Cameron's Heart
The diggings were just in their glory when Alister Cameron came,With recommendations, he told me, from friends and a parson 'at hame';He read me his recommendations -- he called them a part of his plant --The first one was signed by an Elder, the other by Cameron's aunt.The meenister called him 'ungodly -- a stray frae the fauld o' the Lord',And his aunt set him down as a spendthrift, 'a rebel at hame and abroad'.
He got drunk now and then and he gambled (such heroes are often the same);That's all they could say in connection with Alister Cameron's name.He was straight and he stuck to his countryand spoke with respect of his kirk;He did his full share of the cooking, and more than his share of the work.And many a poor devil then, when his strength and his money were spent,Was sure of a lecture -- and tucker, and a shakedown in Cameron's tent.
He shunned all the girls in the camp,and they said he was proof to the dart --That nothing but whisky and gaming had ever a place in his heart;He carried a packet about him, well hid, but I saw it at last,And -- well, 'tis a very old story -- the story of Cameron's past:A ring and a sprig o' white heather, a letter or two and a curl,A bit of a worn silver chain, and the portrait of Cameron's girl.
It chanced in the first of the Sixties that Ally and I and McKeanWere sinking a shaft on Mundoorin, near Fosberry's puddle-machine.The bucket we used was a big one, and rather a weight when 'twas full,Though Alister wound it up easy, for he had the strength of a bull.He hinted at heart-disease often, but, setting his fancy apart,I always believed there was nothing the matter with Cameron's heart.
One day I was working below -- I was filling the bucket with clay,When Alister cried, 'Pack it on, mon! we ought to be bottomed to-day.'He wound, and the bucket rose steady and swift to the surface untilIt reached the first log on the top,where it suddenly stopped, and hung still.I knew what was up in a moment when Cameron shouted to me:'Climb up for your life by the footholes.
And those were the last words he uttered.He groaned, for I heard him quite plain --There's nothing so awful as that when it's wrung from a workman in pain.The strength of despair was upon me; I started, and scarcely drew breath,But climbed to the top for my life in the fear of a terrible death.And there, with his waist on the handle, I saw the dead form of my mate,And over the shaft hung the bucket, suspended by Cameron's weight.
I wonder did Alister think of the scenes in the distance so dim,When Death at the windlass that morning took cruel advantage of him?He knew if the bucket rushed down it would murder or cripple his mate --His hand on the iron was closed with a grip that was stronger than Fate;He thought of my danger, not his, when he felt in his bosom the smart,And stuck to the handle in spite of the Finger of Death on his heart.
Words in this poem
- fauld n.
- The arch over the dam of a blast furnace; the tymp arch.
- rebel a.
- Pertaining to rebels or rebellion; acting in revolt; rebellious; as, rebel troops. [F. rebelle, fr. L. rebellis. See Rebel, v. t.]
- spoke n.
- The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
- kirk n.
- A church or the church, in the various senses of the word; esp., the Church of Scotland as distinguished from other reformed churches, or from the Roman Catholic Church. Jamieson. [Scot.; cf. Icel. kirkja, of Greek origin. See Church.]
- shakedown n.
- A temporary substitute for a bed, as one made on the floor or on chairs; -- perhaps originally from the shaking down of straw for this purpose.
- packet n.
- A small pack or package; a little bundle or parcel; as, a packet of letters. [F. paquet, dim. fr. LL. paccus, from the same source as E. pack. See Pack.]
- ought p. p.
- Was or were under obligation to pay; owed. [Orig. the preterit of the verb to owe. OE. oughte, aughte, ahte, AS. ahte. sq. root110. See Owe.]
- rushed a.
- Abounding or covered with rushes.
- cripple n.
- One who creeps, halts, or limps; one who has lost, or never had, the use of a limb or limbs; a lame person; hence, one who is partially disabled. [OE. cripel, crepel, crupel, AS. crypel (akin to D. kreuple, G. kr, Dan. kr, Icel. kryppill), prop., one that can not walk, but must creep, fr. AS. cre to creep.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Cameron's Heart is in the public domain. This text is taken from In the Days When the World Was Wide, and Other Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #214; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Henry Lawson, Cameron's Heart, in In the Days When the World Was Wide (1896), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #214, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lawson-world-was-wide/cameron-s-heart.html, id L23235.
Form and metre
Cameron's Heart is 46 lines in 7 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 74% of the lines. The metre is anapaestic hexameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%).
