The Oxen

Rudyard Kipling (1865–1936) · 1912

iambic pentameter · ABAB · 8 lines · from Songs from Books

The torn boughs trailing o'er the tusks aslant,The saplings reeling in the path he trod,Declare his might--our lord the Elephant,Chief of the ways of God.

The black bulk heaving where the oxen pant,The bowed head toiling where the guns careen,Declare our might--our slave the ElephantAnd servant of the Queen.

Words in this poem

aslant adv.
Toward one side; in a slanting direction; obliquely. [Pref. a- + slant.]
pant v. i.
To breathe quickly or in a labored manner, as after exertion or from eagerness or excitement; to respire with heaving of the breast; to gasp. [Cf. F. panteler to gasp for breath, OF. panteisier to be breathless, F. pantois out of breath; perh. akin to E. phantom, the verb prob. orig. meaning, to have t]
careen v. t.
To cause (a vessel) to lean over so that she floats on one side, leaving the other side out of water and accessible for repairs below the water line; to case to be off the keel. [OF. cariner, F. caréner, fr. OF. carène, the bottom of a ship, keel, fr. L. carina.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Oxen is in the public domain. This text is taken from Songs from Books, Project Gutenberg ebook #15529; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Rudyard Kipling, The Oxen, in Songs from Books (1912), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #15529, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/kipling-songs-from-books/the-oxen.html, id L20347.

Form and metre

The Oxen is 8 lines in 2 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB aslantA · trodB · elephantA · godB
  2. 2 ABAB pantA · careenB · elephantA · queenB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The torn boughs trailing o'er the tusks aslant,10···/˘···˘/
The saplings reeling in the path he trod,10·/˘/˘·····
Declare his might--our lord the Elephant,11˘/··/˘··/˘˘
Chief of the ways of God.6······
The black bulk heaving where the oxen pant,10···/˘··/˘·
The bowed head toiling where the guns careen,10···/˘···˘/
Declare our might--our slave the Elephant11˘//·/˘··/˘˘
And servant of the Queen.6·/˘···

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