To an Old Mate
Old Mate! In the gusty old weather,When our hopes and our troubles were new,In the years spent in wearing out leather,I found you unselfish and true --I have gathered these verses togetherFor the sake of our friendship and you.
You may think for awhile, and with reason,Though still with a kindly regret,That I've left it full late in the seasonTo prove I remember you yet;But you'll never judge me by their treasonWho profit by friends -- and forget.
I remember, Old Man, I remember --The tracks that we followed are clear --The jovial last nights of December,The solemn first days of the year,Long tramps through the clearings and timber,Short partings on platform and pier.
I can still feel the spirit that bore us,And often the old stars will shine --I remember the last spree in chorusFor the sake of that other Lang Syne,When the tracks lay divided before us,Your path through the future and mine.
Through the frost-wind that cut like whip-lashes,Through the ever-blind haze of the drought --And in fancy at times by the flashesOf light in the darkness of doubt --I have followed the tent poles and ashesOf camps that we moved further out.
You will find in these pages a trace ofThat side of our past which was bright,And recognise sometimes the face ofA friend who has dropped out of sight --I send them along in the place ofThe letters I promised to write.
Words in this poem
- gusty a.
- Subject to, or characterized by, gusts or squalls; windy; stormy; tempestuous.
- awhile adv.
- For a while; for some time; for a short time. [Adj. a + while time, interval.]
- jovial a.
- Of or pertaining to the god, or the planet, Jupiter. [F., fr. L. Jovialis pertaining to Jove. The planet Jupiter was thought to make those born under it joyful or jovial. See Jove.]
- syne adv.
- Afterwards; since; ago. R. of Brunne. [See Since.]
- recognise v. t.
- To know again; to perceive the identity of, with a person or thing previously known; to recover or recall knowledge of. [From Recognizance; see Cognition, and cf. Reconnoiter.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
To an Old Mate is in the public domain. This text is taken from In the Days When the World Was Wide, and Other Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #214; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Henry Lawson, To an Old Mate, in In the Days When the World Was Wide (1896), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #214, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lawson-world-was-wide/to-an-old-mate.html, id L23202.
Form and metre
To an Old Mate is 36 lines in 6 stanzas of 6 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABAB, complete in 5 of its 6 stanzas. The metre is anapaestic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).
See other poems in anapaestic trimeter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABABAB weatherA · newB · leatherA · trueB · togetherA · youB
- 2 ABABAB reasonA · regretB · seasonA · yetB · treasonA · forgetB
- 3 ABAB-B rememberA · clearB · decemberA · yearB · timber · pierB
- 4 ABABAB usA · shineB · chorusA · syneB · usA · mineB
- 5 ABABAB lashesA · droughtB · flashesA · doubtB · ashesA · outB
- 6 ABABAB ofA · brightB · ofA · sightB · ofA · writeB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic trimeter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Old Mate! In the gusty old weather, | 9 | ····/˘·/˘ |
| When our hopes and our troubles were new, | 10 | ·/··/˘/˘·· |
| In the years spent in wearing out leather, | 10 | ·····/˘·/˘ |
| I found you unselfish and true -- | 8 | ········ |
| I have gathered these verses together | 10 | ··/˘·/˘˘/˘ |
| For the sake of our friendship and you. | 10 | ····/˘/˘·· |
| You may think for awhile, and with reason, | 10 | ····˘/··/˘ |
| Though still with a kindly regret, | 8 | ····/˘˘/ |
| That I've left it full late in the season | 10 | ········/˘ |
| To prove I remember you yet; | 8 | ···˘/˘·· |
| But you'll never judge me by their treason | 10 | ··/˘····/˘ |
| Who profit by friends -- and forget. | 8 | ·/˘···˘/ |
| I remember, Old Man, I remember -- | 10 | ·˘/˘···˘/˘ |
| The tracks that we followed are clear -- | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| The jovial last nights of December, | 10 | ·/˘˘···˘/˘ |
| The solemn first days of the year, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Long tramps through the clearings and timber, | 9 | ····/˘·/˘ |
| Short partings on platform and pier. | 8 | ·/˘·/··· |
| I can still feel the spirit that bore us, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| And often the old stars will shine -- | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| I remember the last spree in chorus | 10 | ·˘/˘····/˘ |
| For the sake of that other Lang Syne, | 9 | ·····/˘·· |
| When the tracks lay divided before us, | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| Your path through the future and mine. | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| Through the frost-wind that cut like whip-lashes, | 10 | ········/˘ |
| Through the ever-blind haze of the drought -- | 9 | ··/˘····· |
| And in fancy at times by the flashes | 10 | ··/˘····/˘ |
| Of light in the darkness of doubt -- | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| I have followed the tent poles and ashes | 10 | ··/˘····/˘ |
| Of camps that we moved further out. | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| You will find in these pages a trace of | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| That side of our past which was bright, | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| And recognise sometimes the face of | 9 | ·/˘·˘/··· |
| A friend who has dropped out of sight -- | 8 | ········ |
| I send them along in the place of | 9 | ···˘/···· |
| The letters I promised to write. | 8 | ·/˘·/˘·· |
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