The Preceptor

Victor Hugo (1802–1885), translated by various hands · 1888

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 18 lines · from Poems

A gruesome man, bald, clad in black,Who kept us youthful drudges in the track,Thinking it good for them to leave home care,And for a while a harsher yoke to bear;Surrender all the careless ease of home,And be forbid from schoolyard bounds to roam;For this with blandest smiles he softly asksThat they with him will prosecute their tasks;Receives them in his solemn chilly lair,The rigid lot of discipline to share.At dingy desks they toil by day; at nightTo gloomy chambers go uncheered by light,Where pillars rudely grayed by rusty nailOf heavy hours reveal the weary tale;Where spiteful ushers grin, all pleased to makeLong scribbled lines the price of each mistake.By four unpitying walls environed thereThe homesick students pace the pavements bare.

Words in this poem

gruesome
, Grue"some, a. Etym: [From a word akin to Dan. gru horror, terror + -some; cf. D. gruwzaam, G. grausam. Cf. Grisly.]
clad v.
To clothe. Holland.
lair n.
A place in which to lie or rest; especially, the bed or couch of a wild beast. [OE. leir, AS. leger; akin to D. leger, G. lager couch, lair, OHG. laga, Goth. ligrs, and to E. lie. See Lie to be prostrate, and cf. Layer, Leaguer.]
grin n.
A snare; a gin. [AS. grin.]
homesick a.
Pining for home; in a nostalgic condition.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Preceptor is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Victor Hugo, The Preceptor, in Poems (1888), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hugo-poems/the-preceptor.html, id L26783.

Form and metre

The Preceptor is 18 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%).

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDBBEEFFGGBB blackA · trackA · careB · bearB · homeC · roamC · asksD · tasksD · lairB · shareB · nightE · lightE · nailF · taleF · makeG · mistakeG · thereB · bareB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A gruesome man, bald, clad in black,8·/˘·····
Who kept us youthful drudges in the track,10···/˘/˘···
Thinking it good for them to leave home care,10/˘········
And for a while a harsher yoke to bear;10·····/˘···
Surrender all the careless ease of home,10˘/˘··/˘···
And be forbid from schoolyard bounds to roam;10··˘/·/····
For this with blandest smiles he softly asks10···/˘··/˘·
That they with him will prosecute their tasks;10·····/˘···
Receives them in his solemn chilly lair,10˘/···/˘/˘·
The rigid lot of discipline to share.10·/˘··/˘˘··
At dingy desks they toil by day; at night10·/˘·······
To gloomy chambers go uncheered by light,10·/˘/˘·····
Where pillars rudely grayed by rusty nail10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Of heavy hours reveal the weary tale;10·/˘/˘/·/˘·
Where spiteful ushers grin, all pleased to make10·/˘/˘·····
Long scribbled lines the price of each mistake.10·/˘·····˘/
By four unpitying walls environed there10··········
The homesick students pace the pavements bare.10·/·/˘··/˘·

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