Ronsard: To the Moon

Various, translated by Andrew Lang · 1872

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from Ballads and Lyrics of Old France

HIDE this one night thy crescent, kindly Moon;So shall Endymion faithful prove, and restLoving and unawakened on thy breast;So shall no foul enchanter importuneThy quiet course; for now the night is boon,And through the friendly night unseen I fare,Who dread the face of foemen unaware,And watch of hostile spies in the bright noon.Thou knowest, Moon, the bitter power of Love;’Tis told how shepherd Pan found ways to move,For little price, thy heart; and of your grace,Sweet stars, be kind to this not alien fire,Because on earth ye did not scorn desire,Bethink ye, now ye hold your heavenly place.

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
enchanter n.
One who enchants; a sorcerer or magician; also, one who delights as by an enchantment. [Cf. F. enchanteur.]
importune a.
Inopportune; unseasonable. [F. importun, L. importunus; pref. im- not + a derivative from the root of portus harbor, importunus therefore orig. meaning, hard of access. See Port harbor, an]
boon n.
A prayer or petition. [OE. bone, boin, a petition, fr. Icel. b; akin to Sw. & Dan. b, AS. b, and perh. to E. ban; but influenced by F. bon good, fr. L. bonus. Ban, Bounty.]
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
unaware a.
Not aware; not noticing; giving no heed; thoughtless; inattentive.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Ronsard: To the Moon is in the public domain. This text is taken from Ballads and Lyrics of Old France, with Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #795, the Andrew Lang translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, Ronsard: To the Moon, in Ballads and Lyrics of Old France (1872), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #795, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lang-old-france/to-the-moon.html, id L26897.

Form and metre

Ronsard: To the Moon is 14 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABB-ACCADDEFFE moonA · restB · breastB · importune · boonA · fareC · unawareC · noonA · loveD · moveD · graceE · fireF · desireF · placeE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
HIDE this one night thy crescent, kindly Moon;10·····/˘/˘·
So shall Endymion faithful prove, and rest10·····/˘···
Loving and unawakened on thy breast;10/˘········
So shall no foul enchanter importune10····˘/˘···
Thy quiet course; for now the night is boon,10·/˘·······
And through the friendly night unseen I fare,10···/˘·˘/··
Who dread the face of foemen unaware,10········˘/
And watch of hostile spies in the bright noon.10···/˘·····
Thou knowest, Moon, the bitter power of Love;10·/˘··/˘/··
’Tis told how shepherd Pan found ways to move,10···/˘·····
For little price, thy heart; and of your grace,10·/˘·······
Sweet stars, be kind to this not alien fire,10·······/˘/
Because on earth ye did not scorn desire,11········˘/˘
Bethink ye, now ye hold your heavenly place.10˘/·····/˘·

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