The Revenge of Hamish

Sidney Lanier (1842–1881) · 1884

iambic pentameter · ABBA · 112 lines · from Poems

It was three slim does and a ten-tined buck in the bracken lay;And all of a sudden the sinister smell of a man,Awaft on a wind-shift, wavered and ranDown the hill-side and sifted along through the bracken and passed that way.

Then Nan got a-tremble at nostril; she was the daintiest doe;In the print of her velvet flank on the velvet fernShe reared, and rounded her ears in turn.Then the buck leapt up, and his head as a king's to a crown did go

Full high in the breeze, and he stood as if Death had the form of a deer;And the two slim does long lazily stretching arose,For their day-dream slowlier came to a close,Till they woke and were still, breath-bound with waiting and wonder and fear.

Then Alan the huntsman sprang over the hillock, the hounds shot by,The does and the ten-tined buck made a marvellous bound,The hounds swept after with never a sound,But Alan loud winded his horn in sign that the quarry was nigh.

For at dawn of that day proud Maclean of Lochbuy to the hunt had waxed wild,And he cursed at old Alan till Alan fared off with the houndsFor to drive him the deer to the lower glen-grounds:"I will kill a red deer," quoth Maclean, "in the sight of the wifeand the child."

So gayly he paced with the wife and the child to his chosen stand;But he hurried tall Hamish the henchman ahead: "Go turn," --Cried Maclean -- "if the deer seek to cross to the burn,Do thou turn them to me: nor fail, lest thy back be red as thy hand."

Now hard-fortuned Hamish, half blown of his breath with the heightof the hill,Was white in the face when the ten-tined buck and the doesDrew leaping to burn-ward; huskily roseHis shouts, and his nether lip twitched, and his legs were o'er-weakfor his will.

So the deer darted lightly by Hamish and bounded away to the burn.But Maclean never bating his watch tarried waiting belowStill Hamish hung heavy with fear for to goAll the space of an hour; then he went, and his face was greenish and stern,

And his eye sat back in the socket, and shrunken the eyeballs shone,As withdrawn from a vision of deeds it were shame to see."Now, now, grim henchman, what is't with thee?"Brake Maclean, and his wrath rose red as a beacon the wind hath upblown.

"Three does and a ten-tined buck made out," spoke Hamish, full mild,"And I ran for to turn, but my breath it was blown, and they passed;I was weak, for ye called ere I broke me my fast."Cried Maclean: "Now a ten-tined buck in the sight of the wife and the child

I had killed if the gluttonous kern had not wrought me a snail's own wrong!"Then he sounded, and down came kinsmen and clansmen all:"Ten blows, for ten tine, on his back let fall,And reckon no stroke if the blood follow not at the bite of thong!"

So Hamish made bare, and took him his strokes; at the last he smiled."Now I'll to the burn," quoth Maclean, "for it still may be,If a slimmer-paunched henchman will hurry with me,I shall kill me the ten-tined buck for a gift to the wife and the child!"

Then the clansmen departed, by this path and that; and over the hillSped Maclean with an outward wrath for an inward shame;And that place of the lashing full quiet became;And the wife and the child stood sad; and bloody-backed Hamish sat still.

But look! red Hamish has risen; quick about and about turns he."There is none betwixt me and the crag-top!" he screams under breath.Then, livid as Lazarus lately from death,He snatches the child from the mother, and clambers the crag toward the sea.

Now the mother drops breath; she is dumb, and her heart goes dead for a space,Till the motherhood, mistress of death, shrieks, shrieks through the glen,And that place of the lashing is live with men,And Maclean, and the gillie that told him, dash up in a desperate race.

Not a breath's time for asking; an eye-glance reveals all the tale untold.They follow mad Hamish afar up the crag toward the sea,And the lady cries: "Clansmen, run for a fee! --Yon castle and lands to the two first hands that shall hook him and hold

Fast Hamish back from the brink!" -- and ever she flies up the steep,And the clansmen pant, and they sweat, and they jostle and strain.But, mother, 'tis vain; but, father, 'tis vain;Stern Hamish stands bold on the brink, and dangles the child o'er the deep.

Now a faintness falls on the men that run, and they all stand still.And the wife prays Hamish as if he were God, on her knees,Crying: "Hamish! O Hamish! but please, but pleaseFor to spare him!" and Hamish still dangles the child, with a wavering will.

