How the Soul Entreats the Angels to Teach It How to Find Jesus Christ

Jacopone da Todi (c. 1230–1306), translated by Mrs. Theodore Beck · 1919

iambic trimeter · 106 lines · from The Lauds

O SHOW me Jesus Christ,Him would I find and hold;For I have heard it toldHe loves me tenderly.

Teach me and lead me onTo find my Love so sweet ;No longer would I grieve my LordBy pause, or by retreat:Sore hath He mourned the tarrying of my feet,Hath waited long for me.

If thou wouldst find thy Love,Christ Jesus, sweet and fair,Behold, Humility's dark vale!Thou needs must enter there:Many have breathed that Valley's heavy air ;—We tell thee faithfully.

O counsel me, I pray!My heart is sore be-stead ;Show me the path, that stedfastlyRight onward I may tread:That I may hold my way, nor turn my head,Nor stray confusèdly.

Humility's dark pathHath but a narrow gate ;Yet, entered there, thy journey liesMore easy and more straight:Thou shalt find consolation in that state,Yea, comfort fair and free.

Then open wide the gate,That I may enter there;Because it is His dwelling-place,Jesus, my Love most fair.Many have breathed that Valley's heavy air:—Ye say it verily.

We cannot let thee in,For we have straitly swornThat none shall enter at that gateWith raiment stained and worn:Thy robe is evil-smelling, coarse and torn,All soiled and foul to see.

What is this robe I wear,That makes me rank and vile?Fain would I fling it far, that GodMight turn to me, and smile.Fain would my heart be lovely, pure from guile,Fair in its poor degree.

Then strip the world away,And every worldly thing ;These heavy burdens load thy heart—'Tis sick and suffering.The world where thou hast dallied, loitering,Hath brought thee misery.

Ah. see me tear it off,This vain and worldly dress!No more the burden will I bearOf dark world-weariness:Far, far from out my heart, all shelterless,Created things shall flee!

Not yet thy soul is stript,As faithful spirits are:Still worldly hopes entangle theeWith lies, thy course to mar:Then tear them off, and hurl them all afar,Lest they should ruin thee.

I strip myself of hopes,Those hopes so false and vain;And I will flee from any manWho would restore their reign;Better to die in hunger and in pain,Than bound so cruelly.

Not yet thy soul is stript;Not yet all fair 'tis found:In pious friendships art thou clad,Enveloped and enwound :Strong winds may blow, and fling thee to the ground;Many so tripped there be.

Bitter is this command,To leave these friendships true ;And yet I see, that from their useHonours and pride ensue:I will obey, and hide me from their view,To gain humility.

Nay, use these friendships fair,In their due place and hour:But open not thy door to them,Distrust their charm and power.Through open doorways, thieves may gain thy tower,And sack thy treasury.

Now open wide the gate,That I my Love may seek:My Life, my Hope, yea, Jesus Christ:Love, turn to me and speak!Nor longer be estranged from one so weak,Who prays in courtesy.

Soul, thou art come to Me:Now hear what I have said:Thou canst be Mine upon the Cross:—There only is My Bed.There only canst thou lay thy weary headWith Mine eternally.

O Christ, my Love, I climbThy Cross, I will not shrink:Naked, and wrapt in Thine Embrace,Death's cup with Thee to drink.Joyful in anguish, in Thine Arms to sink,Dying in ecstasy.

Words in this poem

tenderly adv.
In a tender manner; with tenderness; mildly; gently; softly; in a manner not to injure or give pain; with pity or affection; kindly.
vale n.
A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
needs adv.
Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
shalt
2d per. sing. of Shall.
straitly adv.
In a strait manner; narrowly; strictly; rigorously. Mark i. 43.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
fain v. t.
To be glad ; to wish or desire.
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
shelterless a.
Destitute of shelter or protection.
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
clad v.
To clothe. Holland.
ensue v. t.
To follow; to pursue; to follow and overtake. [OF. ensevre, OF. & F. ensuivre, fr. L. insequi; in + sequi to pursue. See Sue.]
eternally adv.
In an eternal manner.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

How the Soul Entreats the Angels to Teach It How to Find Jesus Christ is in the public domain. This text is taken from Jacopone da Todi, Poet and Mystic, 1228-1306: A Spiritual Biography, with a Selection from the Spiritual Songs, Internet Archive, the Mrs. Theodore Beck translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Jacopone da Todi, How the Soul Entreats the Angels to Teach It How to Find Jesus Christ, in The Lauds (1919), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/jacopone-lauds/how-the-soul-entreats-the-angels-to-teach-it-how-to-find-jes.html, id L27096.

Form and metre

How the Soul Entreats the Angels to Teach It How to Find Jesus Christ is 106 lines in 18 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

