An Old-Time Lay

Victor Hugo (1802–1885), translated by various hands · 1888

iambic pentameter · 21 lines · from Poems

Where your brood seven lie,Float in calm heavenly,Life passing evenly,Waterfowl, waterfowl! often I dreamFor a restLike your nest,Skirting the stream.

Shine the sun tearfullyEre the clouds clear fully,Still you skim cheerfully,Swallow, oh! swallow swift! often I sighFor a homeWhere you roamNearing the sky!

Guileless of pondering;Swallow-eyes wandering;Seeking no fonder ringThan the rose-garland Love gives thee apart!Grant me soon--Blessed boon!Home in thy heart!

Words in this poem

waterfowl n.
Any bird that frequents the water, or lives about rivers, lakes, etc., or on or near the sea; an aquatic fowl; -- used also collectively.
skirting n.
A skirting board.
cheerfully adv.
In a cheerful manner, gladly.
guileless a.
Free from guile; artless.
boon n.
A prayer or petition. [OE. bone, boin, a petition, fr. Icel. b; akin to Sw. & Dan. b, AS. b, and perh. to E. ban; but influenced by F. bon good, fr. L. bonus. Ban, Bounty.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

An Old-Time Lay is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Victor Hugo, An Old-Time Lay, in Poems (1888), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hugo-poems/an-old-time-lay.html, id L26848.

Form and metre

An Old-Time Lay is 21 lines in 3 stanzas of 7 lines each. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ---ABBA lie · heavenly · evenly · dreamA · restB · nestB · streamA
  2. 2 A-ABCCB tearfullyA · fully · cheerfullyA · sighB · homeC · roamC · skyB
  3. 3 AAABCCB ponderingA · wanderingA · ringA · apartB · soonC · boonC · heartB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Where your brood seven lie,6···/˘·
Float in calm heavenly,6···/˘˘
Life passing evenly,6·/˘/˘˘
Waterfowl, waterfowl! often I dream10/˘·/˘·/˘··
For a rest3···
Like your nest,3···
Skirting the stream.4/˘··
Shine the sun tearfully6···/˘˘
Ere the clouds clear fully,6····/˘
Still you skim cheerfully,6···/˘˘
Swallow, oh! swallow swift! often I sigh10/˘·/˘·/˘··
For a home3···
Where you roam3···
Nearing the sky!4/˘··
Guileless of pondering;6/˘·/˘˘
Swallow-eyes wandering;6/˘·/˘˘
Seeking no fonder ring6/˘·/˘·
Than the rose-garland Love gives thee apart!10···/˘···˘/
Grant me soon--3···
Blessed boon!2··
Home in thy heart!4····

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