On a sudden he turns; with a sea-hawk scream, and a gibe, and a song,Cries: "So; I will spare ye the child if, in sight of ye all,Ten blows on Maclean's bare back shall fall,And ye reckon no stroke if the blood follow not at the bite of the thong!"

Then Maclean he set hardly his tooth to his lip that his tooth was red,Breathed short for a space, said: "Nay, but it never shall be!Let me hurl off the damnable hound in the sea!"But the wife: "Can Hamish go fish us the child from the sea, if dead?

Say yea! -- Let them lash ME, Hamish?" -- "Nay!" -- "Husband,the lashing will heal;But, oh, who will heal me the bonny sweet bairn in his grave?Could ye cure me my heart with the death of a knave?Quick! Love! I will bare thee -- so -- kneel!" Then Maclean 'gan slowlyto kneel

With never a word, till presently downward he jerked to the earth.Then the henchman -- he that smote Hamish -- would tremble and lag;"Strike, hard!" quoth Hamish, full stern, from the crag;Then he struck him, and "One!" sang Hamish, and danced with the childin his mirth.

And no man spake beside Hamish; he counted each stroke with a song.When the last stroke fell, then he moved him a pace down the height,And he held forth the child in the heartaching sightOf the mother, and looked all pitiful grave, as repenting a wrong.

And there as the motherly arms stretched out with the thanksgiving prayer --And there as the mother crept up with a fearful swift pace,Till her finger nigh felt of the bairnie's face --In a flash fierce Hamish turned round and lifted the child in the air,

And sprang with the child in his arms from the horrible height in the sea,Shrill screeching, "Revenge!" in the wind-rush; and pallid Maclean,Age-feeble with anger and impotent pain,Crawled up on the crag, and lay flat, and locked hold of dead rootsof a tree --

And gazed hungrily o'er, and the blood from his back drip-drippedin the brine,And a sea-hawk flung down a skeleton fish as he flew,And the mother stared white on the waste of blue,And the wind drove a cloud to seaward, and the sun began to shine.

