Points and Lines

Aldous Huxley (1894–1963) · 1918

trochaic pentameter · 10 lines · from The Defeat of Youth, and Other Poems

Instants in the quiet, small sharp stars,Pierce my spirit with a thrust whose speedBaffles even the grasp of time.Oh that I might reflect themAs swiftly, as keenly as they shine.But I am a pool of waters, summer-still,And the stars are mirrored across me;Those stabbing points of the skyTurned to a thread of shaken silver,A long fine thread.

Words in this poem

keenly adv.
In a keen manner.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Points and Lines is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Defeat of Youth, and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #24364; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Aldous Huxley, Points and Lines, in The Defeat of Youth, and Other Poems (1918), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #24364, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/huxley-defeat-of-youth/points-and-lines.html, id L22034.

Form and metre

Points and Lines is 10 lines in a single stanza. The metre is trochaic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 78%).

See other poems in trochaic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ------AA-- stars · speed · time · them · shine · still · meA · skyA · silver · thread
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Instants in the quiet, small sharp stars,9/˘··/˘···
Pierce my spirit with a thrust whose speed9··/˘·····
Baffles even the grasp of time.8/˘/˘····
Oh that I might reflect them7····˘/·
As swiftly, as keenly as they shine.9·/˘·/˘···
But I am a pool of waters, summer-still,11······/˘/˘·
And the stars are mirrored across me;10····/˘˘˘/·
Those stabbing points of the sky7·/˘····
Turned to a thread of shaken silver,10·˘····/˘/˘
A long fine thread.4····

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