to pay; owed. [Orig. the preterit of the verb to owe. OE. oughte, aughte, ahte, AS. ahte. sq. root110. See Owe.]
- idol n.
- An image or representation of anything. [OE. idole, F. idole, L. idolum, fr. Gr. Wit, and cf. Eidolon.]
- mausoleum n.
- A magnificent tomb, or stately sepulchral monument.
- inane a.
- Without contents; empty; void of sense or intelligence; purposeless; pointless; characterless; useless. [L. inanis.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- duke n.
- A leader; a chief; a prince. [F. duc, fr. L. dux, ducis, leader, commander, fr. ducere to lead; akin to AS. teón to draw; cf. AS. heretoga (here army) an army leader, general, G. herzog duke]
- hitherto adv.
- To this place; to a prescribed limit.
- wealth n.
- Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
- uprise v. i.
- To rise; to get up; to appear from below the horizon.
- henceforth adv.
- From this time forward; henceforward.
- twill v. i.
- To weave, as cloth, so as to produce the appearance of diagonal lines or ribs on the surface. [Scotch tweel; probably from LG. twillen to make double, from twi- two; akin to AS. twi-, E. twi- in twilight. See Twice, and cf. Tweed, Tweel.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
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Form and metre
Benvenuto. Hypocrite! is 120 lines in 17 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.7 syllables. 46 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 47% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -A-A---A wanting · proportionA · art · menA · satisfied · content · hand · conceptionA
- 2 --AA perceive · you · thisA · infamousA
- 5 --AA------ heathen · drapery · nakedA · attitudeA · christian · art · violation · virgins · gaze · brothel
- 7 -----A---A---BB--A-- leave · unpunished · more · fame · composition · meA · paradise · world · now · meA · myself · art · mausoleum · reasonB · manB · build · speaks · meA · says · letter
- 11 ------A-A--- offer · here · peter's · done · mine · them · meA · unfinished · meA · honor · uprise · thought
- 17 A--AA----B-B---- statuesA · station · mind · hindrancesA · delaysA · interference · disputes · me · work · downB · guest · inB · stop · designs · florence · cosimo
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| He says I show mankind that I am wanting | 11 | ····//···/˘ |
| In piety and religion, in proportion | 11 | ·/˘·˘/˘·˘/˘ |
| As I profess perfection in my art. | 10 | ··˘/˘/˘··· |
| Profess perfection? Why, 't is only men | 11 | ˘/˘/˘···/˘· |
| Like Bugiardini who are satisfied | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| With what they do. I never am content, | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| But always see the labors of my hand | 10 | ·/···/˘··· |
| Fall short of my conception. | 7 | ····˘/˘ |
| I perceive | 3 | ·˘/ |
| The malice of this creature. He would taint you | 11 | ·/˘··/˘···· |
| With heresy, and in a time like this! | 10 | ·/˘˘······ |
| 'T is infamous! | 5 | ··/˘˘ |
| I represent the angels | 7 | ··˘/·/˘ |
| Without their heavenly glory, and the saints | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Without a trace of earthly modesty. | 10 | ·····/˘/˘˘ |
| Incredible audacity! | 8 | ˘/˘˘˘/˘˘ |
| The heathen | 3 | ·/˘ |
| Veiled their Diana with some drapery, | 10 | ··˘/˘··/˘˘ |
| And when they represented Venus naked | 11 | ····˘/˘/˘/˘ |
| They made her by her modest attitude, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Appear half clothed. But I, who am a Christian, | 11 | ˘/·······/˘ |
| Do so subordinate belief to art | 10 | ··˘/˘·˘/·· |
| That I have made the very violation | 11 | ·····/˘˘˘/˘ |
| Of modesty in martyrs and in virgins | 11 | ·/˘˘·/˘··/˘ |
| A spectacle at which all men would gaze | 10 | ·/˘˘······ |
| With half-averted eyes even in a brothel. | 11 | ··˘/˘·/··/˘ |
| He is at home there, and he ought to know | 10 | ·········· |
| What men avert their eyes from in such places; | 11 | ··˘/·····/˘ |
| From the Last Judgment chiefly, I imagine. | 11 | ···/˘/˘·˘/˘ |
| But divine Providence will never leave | 10 | ·˘//˘˘·/˘· |
| The boldness of my marvellous work unpunished; | 12 | ·/˘······˘/˘ |
| And the more marvellous it is, the more | 10 | ·········· |
| 'T is sure to prove the ruin of my fame! | 10 | ······/··· |
| And finally, if in this composition | 11 | ·/˘˘····˘/˘ |
| I had pursued the instructions that he gave me | 12 | ··˘/·˘/˘···· |
| Concerning heaven and hell and paradise, | 10 | ˘/˘/···/˘· |
| In that same letter, known to all the world, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Nature would not be forced, as she is now, | 10 | /˘········ |
| To feel ashamed that she invested me | 10 | ··˘/··˘/˘· |
| With such great talent; that I stand myself | 10 | ···/˘····/ |
| A very idol in the world of art. | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| He taunts me also with the Mausoleum | 11 | ···/˘···˘/˘ |
| Of Julius, still unfinished, for the reason | 11 | ·/˘·˘/˘··/˘ |
| That men persuaded the inane old man | 10 | ··˘/˘·˘/·· |
| It was of evil augury to build | 10 | ···/˘/˘˘·· |