Words in this poem 35
bracken n.
A brake or fern. [OE. braken, AS. bracce. See 2d Brake, n.]
huntsman n.
One who hunts, or who practices hunting.
cursed a.
Deserving a curse; execrable; hateful; detestable; abominable.
quoth v. t.
Said; spoke; uttered; -- used only in the first and third persons in the past tenses, and always followed by its nominative, the word or words said being the object; as, quoth I. quoth he. [AS.cweedhan, imp cwæedh, pl. cwædon; akin to OS. queedhan, OHG. quethan, quedan, Icel. kveedha, Goth. qiþan. sq. root22. Cf. Bequeath.]
gayly adv.
With mirth and frolic; merrily; blithely; gleefully.
henchman n.
An attendant; a servant; a follower. Now chiefly used as a political cant term. [OE. hencheman, henxman; prob. fr. OE. & AS. hengest horse + E. man, and meaning, a groom. AS. hengest is akin to D. & G. hengst stallion, OHG. hengist horse, ge]
ahead adv.
In or to the front; in advance; onward. [Pref. a- + head.]
huskily adv.
In a husky manner; dryly. [From Husky.]
nether a.
Situated down or below; lying beneath, or in the lower part; having a lower position; belonging to the region below; lower; under; -- opposed to upper. [OE. nethere, neithere, AS. ni, fr. the adv. ni downward; akin to neo below, beneath, D. neder down, G. nieder, Sw. nedre below, nether, a. & adv., and also to S]
bating prep.
With the exception of; excepting. [Strictly p. pr. of Bat to abate.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
broke v. i.
To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
kern v. i.
To harden, as corn in ripening. Carew. [Cf. G. kern kernel, grain; akin to E. corn. See Corn, Kernel.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
lashing n.
The act of one who, or that which, lashes; castigation; chastisement. South. Lashing out, a striking out; also, extravagance.
betwixt prep.
In the space which separates; between. [OE. betwix, bitwix, rarely bitwixt, AS. betweox, betweohs, betweoh, betwih; pref. be- by + a form fr. AS. twa two. See Between.]
crag n.
The neck or throat [A form of craw: cf. D. kraag neck, collar, G. kragen. See Craw.]
motherhood n.
The state of being a mother; the character or office of a mother.
gillie n.
A boy or young man; a manservant; a male attendant, in the Scottish Highlands. [Gael. gille, giolla, boy, lad.]
desperate a.
Without hope; given to despair; hopeless. [L. desperatus, p. p. of desperare. See Despair, and cf. Desperado.]
untold a.
Not told; not related; not revealed; as, untold secrets.
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
brink n.
The edge, margin, or border of a steep place, as of a precipice; a bank or edge, as of a river or pit; a verge; a border; as, the brink of a chasm. Also Fig. [Dan. brink edge, verge; akin to Sw. brink declivity, hill, Icel. brekka; cf. LG. brink a grassy hill, W. bryn hill, bryncyn hillock.]
pant v. i.
To breathe quickly or in a labored manner, as after exertion or from eagerness or excitement; to respire with heaving of the breast; to gasp. [Cf. F. panteler to gasp for breath, OF. panteisier to be breathless, F. pantois out of breath; perh. akin to E. phantom, the verb prob. orig. meaning, to have t]
faintness n.
The state of being faint; loss of strength, or of consciousness, and self-control.
damnable a.
Liable to damnation; deserving, or for which one deserves, to be damned; of a damning nature. [L. damnabilis, fr. damnare: cf. F. damnable. See Damn.]
bonny a.
Handsome; beautiful; pretty; attractively lively and graceful. [OE. boni, prob. fr. F. bon, fem. bonne, good, fr. L. bonus good. See Bounty, and cf. Bonus, Boon.]
knave n.
A boy; especially, a boy servant. Wyclif. [OE., boy, servant, knave, AS. cnafa boy, youth; cf. AS. cnapa boy, youth, D. kna, G. knabe boy, knappe esquire, Icel. knapi, Sw. knape esquire, knäfvel knave.]
kneel v. i.
To bend the knee; to fall or rest on the knees; -- sometimes with down. [OE. knelen, cneolien; akin to D. knielen, Dan. knæle. See Knee.]
presently adv.
At present; at this time; now.
thanksgiving n.
The act of rending thanks, or expressing gratitude for favors or mercies.
hungrily adv.
In a hungry manner; voraciously. [From Hunger.]
drove n.
A collection of cattle driven, or cattle collected for driving; a number of animals, as oxen, sheep, or swine, driven in a body. [AS. draf, fr. drifan to drive. See Drive.]
seaward a.
Directed or situated toward the sea. Donne.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

