79. Sakyō no Taiu Aki-suke

Various (about 1235), translated by William N. Porter · 1909

iambic trimeter · xaxaa · 5 lines · from A Hundred Verses from Old Japan

See, how the wind of autumn drivesThe clouds to left and right,While in between the moon peeps out,Dispersing with her lightThe darkness of the night.

About this text

79. Sakyō no Taiu Aki-suke is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred Verses from Old Japan (the Hyaku-nin-isshiu), Internet Archive, the William N. Porter translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, 79. Sakyō no Taiu Aki-suke, in A Hundred Verses from Old Japan (1909), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hyakunin-isshu/79.html, id L28564.

Form and metre

79. Sakyō no Taiu Aki-suke is 5 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes xaxaa. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic trimeter.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 xaxaa drivesx · righta · outx · lighta · nighta
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
See, how the wind of autumn drives8·····/˘·
The clouds to left and right,6······
While in between the moon peeps out,8········
Dispersing with her light6˘/˘···
The darkness of the night.6·/˘···

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