83. Kwō-tai-kōgū no Taiu Toshi-nari
From pain and sorrow all aroundThere's no escape, I fear;To mountain wilds should I retreat,There also I should hearThe cry of hunted deer.
About this text
83. Kwō-tai-kōgū no Taiu Toshi-nari is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred Verses from Old Japan (the Hyaku-nin-isshiu), Internet Archive, the William N. Porter translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Various, 83. Kwō-tai-kōgū no Taiu Toshi-nari, in A Hundred Verses from Old Japan (1909), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hyakunin-isshu/83.html, id L28568.
Form and metre
83. Kwō-tai-kōgū no Taiu Toshi-nari is 5 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes xaxaa. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic trimeter.
See other poems in iambic trimeter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 xaxaa aroundx · feara · retreatx · heara · deera
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| From pain and sorrow all around | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| There's no escape, I fear; | 6 | ··˘/·· |
| To mountain wilds should I retreat, | 8 | ·/˘···˘/ |
| There also I should hear | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| The cry of hunted deer. | 6 | ···/˘· |
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