The Watching Angel

Victor Hugo (1802–1885), translated by various hands · 1888

trochaic trimeter · 64 lines · from Poems

In the dusky nook,Near the altar laid,Sleeps the child in shadowOf his mother's bed:Softly he reposes,And his lid of roses,Closed to earth, unclosesOn the heaven o'erhead.

Many a dream is with him,Fresh from fairyland,Spangled o'er with diamondsSeems the ocean sand;Suns are flaming there,Troops of ladies fairSouls of infants bearIn each charming hand.

Oh, enchanting vision!Lo, a rill upsprings,And from out its bosomComes a voice that singsLovelier there appearSire and sisters dear,While his mother nearPlumes her new-born wings.

But a brighter visionYet his eyes behold;Roses pied and liliesEvery path enfold;Lakes delicious sleeping,Silver fishes leaping,Through the wavelets creepingUp to reeds of gold.

Slumber on, sweet infant,Slumber peacefullyThy young soul yet knows notWhat thy lot may be.Like dead weeds that sweepO'er the dol'rous deep,Thou art borne in sleep.What is all to thee?

Thou canst slumber by the way;Thou hast learnt to borrowNaught from study, naught from care;The cold hand of sorrowOn thy brow unwrinkled yet,Where young truth and candor sit,Ne'er with rugged nail hath writThat sad word, "To-morrow!"

Innocent! thou sleepest--See the angelic band,Who foreknow the trialsThat for man are planned;Seeing him unarmed,Unfearing, unalarmed,With their tears have warmedThis unconscious hand.

Still they, hovering o'er him,Kiss him where he lies,Hark, he sees them weeping,"Gabriel!" he cries;"Hush!" the angel says,On his lip he laysOne finger, one displaysHis native skies.

Words in this poem

nook n.
A narrow place formed by an angle in bodies or between bodies; a corner; a recess; a secluded retreat. [OE. nok; cf. Gael. & Ir. niuc.]
fairyland n.
The imaginary land or abode of fairies.
rill n.
A very small brook; a streamlet. [Cf. LG. rille a small channel or brook, a furrow, a chamfer, OE. rigol a small brook, F. rigole a trench or furrow for water, W. rhill a row, rhigol a little di]
sire n.
A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
enfold v. t.
To infold. See Infold.
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
borrow v. t.
To receive from another as a loan, with the implied or expressed intention of returning the identical article or its equivalent in kind; -- the opposite of lend. [OE. borwen, AS. borgian, fr. borg, borh, pledge; akin to D. borg, G. borg; prob. fr. root of AS. beorgan to protect. Borough.]
candor n.
Whiteness; brightness; (as applied to moral conditions) usullied purity; innocence. [L. candor, fr. candëre; cf. F. candeur. See candid.]
foreknow v. t.
To have previous knowledge of; to know beforehand.
unarmed a.
Not armed or armored; having no arms or weapons. [Pref. un- not + armed.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Watching Angel is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Victor Hugo, The Watching Angel, in Poems (1888), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hugo-poems/the-watching-angel.html, id L26741.

Form and metre

The Watching Angel is 64 lines in 8 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is trochaic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

See other poems in trochaic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ---ABBBA nook · laid · shadow · bedA · reposesB · rosesB · unclosesB · o'erheadA
  2. 2 -A-ABBBA him · fairylandA · diamonds · sandA · thereB · fairB · bearB · handA
  3. 3 -A-ABBBA vision · upspringsA · bosom · singsA · appearB · dearB · nearB · wingsA
  4. 4 -A-ABBBA vision · beholdA · lilies · enfoldA · sleepingB · leapingB · creepingB · goldA
  5. 5 ---ABBBA infant · peacefully · not · beA · sweepB · deepB · sleepB · theeA
  6. 6 ---A-BBA way · borrow · care · sorrowA · yet · sitB · writB · morrowA
  7. 7 -A-ABB-A sleepest · bandA · trials · plannedA · unarmedB · unalarmedB · warmed · handA
  8. 8 -A-A-BBA him · liesA · weeping · criesA · says · laysB · displaysB · skiesA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
In the dusky nook,5··/˘·
Near the altar laid,5··/˘·
Sleeps the child in shadow6····/·
Of his mother's bed:5··/˘·
Softly he reposes,6/˘·/·˘
And his lid of roses,6····/˘
Closed to earth, uncloses6······
On the heaven o'erhead.5··/··
Many a dream is with him,6/·····
Fresh from fairyland,5··/˘·
Spangled o'er with diamonds6/˘··/˘
Seems the ocean sand;5··/˘·
Suns are flaming there,5··/˘·
Troops of ladies fair5··/˘·
Souls of infants bear5··/˘·
In each charming hand.5··/˘·
Oh, enchanting vision!6·˘/˘/˘
Lo, a rill upsprings,5·····
And from out its bosom6····/˘
Comes a voice that sings5·····
Lovelier there appear6····˘/
Sire and sisters dear,5/·/˘·
While his mother near5··/˘·
Plumes her new-born wings.5·····
But a brighter vision6··/˘/˘
Yet his eyes behold;5···˘/
Roses pied and lilies6/˘··/˘
Every path enfold;5/˘·˘/
Lakes delicious sleeping,6·˘/˘/˘
Silver fishes leaping,6/˘/˘/˘
Through the wavelets creeping7·····/˘
Up to reeds of gold.5·····
Slumber on, sweet infant,6/˘··/˘
Slumber peacefully5/˘/˘˘
Thy young soul yet knows not6······
What thy lot may be.5·····
Like dead weeds that sweep5·····
O'er the dol'rous deep,5·····
Thou art borne in sleep.5·····
What is all to thee?5·····
Thou canst slumber by the way;7··/˘···
Thou hast learnt to borrow6····/·
Naught from study, naught from care;7··/˘···
The cold hand of sorrow6····/˘
On thy brow unwrinkled yet,6······
Where young truth and candor sit,7····/˘·
Ne'er with rugged nail hath writ7··/˘···
That sad word, "To-morrow!"6····/˘
Innocent! thou sleepest--6/˘˘·/˘
See the angelic band,6···/˘·
Who foreknow the trials6·˘/·/˘
That for man are planned;5·····
Seeing him unarmed,5/˘·˘/
Unfearing, unalarmed,6······
With their tears have warmed5·····
This unconscious hand.5··/˘·
Still they, hovering o'er him,6··/˘··
Kiss him where he lies,5·····
Hark, he sees them weeping,6····/˘
"Gabriel!" he cries;5/˘˘··
"Hush!" the angel says,5··/˘·
On his lip he lays5·····
One finger, one displays6·/˘·˘/
His native skies.4·/˘·

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