See other poems in iambic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -AA- christ · holdA · toldA · tenderly
  2. 2 -A-AA- on · sweetA · lord · retreatA · feetA · me
  3. 3 -A-AA- love · fairA · vale · thereA · airA · faithfully
  4. 4 -A-AA- pray · steadA · stedfastly · treadA · headA · confusèdly
  5. 5 -A-AA- path · gateA · lies · straightA · stateA · free
  6. 6 -A-AA- gate · thereA · place · fairA · airA · verily
  7. 7 -A-AA- in · swornA · gate · wornA · tornA · see
  8. 8 -A-AA- wear · vileA · god · smileA · guileA · degree
  9. 9 -A-AA- away · thingA · heart · sufferingA · loiteringA · misery
  10. 10 -A-AA- off · dressA · bear · wearinessA · shelterlessA · flee
  11. 11 -ABAAB stript · areA · theeB · marA · afarA · theeB
  12. 12 -A-AA- hopes · vainA · man · reignA · painA · cruelly
  13. 13 -A-AA- stript · foundA · clad · enwoundA · groundA · be
  14. 14 -A-AA- command · trueA · use · ensueA · viewA · humility
  15. 15 -A-AA- fair · hourA · them · powerA · towerA · treasury
  16. 16 -A-AA- gate · seekA · christ · speakA · weakA · courtesy
  17. 17 -A-AA- me · saidA · cross · bedA · headA · eternally
  18. 18 -A-AA- climb · shrinkA · embrace · drinkA · sinkA · ecstasy
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
O SHOW me Jesus Christ,6···/˘·
Him would I find and hold;6······
For I have heard it told6······
He loves me tenderly.6···/˘˘
Teach me and lead me on6······
To find my Love so sweet ;6······
No longer would I grieve my Lord8·/˘·····
By pause, or by retreat:6····˘/
Sore hath He mourned the tarrying of my feet,10·····/˘···
Hath waited long for me.6·/˘···
If thou wouldst find thy Love,6······
Christ Jesus, sweet and fair,6·/˘···
Behold, Humility's dark vale!7˘/˘/˘··
Thou needs must enter there:6···/˘·
Many have breathed that Valley's heavy air ;—9/···/˘/˘·
We tell thee faithfully.6···/˘˘
O counsel me, I pray!6·/˘···
My heart is sore be-stead ;6······
Show me the path, that stedfastly8········
Right onward I may tread:6·/˘···
That I may hold my way, nor turn my head,10··········
Nor stray confusèdly.6······
Humility's dark path6˘/˘˘··
Hath but a narrow gate ;6···/˘·
Yet, entered there, thy journey lies8·/˘··/˘·
More easy and more straight:6·/˘···
Thou shalt find consolation in that state,10····˘/˘···
Yea, comfort fair and free.6·/˘···
Then open wide the gate,6·/˘···
That I may enter there;6···/˘·
Because it is His dwelling-place,8·····/˘·
Jesus, my Love most fair.6/˘····
Many have breathed that Valley's heavy air:—9/···/˘/˘·
Ye say it verily.6···/˘˘
We cannot let thee in,6·/˘···
For we have straitly sworn6···/˘·
That none shall enter at that gate8···/˘···
With raiment stained and worn:6·/˘···
Thy robe is evil-smelling, coarse and torn,9···//˘···
All soiled and foul to see.6······
What is this robe I wear,6······
That makes me rank and vile?6······
Fain would I fling it far, that God8········
Might turn to me, and smile.6······
Fain would my heart be lovely, pure from guile,10·····/˘···
Fair in its poor degree.6····˘/
Then strip the world away,6····˘/
And every worldly thing ;6·/˘/˘·
These heavy burdens load thy heart—8·/˘/˘···
'Tis sick and suffering.6···/˘˘
The world where thou hast dallied, loitering,9·····/˘/˘
Hath brought thee misery.6···/˘˘
Ah. see me tear it off,6······
This vain and worldly dress!6···/˘·
No more the burden will I bear8···/˘···
Of dark world-weariness:6···/˘˘
Far, far from out my heart, all shelterless,10·······/˘˘
Created things shall flee!6˘/˘···
Not yet thy soul is stript,6······
As faithful spirits are:6·/˘/˘·
Still worldly hopes entangle thee8·/˘·˘/˘·
With lies, thy course to mar:6······
Then tear them off, and hurl them all afar,10········˘/
Lest they should ruin thee.6···/˘·
I strip myself of hopes,6···/··
Those hopes so false and vain;6······
And I will flee from any man8·····/˘·
Who would restore their reign;6··˘/··
Better to die in hunger and in pain,10/˘···/˘···
Than bound so cruelly.5···/˘
Not yet thy soul is stript;6······
Not yet all fair 'tis found:6······
In pious friendships art thou clad,7·//˘···
Enveloped and enwound :6˘/˘···
Strong winds may blow, and fling thee to the ground;10··········
Many so tripped there be.6/˘····
Bitter is this command,6/˘··˘/
To leave these friendships true ;6···/˘·
And yet I see, that from their use8········
Honours and pride ensue:6/˘··˘/
I will obey, and hide me from their view,10··˘/······
To gain humility.6··˘/˘˘
Nay, use these friendships fair,6···/˘·
In their due place and hour:7·····/˘
But open not thy door to them,8·/˘·····
Distrust their charm and power.7˘/···/˘
Through open doorways, thieves may gain thy tower,10·/˘/·····/
And sack thy treasury.6···/˘˘
Now open wide the gate,6·/˘···
That I my Love may seek:6······
My Life, my Hope, yea, Jesus Christ:8·····/˘·
Love, turn to me and speak!6······
Nor longer be estranged from one so weak,10·/˘·˘/····
Who prays in courtesy.6···/˘˘
Soul, thou art come to Me:6······
Now hear what I have said:6······
Thou canst be Mine upon the Cross:—8········
There only is My Bed.6·/˘···
There only canst thou lay thy weary head10·/˘····/˘·
With Mine eternally.6··˘/˘˘
O Christ, my Love, I climb6······
Thy Cross, I will not shrink:6······
Naked, and wrapt in Thine Embrace,8/˘····˘/
Death's cup with Thee to drink.6······
Joyful in anguish, in Thine Arms to sink,10/˘·/˘·····
Dying in ecstasy.6/˘·/˘˘

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