The Revenge of Hamish is 112 lines in 26 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABBA, complete in 20 of its 26 stanzas. 84% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 13.2 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 19% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA layA · manB · ranB · wayA
  2. 2 ABBA doeA · fernB · turnB · goA
  3. 3 ABBA deerA · aroseB · closeB · fearA
  4. 4 ABBA byA · boundB · soundB · nighA
  5. 5 ABB-A wildA · houndsB · groundsB · wife · childA
  6. 6 ABBA standA · turnB · burnB · handA
  7. 7 -A---A height · hillA · does · rose · weak · willA
  8. 8 ABBA burnA · belowB · goB · sternA
  9. 9 ABBA shoneA · seeB · theeB · upblownA
  10. 10 ABBA mildA · passedB · fastB · childA
  11. 11 ABBA wrongA · allB · fallB · thongA
  12. 12 ABBA smiledA · beB · meB · childA
  13. 13 ABBA hillA · shameB · becameB · stillA
  14. 14 ABBA heA · breathB · deathB · seaA
  15. 15 ABBA spaceA · glenB · menB · raceA
  16. 16 ABBA untoldA · seaB · feeB · holdA
  17. 17 ABBA steepA · strainB · vainB · deepA
  18. 18 ABBA stillA · kneesB · pleaseB · willA
  19. 19 ABBA songA · allB · fallB · thongA
  20. 20 ABBA redA · beB · seaB · deadA
  21. 21 -ABB-A husband · healA · graveB · knaveB · slowly · kneelA
  22. 22 ABB-A earthA · lagB · cragB · child · mirthA
  23. 23 ABBA songA · heightB · sightB · wrongA
  24. 24 ABBA prayerA · paceB · faceB · airA
  25. 25 ABB-A seaA · macleanB · painB · roots · treeA
  26. 26 -ABBA dripped · brineA · flewB · blueB · shineA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
It was three slim does and a ten-tined buck in the bracken lay;15············/˘·
And all of a sudden the sinister smell of a man,13····/˘·/˘····
Awaft on a wind-shift, wavered and ran10······/˘··
Down the hill-side and sifted along through the bracken and passed that way.17·····/˘˘/··/˘····
Then Nan got a-tremble at nostril; she was the daintiest doe;15····/˘·/˘······
In the print of her velvet flank on the velvet fern13·····/˘···/˘·
She reared, and rounded her ears in turn.10··˘·/˘····
Then the buck leapt up, and his head as a king's to a crown did go16················
Full high in the breeze, and he stood as if Death had the form of a deer;17·················
And the two slim does long lazily stretching arose,12······/˘/˘˘/
For their day-dream slowlier came to a close,10··········
Till they woke and were still, breath-bound with waiting and wonder and fear.16·········/˘·/˘··
Then Alan the huntsman sprang over the hillock, the hounds shot by,15·/˘·/˘···/˘····
The does and the ten-tined buck made a marvellous bound,13·············
The hounds swept after with never a sound,10······/˘··
But Alan loud winded his horn in sign that the quarry was nigh.16·/˘·/˘······/˘··
For at dawn of that day proud Maclean of Lochbuy to the hunt had waxed wild,18·······˘/·········
And he cursed at old Alan till Alan fared off with the hounds15·····/˘·/˘·····
For to drive him the deer to the lower glen-grounds:11········/··
"I will kill a red deer," quoth Maclean, "in the sight of the wife15·······˘/······
and the child."3···
So gayly he paced with the wife and the child to his chosen stand;16·/˘··········/˘·
But he hurried tall Hamish the henchman ahead: "Go turn," --14··/˘·/˘·/˘˘/··
Cried Maclean -- "if the deer seek to cross to the burn,12·˘/·········
Do thou turn them to me: nor fail, lest thy back be red as thy hand."16················
Now hard-fortuned Hamish, half blown of his breath with the height14··/˘/˘········
of the hill,3···
Was white in the face when the ten-tined buck and the does13·············
Drew leaping to burn-ward; huskily rose10·/˘···/˘˘·
His shouts, and his nether lip twitched, and his legs were o'er-weak14····/˘········
for his will.3···
So the deer darted lightly by Hamish and bounded away to the burn.18···/˘/˘·/˘·/˘˘/···
But Maclean never bating his watch tarried waiting below13·˘///˘···/˘··
Still Hamish hung heavy with fear for to go11·/˘·/˘·····
All the space of an hour; then he went, and his face was greenish and stern,17·····/·······/˘··
And his eye sat back in the socket, and shrunken the eyeballs shone,16·······/˘·/˘·/··
As withdrawn from a vision of deeds it were shame to see.14·˘/··/˘·······
"Now, now, grim henchman, what is't with thee?"9···/˘····
Brake Maclean, and his wrath rose red as a beacon the wind hath upblown.17·˘/·······/˘·····
"Three does and a ten-tined buck made out," spoke Hamish, full mild,14··········/˘··
"And I ran for to turn, but my breath it was blown, and they passed;15···············
I was weak, for ye called ere I broke me my fast."12············
Cried Maclean: "Now a ten-tined buck in the sight of the wife and the child17·˘/··············
I had killed if the gluttonous kern had not wrought me a snail's own wrong!"16·····/˘·········
Then he sounded, and down came kinsmen and clansmen all:13··/˘·········
"Ten blows, for ten tine, on his back let fall,10··········
