Anthony Raftery

Eleanor Hull (1860–1935) · 1912

iambic tetrameter · unrhymed · 92 lines · from The Poem-Book of the Gael

Going to Mass, by the will of GodThe day came wet and the wind rose;I met Mary Haynes at the cross of KiltartanAnd I fell in love with her then and there.

I spoke to her kind and mannerlyAs by report was her own way;And she said, "Raftery, my mind is easy,You may come to-day to Baile-laoi."

When I heard her offer I did not linger,When her talk went to my heart my heart rose.We had only to go across the three fields,We had daylight with us to Baile-laoi.

The table was laid with glasses and a quart measure;She had fair hair and she sitting beside me,And she said, "Drink, Raftery, and a hundred welcomes,There is a strong cellar in Baile-laoi."

O star of light, and O sun in harvest,O amber hair, O my share of the world,Will you come with me upon SundayTill we agree together before all the people?

I would not grudge you a song every Sunday evening,Punch on the table or wine if you would drink it,But, O King of Glory, dry the roads before me,Till I find the way to Baile-laoi.

There is a sweet air on the side of the hillWhen you are looking down upon Baile-laoi;When you are walking in the valley picking nuts and blackberriesThere is music of the birds in it and music of the sidhe.

What is the worth of greatness till you have the lightOf the flower of the branch that is by your side?There is no good to deny it or to try to hide it,She is the sun in the heavens who wounded my heart.

There is no part of Ireland I did not travelFrom the rivers to the tops of the mountains,To the edge of Loch Gréine whose mouth is hidden,And I saw no beauty that was behind hers.

Her hair was shining and her brows were shining, too;Her face was like herself, her mouth pleasant and sweet.She is my pride, and I give her the branch,She is the shining flower of Baile-laoi.

It is Mary Haynes, the calm and easy woman,Her beauty in her mind and in her face.If a hundred clerks were gathered together,They could not write down a half of her ways.

There is a bright posy on the edge of the quayAnd she far beyond Deirdre with her pleasant waysOr if I would say Helen, the queen of the Greeks,On whose account hundreds have fallen at Troy.The flame and the white in her mingled together,And sweeter her mouth than cuckoo on the bough,And the way she has with her, where will you find themSince died the pearl that was in Ballylaoi?

If you were to see the sky-maiden decked outOn a fine sunny day in the street, and she walking,The light shining out from her snow-white bosomWould give sight of the eyes to a sightless man.The love of hundreds is on her brow,The sight of her as the gleam of the Star of Doom;If she had been there in the time of the godsIt is not to Venus the apple would have gone.

Her hair falling with her down to her knees,Twining and curling to the mouth of her shoe;Her parted locks, with the grey of the dew on them,And her curls sweeping after her on the road;She is the coolun is brightest and most mannerlyOf all who ever opened eye or who lived in life;And if the country of Lord Lucan were given me,By the strength of my cause, the jewel should be mine.

Her form slender, chalk-white, her cheeks like roses,And her breasts rounded over against her heart;Her neck and her brow and her auburn hair,She stands before us like the dew of harvest.Virgil, Cicero, nor the power of Homer,Would not bring any to compare with her bloom and gentle ways;O Blossom of Youth, I am guilty with desire of you,And unless you come to me I shall not live a month.

Walking or dancing, if you were to see the fair shoot,It is to the Flower of the Branches you would give your love,Her face alight, and her heart without sorrow,And were it not pleasant to be in her company?The greatness of Samson or AlexanderI would not covet, surely, in place of my desire;And if I do not get leave to talk to Mary StauntonI am in doubt that short will be my life.

She bade me "Good-morrow" early, with kindness,She set a stool for me, and not in the corner,She drank a drink with me, she was the heart of hospitality,At the time that I rose up to go on my way.I fell to talking and discoursing with her,It was mannerly she looked at me, the apple-blossom,And here is my word of mouth to you, without falsehood,That I have left the branch with her from Mary Brown.

