Elephants of the Gun-Teams

Rudyard Kipling (1865–1936) · 1912

5 lines · from Songs from Books

We lent to Alexander the strength of Hercules,The wisdom of our foreheads, the cunning of our knees.We bowed our necks to service; they ne'er were loosed again,--Make way there, way for the ten-foot teamsOf the Forty-Pounder train!

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Elephants of the Gun-Teams is in the public domain. This text is taken from Songs from Books, Project Gutenberg ebook #15529; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Rudyard Kipling, Elephants of the Gun-Teams, in Songs from Books (1912), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #15529, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/kipling-songs-from-books/elephants-of-the-gun-teams.html, id L20359.

Form and metre

Elephants of the Gun-Teams is 5 lines in a single stanza.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AAB-B herculesA · kneesA · againB · teams · trainB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
We lent to Alexander the strength of Hercules,13····˘/˘···/˘·
The wisdom of our foreheads, the cunning of our knees.13·/˘·//··/˘·/·
We bowed our necks to service; they ne'er were loosed again,--13··/··/˘····˘/
Make way there, way for the ten-foot teams9·········
Of the Forty-Pounder train!7··/˘/˘·

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