The Shanty on the Rise
When the caravans of wool-teams climbed the ranges from the West,On a spur among the mountains stood 'The Bullock-drivers' Rest';It was built of bark and saplings, and was rather rough inside,But 'twas good enough for bushmen in the careless days that died --Just a quiet little shanty kept by 'Something-in-Disguise',As the bushmen called the landlord of the Shanty on the Rise.
City swells who 'do the Royal' would have called the Shanty low,But 'twas better far and purer than some toney pubs I know;For the patrons of the Shanty had the principles of men,And the spieler, if he struck it, wasn't welcome there again.You could smoke and drink in quiet, yarn, or else soliloquise,With a decent lot of fellows in the Shanty on the Rise.
'Twas the bullock-driver's haven when his team was on the road,And the waggon-wheels were groaning as they ploughed beneath the load;And I mind how weary teamsters struggled on while it was light,Just to camp within a cooey of the Shanty for the night;And I think the very bullocks raised their heads and fixed their eyesOn the candle in the window of the Shanty on the Rise.
And the bullock-bells were clanking from the marshes on the flatsAs we hurried to the Shanty, where we hung our dripping hats;And we took a drop of something that was brought at our desire,As we stood with steaming moleskins in the kitchen by the fire.Oh! it roared upon a fireplace of the good, old-fashioned size,When the rain came down the chimney of the Shanty on the Rise.
They got up a Christmas party in the Shanty long ago,While I camped with Jimmy Nowlett on the riverbank below;Poor old Jim was in his glory -- they'd elected him M.C.,For there wasn't such another raving lunatic as he.'Mr. Nowlett, Mr. Swaller!' shouted Something-in-Disguise,As we walked into the parlour of the Shanty on the Rise.
There is little real pleasure in the city where I am --There's a swarry round the corner with its mockery and sham;But a fellow can be happy when around the room he whirlsIn a party up the country with the jolly country girls.Why, at times I almost fancied I was dancing on the skies,When I danced with Mary Carey in the Shanty on the Rise.
Jimmy came to me and whispered, and I muttered, 'Go along!'But he shouted, 'Mr. Swaller will oblige us with a song!'And at first I said I wouldn't, and I shammed a little too,Till the girls began to whisper, 'Mr. Swallow, now, ah, DO!'So I sang a song of something 'bout the love that never dies,And the chorus shook the rafters of the Shanty on the Rise.
Jimmy burst his concertina, and the bullock-drivers wentFor the corpse of Joe the Fiddler, who was sleeping in his tent;Joe was tired and had lumbago, and he wouldn't come, he said,But the case was very urgent, so they pulled him out of bed;And they fetched him, for the bushmen knew that Something-in-DisguiseHad a cure for Joe's lumbago in the Shanty on the Rise.
Jim and I were rather quiet while escorting Mary home,'Neath the stars that hung in clusters, near and distant, from the dome;And we walked so very silent -- being lost in reverie --That we heard the settlers'-matches rustle softly on the tree;And I wondered who would win her when she said her sweet good-byes --But she died at one-and-twenty, and was buried on the Rise.
I suppose the Shanty vanished from the ranges long ago,And the girls are mostly married to the chaps I used to know;My old chums are in the distance -- some have crossed the border-line,But in fancy still their glasses chink against the rim of mine.And, upon the very centre of the greenest spot that liesIn my fondest recollection, stands the Shanty on the Rise.
Words in this poem 18
- bullock n.
- A young bull, or any male of the ox kind. [AS. bulluc a young bull. See Bull.]
- shanty n.
- A small, mean dwelling; a rough, slight building for temporary use; a hut. [Said to be fr. Ir. sean old + tig. a house.]
- soliloquise v. i.
- To utter a soliloquy; to talk to one's self.
- cooey n.
- A peculiar whistling sound made by the Australian aborigenes as a call or signal. [Of imitative origin.]
- dripping n.
- A falling in drops, or the sound so made.
- chimney n.
- A fireplace or hearth. Sir W. Raleigh.
- jimmy n.
- A short crowbar used by burglars in breaking open doors. [Cf. Jemmy.]
- oblige v. t.
- To attach, as by a bond. [OF. obligier, F.obliger, L. obligare; ob (see Ob-) + ligare to bind. See Ligament, and cf. Obligate.]