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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABB-- cameA · hameA · plantB · auntB · lord · abroad
- 2 AA-BBCC sameA · nameA · country · kirkB · workB · spentC · tentC
- 3 -AABBCC camp · dartA · heartA · lastB · pastB · curlC · girlC
- 4 AABBCC mckeanA · machineA · fullB · bullB · apartC · heartC
- 5 AAB-B-- clayA · dayA · untilB · top · stillB · me · footholes
- 6 -AABBCC uttered · plainA · painA · breathB · deathB · mateC · weightC
- 7 AABBCC dimA · himA · mateB · fateB · smartC · heartC
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic hexameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| The diggings were just in their glory when Alister Cameron came, | 17 | ·/˘····/˘·/˘˘/˘˘· |
| With recommendations, he told me, from friends and a parson 'at hame'; | 17 | ··˘˘/˘·······/˘·· |
| He read me his recommendations -- he called them a part of his plant -- | 17 | ·····˘˘/˘········ |
| The first one was signed by an Elder, the other by Cameron's aunt. | 17 | ·······/˘·/˘·/˘˘· |
| The meenister called him 'ungodly -- a stray frae the fauld o' the Lord', | 17 | ······˘/˘········ |
| And his aunt set him down as a spendthrift, 'a rebel at hame and abroad'. | 18 | ········/··/˘···˘/ |
| He got drunk now and then and he gambled (such heroes are often the same); | 18 | ········/˘·/˘·/˘·· |
| That's all they could say in connection with Alister Cameron's name. | 17 | ······˘/˘·/˘˘/˘˘· |
| He was straight and he stuck to his country | 10 | ········/˘ |
| and spoke with respect of his kirk; | 8 | ···˘/··· |
| He did his full share of the cooking, and more than his share of the work. | 17 | ·······/˘········ |
| And many a poor devil then, when his strength and his money were spent, | 17 | ·/˘··/˘······/˘·· |
| Was sure of a lecture -- and tucker, and a shakedown in Cameron's tent. | 17 | ····/˘·/˘··/··/˘· |
| He shunned all the girls in the camp, | 8 | ········ |
| and they said he was proof to the dart -- | 9 | ········· |
| That nothing but whisky and gaming had ever a place in his heart; | 17 | ·/˘·/˘·/˘·/˘····· |
| He carried a packet about him, well hid, but I saw it at last, | 17 | ·/˘·/˘··········· |
| And -- well, 'tis a very old story -- the story of Cameron's past: | 17 | ····/˘·/˘·/˘·/˘˘· |
| A ring and a sprig o' white heather, a letter or two and a curl, | 17 | ·······/˘·/˘····· |
| A bit of a worn silver chain, and the portrait of Cameron's girl. | 17 | ·····/˘···/˘·/˘˘· |
| It chanced in the first of the Sixties that Ally and I and McKean | 17 | ·······/˘·/˘···˘/ |
| Were sinking a shaft on Mundoorin, near Fosberry's puddle-machine. | 17 | ·/˘··········/˘˘/ |
| The bucket we used was a big one, and rather a weight when 'twas full, | 17 | ·/˘·······/˘····· |
| Though Alister wound it up easy, for he had the strength of a bull. | 17 | ·/˘˘···/˘········ |
| He hinted at heart-disease often, but, setting his fancy apart, | 17 | ·/˘··˘//˘·/˘·/˘˘/ |
| I always believed there was nothing the matter with Cameron's heart. | 17 | ·/˘˘/··/˘·/˘·/˘˘· |
| One day I was working below -- I was filling the bucket with clay, | 17 | ····/˘····/˘·/˘·· |
| When Alister cried, 'Pack it on, mon! we ought to be bottomed to-day.' | 17 | ·/˘˘·········/˘·· |
| He wound, and the bucket rose steady and swift to the surface until | 17 | ····/˘·/˘····/˘·· |
| It reached the first log on the top, | 8 | ········ |
| where it suddenly stopped, and hung still. | 9 | ··/˘˘···· |
| I knew what was up in a moment when Cameron shouted to me: | 17 | ·······/˘·/˘˘/˘·· |
| 'Climb up for your life by the footholes. | 9 | ········· |
| And those were the last words he uttered. | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| He groaned, for I heard him quite plain -- | 8 | ········ |
| There's nothing so awful as that when it's wrung from a workman in pain. | 17 | ·/˘·/˘·······/˘·· |
| The strength of despair was upon me; I started, and scarcely drew breath, | 17 | ···˘/·····/˘·/˘·· |
| But climbed to the top for my life in the fear of a terrible death. | 17 | ·············/˘˘· |
| And there, with his waist on the handle, I saw the dead form of my mate, | 17 | ·······/˘········ |
| And over the shaft hung the bucket, suspended by Cameron's weight. | 17 | ·······/˘˘/˘·/˘˘· |
| I wonder did Alister think of the scenes in the distance so dim, | 17 | ·/˘·/˘˘······/˘·· |
| When Death at the windlass that morning took cruel advantage of him? | 17 | ····/˘·/˘·/˘˘/˘·· |
| He knew if the bucket rushed down it would murder or cripple his mate -- | 17 | ····/˘····/˘·/˘·· |
| His hand on the iron was closed with a grip that was stronger than Fate; | 17 | ····/˘·······/˘·· |
| He thought of my danger, not his, when he felt in his bosom the smart, | 17 | ····/˘·······/˘·· |
| And stuck to the handle in spite of the Finger of Death on his heart. | 17 | ····/˘····/˘····· |
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