Words in this poem

spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
mannerly a.
Showing good manners; civil; respectful; complaisant.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
daylight n.
The light of day as opposed to the darkness of night; the light of the sun, as opposed to that of the moon or to artificial light.
loch n.
A lake; a bay or arm of the sea. [Gael. & Olr. loch. See Lake of water.]
posy n.
A brief poetical sentiment; hence, any brief sentiment, motto, or legend; especially, one inscribed on a ring. [Contr. fr. poesy.]
quay n.
A mole, bank, or wharf, formed toward the sea, or at the side of a harbor, river, or other navigable water, for convenience in loading and unloading vessels. [F. quai. See Key quay.]
sunny a.
Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
sightless a.
Wanting sight; without sight; blind.
auburn a.
Flaxen-colored. Florio. [OE. auburne blonde, OF. alborne, auborne, fr. LL. alburnus whitish, fr. L. albus white. Cf. Alburn.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
bade
A form of the pat tense of Bid.
drank n.
Wild oats, or darnel grass. See Drake a plant. [Cf. 3d Drake.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Anthony Raftery is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poem-Book of the Gael Translations from Irish Gaelic Poetry into English Prose and Verse, Project Gutenberg ebook #46917; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Anthony Raftery is 92 lines in 17 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. 87% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 11.4 syllables. 29 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 18% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 13 --A--A-- out · walking · bosomA · man · brow · doomA · gods · gone
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Going to Mass, by the will of God8/·······
The day came wet and the wind rose;8········
I met Mary Haynes at the cross of Kiltartan12··/˘········
And I fell in love with her then and there.10··········
I spoke to her kind and mannerly9······/˘˘
As by report was her own way;8··˘/····
And she said, "Raftery, my mind is easy,10···/˘···/˘
You may come to-day to Baile-laoi."8········
When I heard her offer I did not linger,11····/˘···/˘
When her talk went to my heart my heart rose.10··········
We had only to go across the three fields,11··/˘··˘/···
We had daylight with us to Baile-laoi.9··/······
The table was laid with glasses and a quart measure;13·/˘···/˘···/˘
She had fair hair and she sitting beside me,11······/˘·/·
And she said, "Drink, Raftery, and a hundred welcomes,12····/˘··/˘/˘
There is a strong cellar in Baile-laoi."9····/˘···
O star of light, and O sun in harvest,10········/˘
O amber hair, O my share of the world,10·/˘·······
Will you come with me upon Sunday9·······/·
Till we agree together before all the people?13··˘/˘/˘····/˘
I would not grudge you a song every Sunday evening,13·······/˘/·/˘
Punch on the table or wine if you would drink it,12···/˘·······
But, O King of Glory, dry the roads before me,12····/˘······
Till I find the way to Baile-laoi.8········
There is a sweet air on the side of the hill11···········
When you are looking down upon Baile-laoi;10···/˘·····
When you are walking in the valley picking nuts and blackberries16···/˘··/˘/˘··/·˘
There is music of the birds in it and music of the sidhe.15··/˘······/˘···
What is the worth of greatness till you have the light12·····/˘·····
Of the flower of the branch that is by your side?11··/········
There is no good to deny it or to try to hide it,14·····˘/·······
She is the sun in the heavens who wounded my heart.13······/˘·/˘··
There is no part of Ireland I did not travel12·····/˘···/˘
From the rivers to the tops of the mountains,11··/˘·····/˘
To the edge of Loch Gréine whose mouth is hidden,11·········/˘
And I saw no beauty that was behind hers.11····/˘·····
Her hair was shining and her brows were shining, too;12···/˘····/˘·
Her face was like herself, her mouth pleasant and sweet.12····˘/··/˘··
She is my pride, and I give her the branch,10··········
She is the shining flower of Baile-laoi.9···/˘/···
It is Mary Haynes, the calm and easy woman,12··/˘····/˘/˘
Her beauty in her mind and in her face.10·/˘·······
If a hundred clerks were gathered together,11··/˘··/˘˘/˘
They could not write down a half of her ways.10··········
There is a bright posy on the edge of the quay12····/˘······
And she far beyond Deirdre with her pleasant ways12·····/˘··/˘·
Or if I would say Helen, the queen of the Greeks,12·····/˘·····
On whose account hundreds have fallen at Troy.11··˘//˘·/˘··
The flame and the white in her mingled together,12·······/˘˘/˘
And sweeter her mouth than cuckoo on the bough,11·/˘···/····
And the way she has with her, where will you find them12············
Since died the pearl that was in Ballylaoi?10··········
If you were to see the sky-maiden decked out11·······/˘··
On a fine sunny day in the street, and she walking,13···/˘······/˘
The light shining out from her snow-white bosom11··/˘·····/˘
Would give sight of the eyes to a sightless man.11········/˘·
The love of hundreds is on her brow,9···/˘····
The sight of her as the gleam of the Star of Doom;12············
If she had been there in the time of the gods11···········
It is not to Venus the apple would have gone.12····/˘·/˘···
Her hair falling with her down to her knees,10··/˘······
Twining and curling to the mouth of her shoe;11/˘·/˘······
Her parted locks, with the grey of the dew on them,12·/˘·········
And her curls sweeping after her on the road;11···/˘······
She is the coolun is brightest and most mannerly13······/˘··/˘˘
Of all who ever opened eye or who lived in life;12···//˘······
And if the country of Lord Lucan were given me,12···/˘·····/·
By the strength of my cause, the jewel should be mine.11·······/···
Her form slender, chalk-white, her cheeks like roses,11··/˘·····/˘
And her breasts rounded over against her heart;10···/˘·····
Her neck and her brow and her auburn hair,10·······/˘·
She stands before us like the dew of harvest.11·········/˘
Virgil, Cicero, nor the power of Homer,11/˘/˘···/·/˘
Would not bring any to compare with her bloom and gentle ways;15···/˘·˘/····/˘·
O Blossom of Youth, I am guilty with desire of you,14·/˘····/˘·˘/··
And unless you come to me I shall not live a month.13·············
Walking or dancing, if you were to see the fair shoot,13/˘·/˘········
It is to the Flower of the Branches you would give your love,14····/··/˘·····
Her face alight, and her heart without sorrow,11··˘/·····/˘
And were it not pleasant to be in her company?12····/˘····/˘
The greatness of Samson or Alexander11·/˘·/˘··˘/˘
I would not covet, surely, in place of my desire;13···/˘/˘····˘/
And if I do not get leave to talk to Mary Staunton14··········/˘/˘
I am in doubt that short will be my life.10··········
She bade me "Good-morrow" early, with kindness,11····/˘/˘·/˘
She set a stool for me, and not in the corner,12··········/˘
She drank a drink with me, she was the heart of hospitality,15············˘/˘
At the time that I rose up to go on my way.12············
I fell to talking and discoursing with her,10···/˘·/˘··
It was mannerly she looked at me, the apple-blossom,14··/˘˘·····/˘/˘
And here is my word of mouth to you, without falsehood,13···········/·
That I have left the branch with her from Mary Brown.12·········/˘·

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