- shook v. t.
- To pack, as staves, in a shook.
- concertina n.
- A small musical imstrument on the principle of the accordion. [From It. concerto a concert.]
- went n.
- Course; way; path; journey; direction.
- corpse n.
- A human body in general, whether living or dead; -- sometimes contemptuosly. [OF. cors (sometimes written corps), F. corps, L. corpus; akin to AS. hrif womb. See Midriff, and cf. Corse, Corselet, Corps, Cuerpo.]
- fiddler n.
- One who plays on a fiddle or violin. [AS. fi.]
- lumbago n.
- A rheumatic pain in the loins and the small of the back. [L., fr. lumbus loin. See Lumbar.]
- reverie n.
- A loose or irregular train of thought occurring in musing or mediation; deep musing; daydream. [F. réverie, fr. rêver to dream, rave, be light-headed. Cf. Rave.]
- rustle v. i.
- To make a quick succession of small sounds, like the rubbing or moving of silk cloth or dry leaves. [AS. hristlan to rustle; or cf. Sw. rusta to stir, make a riot, or E. rush, v.]
- wondered a.
- Having performed wonders; able to perform wonderful things.
- centre v. i.
- To be placed in a center; to be central.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Shanty on the Rise is in the public domain. This text is taken from In the Days When the World Was Wide, and Other Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #214; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
The Shanty on the Rise is 60 lines in 10 stanzas of 6 lines each. The rhyme scheme is AABBCC, complete in 8 of its 10 stanzas. The metre is iambic octameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).
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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCC westA · restA · insideB · diedB · disguiseC · riseC
- 2 AABBCC lowA · knowA · menB · againB · soliloquiseC · riseC
- 3 AABBCC roadA · loadA · lightB · nightB · eyesC · riseC
- 4 AABBCC flatsA · hatsA · desireB · fireB · sizeC · riseC
- 5 AA--BB agoA · belowA · — · he · disguiseB · riseB
- 6 AABBCC amA · shamA · whirlsB · girlsB · skiesC · riseC
- 7 AABBCC alongA · songA · tooB · doB · diesC · riseC
- 8 AABBCC wentA · tentA · saidB · bedB · disguiseC · riseC
- 9 AA--BB homeA · domeA · reverie · tree · byesB · riseB
- 10 AABBCC agoA · knowA · lineB · mineB · liesC · riseC
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic octameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| When the caravans of wool-teams climbed the ranges from the West, | 15 | ··/˘······/˘··· |
| On a spur among the mountains stood 'The Bullock-drivers' Rest'; | 15 | ······/˘··/˘/˘· |
| It was built of bark and saplings, and was rather rough inside, | 15 | ······/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| But 'twas good enough for bushmen in the careless days that died -- | 15 | ···˘/·/˘··/˘··· |
| Just a quiet little shanty kept by 'Something-in-Disguise', | 15 | ··/˘/˘/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| As the bushmen called the landlord of the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ··/˘··/···/˘··· |
| City swells who 'do the Royal' would have called the Shanty low, | 15 | /˘····/˘····/˘· |
| But 'twas better far and purer than some toney pubs I know; | 15 | ··/˘··/˘··/˘··· |
| For the patrons of the Shanty had the principles of men, | 15 | ··/˘··/˘··/˘˘·· |
| And the spieler, if he struck it, wasn't welcome there again. | 15 | ··/˘····/˘/˘·˘/ |
| You could smoke and drink in quiet, yarn, or else soliloquise, | 15 | ······/˘···˘/˘· |
| With a decent lot of fellows in the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ··/˘··/˘··/˘··· |
| 'Twas the bullock-driver's haven when his team was on the road, | 15 | ··/˘/˘/˘······· |
| And the waggon-wheels were groaning as they ploughed beneath the load; | 15 | ······/˘······· |
| And I mind how weary teamsters struggled on while it was light, | 15 | ····/˘/˘/˘····· |
| Just to camp within a cooey of the Shanty for the night; | 14 | ·········/˘··· |
| And I think the very bullocks raised their heads and fixed their eyes | 15 | ····/˘/˘······· |