| His tomb while he was living; and he speaks | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Of heaps of gold this Pope bequeathed to me, | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| And calls it robbery;--that is what he says. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| What prompted such a letter? | 7 | ·/˘··/˘ |
| Vanity. | 3 | /˘˘ |
| He is a clever writer, and he likes | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| To draw his pen, and flourish it in the face | 11 | ·····/˘···· |
| Of every honest man, as swordsmen do | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Their rapiers on occasion, but to show | 10 | ·/˘·˘/˘··· |
| How skilfully they do it. Had you followed | 11 | ·········/˘ |
| The advice he gave, or even thanked him for it, | 11 | ·˘/···/···· |
| You would have seen another style of fence. | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| 'T is but his wounded vanity, and the wish | 11 | ····/˘/˘··· |
| To see his name in print. So give it not | 10 | ·········· |
| A moment's thought; it soon will be forgotten. | 11 | ·/˘·····˘/˘ |
| I will not think of it, but let it pass | 10 | ·········· |
| For a rude speech thrown at me in the street, | 10 | ·········· |
| As boys threw stones at Dante. | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| And what answer | 4 | ··/˘ |
| Shall I take back to Grand Duke Cosimo? | 10 | ·········· |
| He does not ask your labor or your service; | 11 | ·····/˘··/˘ |
| Only your presence in the city of Florence, | 12 | /˘·/˘··/˘·/˘ |
| With such advice upon his work in hand | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| As he may ask, and you may choose to give. | 10 | ·········· |
| You have my answer. Nothing he can offer | 11 | ···/˘/˘··/˘ |
| Shall tempt me to leave Rome. My work is here, | 10 | ·········· |
| And only here, the building of St. Peter's. | 11 | ·/˘··/˘··/˘ |
| What other things I hitherto have done | 10 | ·/˘··/·/·· |
| Have fallen from me, are no longer mine; | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| I have passed on beyond them, and have left them | 11 | ··········· |
| As milestones on the way. What lies before me, | 11 | ·/········· |
| That is still mine, and while it is unfinished | 11 | ········˘/˘ |
| No one shall draw me from it, or persuade me, | 11 | ········˘/· |
| By promises of ease, or wealth, or honor, | 11 | ·/˘˘·····/˘ |
| Till I behold the finished dome uprise | 10 | ··˘/·/˘·/˘ |
| Complete, as now I see it in my thought. | 10 | ˘/········ |
| And will you paint no more? | 6 | ······ |
| No more. | 2 | ·· |
| 'T is well. | 3 | ··· |
| Sculpture is more divine, and more like Nature, | 11 | /˘··˘/···/˘ |
| That fashions all her works in high relief, | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| And that is sculpture. This vast ball, the Earth, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Was moulded out of clay, and baked in fire; | 11 | ·/˘······/˘ |
| Men, women, and all animals that breathe | 10 | ·/˘··/˘˘·· |
| Are statues, and not paintings. Even the plants, | 10 | ·/···/˘/·· |
| The flowers, the fruits, the grasses, were first sculptured, | 11 | ·/···/˘··/˘ |
| And colored later. Painting is a lie, | 10 | ·/˘/˘/˘··· |
| A shadow merely. | 5 | ·/·/˘ |
| Truly, as you say, | 5 | /˘··· |
| Sculpture is more than painting. It is greater | 11 | /˘···/˘··/˘ |
| To raise the dead to life than to create | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Phantoms that seem to live. The most majestic | 11 | /˘······˘/˘ |
| Of the three sister arts is that which builds; | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| The eldest of them all, to whom the others | 11 | ·/˘······/˘ |
| Are but the hand-maids and the servitors, | 10 | ·········· |
| Being but imitation, not creation. | 11 | /˘··˘/˘·˘/˘ |
| Henceforth I dedicate myself to her. | 10 | //·/˘··/·· |
| And no more from the marble hew those forms | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| That fill us all with wonder? | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| Many statues | 4 | /˘/· |
| Will there be room for in my work. Their station | 11 | ·········/˘ |
| Already is assigned them in my mind. | 10 | ˘/˘·˘/···· |
| But things move slowly. There are hindrances, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘˘ |
| Want of material, want of means, delays | 10 | ··˘/˘···˘/ |
| And interruptions, endless interference | 11 | ··˘/˘/˘·˘/˘ |
| Of Cardinal Commissioners, and disputes | 10 | ·/˘˘/˘˘·˘/ |
| And jealousies of artists, that annoy me. | 10 | ·/˘·/˘·˘/· |
| But twill persevere until the work | 9 | ··˘˘/···· |
| Is wholly finished, or till I sink down | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Surprised by death, that unexpected guest, | 10 | ˘/····˘/˘· |
| Who waits for no man's leisure, but steps in, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Unasked and unannounced, to put a stop | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| To all our occupations and designs. | 10 | ··/·˘/˘·˘/ |
| And then perhaps I may go back to Florence; | 11 | ··˘/·····/˘ |
| This is my answer to Duke Cosimo. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
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