The Deep-Sea Cables

Rudyard Kipling (1865–1936) · 1889–1896

anapaestic pentameter · ABAB · 12 lines · from Verses 1889–1896

The wrecks dissolve above us; their dust drops down from afar --Down to the dark, to the utter dark, where the blind white sea-snakes are.There is no sound, no echo of sound, in the deserts of the deep,Or the great gray level plains of ooze where the shell-burred cables creep.

Here in the womb of the world -- here on the tie-ribs of earthWords, and the words of men, flicker and flutter and beat --Warning, sorrow and gain, salutation and mirth --For a Power troubles the Still that has neither voice nor feet.

They have wakened the timeless Things; they have killed their father Time;Joining hands in the gloom, a league from the last of the sun.Hush! Men talk to-day o'er the waste of the ultimate slime,And a new Word runs between: whispering, “Let us be one!”

Words in this poem

afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
womb n.
The belly; the abdomen. [OE. wombe, wambe, AS. wamb, womb; akin to D. wam belly, OS. & OHG. wamba, G. wamme, wampe, Icel. vömb, Sw. v&mb, Dan. vom, Goth. wamba.]
flicker v. i.
To flutter; to flap the wings without flying. [OE. flikeren, flekeren, to flutter, AS. flicerian, flicorian, cf. D. flikkeren to sparkle. Flacker.]
timeless a.
Done at an improper time; unseasonable; untimely.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Deep-Sea Cables is in the public domain. This text is taken from Verses 1889-1896, Project Gutenberg ebook #323; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Rudyard Kipling, The Deep-Sea Cables, in Verses 1889–1896 (1889–1896), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #323, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/kipling-verses/the-deep-sea-cables.html, id L16790.

Form and metre

The Deep-Sea Cables is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 2 of its 3 stanzas. The metre is anapaestic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 75%). 87% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 14.2 syllables. 8% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in anapaestic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB afarA · areA · deepB · creepB
  2. 2 ABAB earthA · beatB · mirthA · feetB
  3. 3 ABAB timeA · sunB · slimeA · oneB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The wrecks dissolve above us; their dust drops down from afar --14··˘/········˘/
Down to the dark, to the utter dark, where the blind white sea-snakes are.16······/˘········
There is no sound, no echo of sound, in the deserts of the deep,16·····/˘····/˘···
Or the great gray level plains of ooze where the shell-burred cables creep.16····/˘·······/˘·
Here in the womb of the world -- here on the tie-ribs of earth14··············
Words, and the words of men, flicker and flutter and beat --13······/˘·/˘··
Warning, sorrow and gain, salutation and mirth --12/˘/˘········
For a Power troubles the Still that has neither voice nor feet.14··//˘····/˘···
They have wakened the timeless Things; they have killed their father Time;15··/˘·/˘·····/˘·
Joining hands in the gloom, a league from the last of the sun.14/˘············
Hush! Men talk to-day o'er the waste of the ultimate slime,13··········/˘·
And a new Word runs between: whispering, “Let us be one!”13·······/˘····

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