| On the candle in the window of the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ··/˘··/˘··/˘··· |
| And the bullock-bells were clanking from the marshes on the flats | 15 | ··/˘··/˘··/˘··· |
| As we hurried to the Shanty, where we hung our dripping hats; | 15 | ··/˘··/˘···//˘· |
| And we took a drop of something that was brought at our desire, | 16 | ······/˘····/˘/˘ |
| As we stood with steaming moleskins in the kitchen by the fire. | 16 | ····/˘·····/˘··/ |
| Oh! it roared upon a fireplace of the good, old-fashioned size, | 16 | ······/˘·····/˘· |
| When the rain came down the chimney of the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ······/˘··/˘··· |
| They got up a Christmas party in the Shanty long ago, | 15 | ····/˘/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| While I camped with Jimmy Nowlett on the riverbank below; | 15 | ····/˘····/˘··· |
| Poor old Jim was in his glory -- they'd elected him M.C., | 15 | ······/˘·˘/˘··· |
| For there wasn't such another raving lunatic as he. | 15 | ··/˘·˘/˘/˘/˘··· |
| 'Mr. Nowlett, Mr. Swaller!' shouted Something-in-Disguise, | 15 | /˘··/˘··/˘/˘·˘/ |
| As we walked into the parlour of the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ······/˘··/˘··· |
| There is little real pleasure in the city where I am -- | 14 | ··/˘·/˘··/˘··· |
| There's a swarry round the corner with its mockery and sham; | 15 | ······/˘··/˘˘·· |
| But a fellow can be happy when around the room he whirls | 15 | ··/˘··/˘······· |
| In a party up the country with the jolly country girls. | 15 | ··/˘··/˘··/˘/˘· |
| Why, at times I almost fancied I was dancing on the skies, | 15 | ····/·/˘··/˘··· |
| When I danced with Mary Carey in the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ····/˘/˘··/˘··· |
| Jimmy came to me and whispered, and I muttered, 'Go along!' | 15 | /˘····/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| But he shouted, 'Mr. Swaller will oblige us with a song!' | 15 | ··/˘/˘···˘/···· |
| And at first I said I wouldn't, and I shammed a little too, | 15 | ······/˘····/˘· |
| Till the girls began to whisper, 'Mr. Swallow, now, ah, DO!' | 15 | ···˘/·/˘/˘/˘··· |
| So I sang a song of something 'bout the love that never dies, | 15 | ······/˘····/˘· |
| And the chorus shook the rafters of the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ··/˘··/˘··/˘··· |
| Jimmy burst his concertina, and the bullock-drivers went | 15 | /˘··˘˘/˘··/˘/˘· |
| For the corpse of Joe the Fiddler, who was sleeping in his tent; | 15 | ······/˘··/˘··· |
| Joe was tired and had lumbago, and he wouldn't come, he said, | 15 | ··/··˘/···/˘··· |
| But the case was very urgent, so they pulled him out of bed; | 15 | ····/˘/˘······· |
| And they fetched him, for the bushmen knew that Something-in-Disguise | 15 | ······/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| Had a cure for Joe's lumbago in the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ·····˘/···/˘··· |
| Jim and I were rather quiet while escorting Mary home, | 15 | ····/˘/˘·/˘˘/˘· |
| 'Neath the stars that hung in clusters, near and distant, from the dome; | 15 | ······/˘··/˘··· |
| And we walked so very silent -- being lost in reverie -- | 15 | ····/˘/˘/˘··/˘˘ |
| That we heard the settlers'-matches rustle softly on the tree; | 15 | ····/˘/˘/˘/˘··· |
| And I wondered who would win her when she said her sweet good-byes -- | 15 | ··/˘··········· |
| But she died at one-and-twenty, and was buried on the Rise. | 15 | ······/˘··/˘··· |
| I suppose the Shanty vanished from the ranges long ago, | 15 | ·˘/·/˘/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| And the girls are mostly married to the chaps I used to know; | 15 | ····/˘/˘······· |
| My old chums are in the distance -- some have crossed the border-line, | 15 | ······/˘····/˘· |
| But in fancy still their glasses chink against the rim of mine. | 15 | ··/˘··/˘······· |
| And, upon the very centre of the greenest spot that lies | 15 | ····/˘/˘··/˘··· |
| In my fondest recollection, stands the Shanty on the Rise. | 15 | ··/˘·˘/˘··/˘··· |
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