And reckon no stroke if the blood follow not at the bite of thong!"16·/˘·····/˘······
So Hamish made bare, and took him his strokes; at the last he smiled.15·/˘············
"Now I'll to the burn," quoth Maclean, "for it still may be,13······˘/·····
If a slimmer-paunched henchman will hurry with me,12··/˘·/˘·/˘··
I shall kill me the ten-tined buck for a gift to the wife and the child!"17·················
Then the clansmen departed, by this path and that; and over the hill16····˘/˘·········
Sped Maclean with an outward wrath for an inward shame;12·˘/··/···/˘·
And that place of the lashing full quiet became;11·····/˘·/˘/
And the wife and the child stood sad; and bloody-backed Hamish sat still.16·········/˘·/˘··
But look! red Hamish has risen; quick about and about turns he.16···/˘·/˘········
"There is none betwixt me and the crag-top!" he screams under breath.15···˘/··········
Then, livid as Lazarus lately from death,10·/˘·/˘/˘··
He snatches the child from the mother, and clambers the crag toward the sea.18·/˘····/˘·/˘······
Now the mother drops breath; she is dumb, and her heart goes dead for a space,17··/˘·············
Till the motherhood, mistress of death, shrieks, shrieks through the glen,14··/˘·/˘·······
And that place of the lashing is live with men,11·····/˘····
And Maclean, and the gillie that told him, dash up in a desperate race.17·˘/··/˘·······/˘·
Not a breath's time for asking; an eye-glance reveals all the tale untold.17·····/˘···˘/···˘/
They follow mad Hamish afar up the crag toward the sea,15·/˘·/˘˘/·······
And the lady cries: "Clansmen, run for a fee! --11··/˘·······
Yon castle and lands to the two first hands that shall hook him and hold16·/˘·············
Fast Hamish back from the brink!" -- and ever she flies up the steep,14·/˘·····/·····
And the clansmen pant, and they sweat, and they jostle and strain.14··········/˘··
But, mother, 'tis vain; but, father, 'tis vain;10·/˘···/˘··
Stern Hamish stands bold on the brink, and dangles the child o'er the deep.16·/˘······/˘·····
Now a faintness falls on the men that run, and they all stand still.15··/˘···········
And the wife prays Hamish as if he were God, on her knees,14····/˘········
Crying: "Hamish! O Hamish! but please, but please11/˘/˘·/˘····
For to spare him!" and Hamish still dangles the child, with a wavering will.17·····/˘·/˘····/˘·
On a sudden he turns; with a sea-hawk scream, and a gibe, and a song,17··/˘·············
Cries: "So; I will spare ye the child if, in sight of ye all,14··············
Ten blows on Maclean's bare back shall fall,9···˘/····
And ye reckon no stroke if the blood follow not at the bite of the thong!"18··/˘·····/˘·······
Then Maclean he set hardly his tooth to his lip that his tooth was red,17·˘/··/˘··········
Breathed short for a space, said: "Nay, but it never shall be!12·········/··
Let me hurl off the damnable hound in the sea!"12·····/˘˘····
But the wife: "Can Hamish go fish us the child from the sea, if dead?16····/˘··········
Say yea! -- Let them lash ME, Hamish?" -- "Nay!" -- "Husband,11······/˘·/˘
the lashing will heal;5·/˘··
But, oh, who will heal me the bonny sweet bairn in his grave?14·······/˘·····
Could ye cure me my heart with the death of a knave?12············
Quick! Love! I will bare thee -- so -- kneel!" Then Maclean 'gan slowly14·········˘/·/˘
to kneel2··
With never a word, till presently downward he jerked to the earth.13·/···/˘/·····
Then the henchman -- he that smote Hamish -- would tremble and lag;14··/˘···/˘·/˘··
"Strike, hard!" quoth Hamish, full stern, from the crag;10···/˘·····
Then he struck him, and "One!" sang Hamish, and danced with the child14·······/˘·····
in his mirth.3···
And no man spake beside Hamish; he counted each stroke with a song.16····˘//˘·/˘·····
When the last stroke fell, then he moved him a pace down the height,14··············
And he held forth the child in the heartaching sight12········/·˘·
Of the mother, and looked all pitiful grave, as repenting a wrong.16··/˘···/˘··˘/˘··
And there as the motherly arms stretched out with the thanksgiving prayer --15····/˘······/˘·
And there as the mother crept up with a fearful swift pace,14····/˘····/˘··
Till her finger nigh felt of the bairnie's face --10··/˘······
In a flash fierce Hamish turned round and lifted the child in the air,16····/˘···/˘·····
And sprang with the child in his arms from the horrible height in the sea,16··········/˘····
Shrill screeching, "Revenge!" in the wind-rush; and pallid Maclean,14·/˘˘/·····/˘˘/
Age-feeble with anger and impotent pain,10·/˘·/˘·/˘·
Crawled up on the crag, and lay flat, and locked hold of dead roots14··············
of a tree --3···
And gazed hungrily o'er, and the blood from his back drip-dripped13··/˘·········
in the brine,3···
And a sea-hawk flung down a skeleton fish as he flew,13·······/˘····
And the mother stared white on the waste of blue,11··/˘·······
And the wind drove a cloud to seaward, and the sun began to shine.16·······/˘···˘/··

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