Ronsard: His Lady’s Death

Various, translated by Andrew Lang · 1872

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from Ballads and Lyrics of Old France

TWAIN that were foes, while Mary lived, are fled;One laurel-crowned abides in heaven, and oneBeneath the earth has fared, a fallen sun,A light of love among the loveless dead.The first is Chastity, that vanquishedThe archer Love, that held joint emperyWith the sweet beauty that made war on me,When laughter of lips with laughing eyes was wed.

Their strife the Fates have closed, with stern control,The earth holds her fair body, and her soulAn angel with glad angels triumpheth;Love has no more that he can do; desireIs buried, and my heart a faded fire,And for Death’s sake, I am in love with Death.

Words in this poem

twain a.
Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]
loveless a.
Void of love; void of tenderness or kindness. Milton. Shelton.
empery n.
Empire; sovereignty; dominion. [L. imperium, influenced by OF. emperie, empire. See Empire.]
strife n.
The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Ronsard: His Lady’s Death is in the public domain. This text is taken from Ballads and Lyrics of Old France, with Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #795, the Andrew Lang translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, Ronsard: His Lady’s Death, in Ballads and Lyrics of Old France (1872), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #795, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lang-old-france/his-lady-s-death.html, id L26902.

Form and metre

Ronsard: His Lady’s Death is 14 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA---A fledA · oneB · sunB · deadA · vanquished · empery · me · wedA
  2. 2 AABCCB controlA · soulA · triumphethB · desireC · fireC · deathB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
TWAIN that were foes, while Mary lived, are fled;10·····/˘···
One laurel-crowned abides in heaven, and one10·/˘·˘/·/··
Beneath the earth has fared, a fallen sun,10·······/˘·
A light of love among the loveless dead.10·······/˘·
The first is Chastity, that vanquished10···/˘˘·/˘˘
The archer Love, that held joint empery10·/˘····/˘˘
With the sweet beauty that made war on me,10···/˘·····
When laughter of lips with laughing eyes was wed.11·/˘···/˘···
Their strife the Fates have closed, with stern control,10········˘/
The earth holds her fair body, and her soul10·····/˘···
An angel with glad angels triumpheth;10·/˘··/˘/˘˘
Love has no more that he can do; desire11········˘/˘
Is buried, and my heart a faded fire,11·/˘····/˘/˘
And for Death’s sake, I am in love with Death.10··········

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