The Quiet Rural Church

Victor Hugo (1802–1885), translated by various hands · 1888

iambic pentameter · ABAB · 12 lines · from Poems

It was a humble church, with arches low,The church we entered there,Where many a weary soul since long agoHad past with plaint or prayer.

Mournful and still it was at day's decline,The day we entered there;As in a loveless heart, at the lone shrine,The fires extinguished were.

Scarcely was heard to float some gentlest sound,Scarcely some low breathed word,As in a forest fallen asleep, is foundJust one belated bird.

Words in this poem

plaint n.
Audible expression of sorrow; lamentation; complaint; hence, a mournful song; a lament. Chaucer."The Psalmist's mournful plaint." [OE. plainte, pleynte, F. plainte, fr. L. plangere, planctum (plancta, fem. p.p.), to beat, beat the breast, lament. Cf. Complain, Plague, Plangent.]
loveless a.
Void of love; void of tenderness or kindness. Milton. Shelton.
lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.
belated a.
Delayed beyond the usual time; too late; overtaken by night; benighted.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Quiet Rural Church is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Victor Hugo, The Quiet Rural Church, in Poems (1888), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hugo-poems/the-quiet-rural-church.html, id L26868.

Form and metre

The Quiet Rural Church is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 2 of its 3 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%).

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB lowA · thereB · agoA · prayerB
  2. 2 A-A- declineA · there · shrineA · were
  3. 3 ABAB soundA · wordB · foundA · birdB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
It was a humble church, with arches low,10···/˘··/˘·
The church we entered there,6···/˘·
Where many a weary soul since long ago10·/·/˘···˘/
Had past with plaint or prayer.6······
Mournful and still it was at day's decline,10/˘······˘/
The day we entered there;6···/˘·
As in a loveless heart, at the lone shrine,10···/˘·····
The fires extinguished were.7·/˘˘/˘·
Scarcely was heard to float some gentlest sound,10/˘·····/˘·
Scarcely some low breathed word,6/˘····
As in a forest fallen asleep, is found11···/˘/˘˘/··
Just one belated bird.6··˘/˘·

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