Mating
ROUND clouds roll in the arms of the wind,The round earth rolls in a clasp of blue sky,And see, where the budding hazels are thinned,The wild anemones lieIn undulating shivers beneath the wind.
Over the blue of the waters plyWhite ducks, a living flotilla of cloud;And, look you, floating just thereby,The blue-gleamed drake stems proudLike Abraham, whose seed should multiply.
In the lustrous gleam of the water, thereScramble seven toads across the silk, obscure leaves,Seven toads that meet in the dusk to shareThe darkness that interweavesThe sky and earth and water and live things everywhere.
Look now, through the woods where the beech-greenspurtsLike a storm of emerald snow, look, seeA great bay stallion dances, skirtsThe bushes sumptuously,Going outward now in the spring to his brief deserts.
Ah love, with your rich, warm face aglow,What sudden expectation opens youSo wide as you watch the catkins blowTheir dust from the birch on the blueLift of the pulsing wind--ah, tell me you know!
Ah, surely! Ah, sure from the golden sunA quickening, masculine gleam floats in to allUs creatures, people and flowers undone,Lying open under his thrall,As he begets the year in us. What, then, would youshun?
Why, I should think that from the earth there flyFine thrills to the neighbour stars, fine yellow beamsThrown lustily off from our full-blown, highBursting globe of dreams,To quicken the spheres that are virgin still in the sky.
Do you not hear each morsel thrillWith joy at travelling to plant itself withinThe expectant one, therein to instilNew rapture, new shape to win,From the thick of life wake up another will?
Surely, and if that I would spillThe vivid, ah, the fiery surplus of life,From off my brimming measure, to fillYou, and flush you rifeWith increase, do you call it evil, and always evil?
Words in this poem
- flotilla n.
- A little fleet, or a fleet of small vessels. [Sp. flotilla, dim. of flota fleet; akin to F. flotte, It. flotta, and F. flot wave, fr. L. fluctus, but prob. influenced by words akin to E. float. See Fluctuat]
- drake n.
- The male of the duck kind. [Akin to LG. drake, OHG. antrache, anetrecho, G. enterich, Icel. andriki, Dan. andrik, OSw. andrak, andrage, masc., and fr. AS. ened, fem., duck; akin to D. eend]
- stallion n.
- A male horse not castrated; a male horse kept for breeding. [OE. stalon, OF. estalon, F. étalon, fr. OHG. stal a stable. See Stall, n.]
- aglow adv.
- In a glow; glowing; as, cheeks aglow; the landscape all aglow. [Pref. a- + glow.]
- quickening n.
- The act or process of making or of becoming quick.
- undone a.
- Not done or performed; neglected. [Pref. un- not + done.]
- neighbour v. i.
- To dwell in the vicinity; to be a neighbor, or in the neighborhood; to be near.
- lustily adv.
- In a lusty or vigorous manner.
- spill n.
- A bit of wood split off; a splinter. [sq. root170. Cf. Spell a splinter.]
- brimming a.
- Full to the brim; overflowing.
- rife a.
- Prevailing; prevalent; abounding. [AS. rif abundant, or Icel. rifr munificent; akin to OD. riff, rijve, abundant.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Mating is in the public domain. This text is taken from Amores: Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #22531; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: D. H. Lawrence, Mating, in Amores (1916), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #22531, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lawrence-amores/mating.html, id L13590.
Form and metre
Mating is 47 lines in 9 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABABA, complete in 7 of its 9 stanzas. 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.0 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 53% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABABA windA · skyB · thinnedA · lieB · windA
- 2 ABABA plyA · cloudB · therebyA · proudB · multiplyA
- 3 ABABA thereA · leavesB · shareA · interweavesB · everywhereA
- 4 -A-A-A green · spurtsA · see · skirtsA · sumptuously · desertsA
- 5 ABABA aglowA · youB · blowA · blueB · knowA
- 6 ABAB-A sunA · allB · undoneA · thrallB · you · shunA
- 7 ABABA flyA · beamsB · highA · dreamsB · skyA
- 8 ABABA thrillA · withinB · instilA · winB · willA
- 9 ABABA spillA · lifeB · fillA · rifeB · evilA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| ROUND clouds roll in the arms of the wind, | 9 | ········· |
| The round earth rolls in a clasp of blue sky, | 10 | ·········· |
| And see, where the budding hazels are thinned, | 10 | ····/˘/˘·· |
| The wild anemones lie | 6 | ··/˘·· |
| In undulating shivers beneath the wind. | 11 | ·/˘·˘/˘···· |
| Over the blue of the waters ply | 9 | ······/˘· |
| White ducks, a living flotilla of cloud; | 10 | ···/˘˘/˘·· |
| And, look you, floating just thereby, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| The blue-gleamed drake stems proud | 6 | ······ |
| Like Abraham, whose seed should multiply. | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| In the lustrous gleam of the water, there | 10 | ··/˘···/˘· |
| Scramble seven toads across the silk, obscure leaves, | 11 | /˘/·˘/··˘/· |
| Seven toads that meet in the dusk to share | 10 | /˘········ |
| The darkness that interweaves | 7 | ·/˘··˘/ |
| The sky and earth and water and live things everywhere. | 13 | ·····/˘···/˘· |
| Look now, through the woods where the beech-green | 9 | ········· |
| spurts | 1 | · |
| Like a storm of emerald snow, look, see | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| A great bay stallion dances, skirts | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| The bushes sumptuously, | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Going outward now in the spring to his brief deserts. | 11 | //·······/˘ |
| Ah love, with your rich, warm face aglow, | 9 | ·······˘/ |
| What sudden expectation opens you | 10 | ·/˘·˘/˘/˘· |
| So wide as you watch the catkins blow | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Their dust from the birch on the blue | 8 | ········ |
| Lift of the pulsing wind--ah, tell me you know! | 11 | ···/˘······ |
| Ah, surely! Ah, sure from the golden sun | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| A quickening, masculine gleam floats in to all | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Us creatures, people and flowers undone, | 10 | ·/˘/˘·/˘˘/ |
| Lying open under his thrall, | 8 | /˘/˘···· |
| As he begets the year in us. What, then, would you | 12 | ··˘/········ |
| shun? | 1 | · |
| Why, I should think that from the earth there fly | 10 | ·········· |
| Fine thrills to the neighbour stars, fine yellow beams | 11 | ····/˘··/˘· |
| Thrown lustily off from our full-blown, high | 10 | ·/˘˘··/··· |
| Bursting globe of dreams, | 5 | /˘··· |
| To quicken the spheres that are virgin still in the sky. | 13 | ·/˘····/˘···· |
| Do you not hear each morsel thrill | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| With joy at travelling to plant itself within | 11 | ···/˘··˘/·· |
| The expectant one, therein to instil | 10 | ·˘/˘······ |
| New rapture, new shape to win, | 7 | ·/˘···· |
| From the thick of life wake up another will? | 11 | ·······˘/˘· |
| Surely, and if that I would spill | 8 | /˘······ |
| The vivid, ah, the fiery surplus of life, | 11 | ·/˘··/˘/˘·· |
| From off my brimming measure, to fill | 9 | ···/˘/˘·· |
| You, and flush you rife | 5 | ····· |
| With increase, do you call it evil, and always evil? | 12 | ·/·····/·/·/ |
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