General Joubert (Died March 27, 1900)

Rudyard Kipling (1865–1936) · 1903

iambic pentameter · ABAB · 12 lines · from The Five Nations, Volume I

With those that bred, with those that loosed the strife,He had no part whose hands were clear of gain;But subtle, strong, and stubborn, gave his lifeTo a lost cause, and knew the gift was vain.

Later shall rise a people, sane and great,Forged in strong fires, by equal war made one;Telling old battles over without hate--Not least his name shall pass from sire to son.

He may not meet the onsweep of our vanIn the doomed city when we close the score;Yet o’er his grave--his grave that holds a man--Our deep-tongued guns shall answer his once more!

Words in this poem

strife n.
The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
sane a.
Being in a healthy condition; not deranged; acting rationally; -- said of the mind. [L. sanus; cf. Gr. Sound, a.]
sire n.
A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

General Joubert (Died March 27, 1900) is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Five Nations, Volume I, Project Gutenberg ebook #60260; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

General Joubert (Died March 27, 1900) is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB strifeA · gainB · lifeA · vainB
  2. 2 ABAB greatA · oneB · hateA · sonB
  3. 3 ABAB vanA · scoreB · manA · moreB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
With those that bred, with those that loosed the strife,10··········
He had no part whose hands were clear of gain;10··········
But subtle, strong, and stubborn, gave his life10·/˘··/˘···
To a lost cause, and knew the gift was vain.10··········
Later shall rise a people, sane and great,10/˘···/˘···
Forged in strong fires, by equal war made one;10···/·/˘···
Telling old battles over without hate--10/˘·/˘·····
Not least his name shall pass from sire to son.10·······/··
He may not meet the onsweep of our van10········/·
In the doomed city when we close the score;10···/˘·····
Yet o’er his grave--his grave that holds a man--10··········
Our deep-tongued guns shall answer his once more!10/····/˘···

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