Story of Udaipore: Told by Lalla-ji, the Priest

Laurence Hope (1865–1904) · 1901

fourteeners · 50 lines · from India's Love Lyrics

"And when the Summer Heat is great,And every hour intense,The Moghra, with its subtle flowers,Intoxicates the sense."

The Coco palms stood tall and slim, against the golden-glow,And all their grey and graceful plumes were waving to and fro.

She lay forgetful in the boat, and watched the dying SunSink slowly lakewards, while the stars replaced him, one by one.

She saw the marble Temple walls long white reflections make,The echoes of their silvery bells were blown across the lake.

The evening air was very sweet; from off the island bowersCame scents of Moghra trees in bloom, and Oleander flowers.

"The Moghra flowers that smell so sweetWhen love's young fancies play;The acrid Moghra flowers, still sweetThough love be burnt away."

The boat went drifting, uncontrolled, the rower rowed no more,But deftly turned the slender prow towards the further shore.

The dying sunset touched with gold the Jasmin in his hair;His eyes were darkly luminous: she looked and found him fair.

And so persuasively he spoke, she could not say him nay,And when his young hands took her own, she smiled and let them stay.

And all the youth awake in him, all love of Love in her,All scents of white and subtle flowers that filled the twilight air

Combined together with the night in kind conspiracyTo do Love service, while the boat went drifting onwards, free.

"The Moghra flowers, the Moghra flowers,While Youth's quick pulses playThey are so sweet, they still are sweet,Though passion burns away."

Low in the boat the lovers lay, and from his sable curlsThe Jasmin flowers slipped away to rest among the girl's.

Oh, silver lake and silver night and tender silver sky!Where as the hours passed, the moon rose white and cold on high.

"The Moghra flowers, the Moghra flowers,So dear to Youth at play;The small and subtle Moghra flowersThat only last a day."

Suddenly, frightened, she awoke, and waking vaguely sawThe boat had stranded in the sedge that fringed the further shore.

The breeze grown chilly, swayed the palms; she heard, still half awake,A prowling jackal's hungry cry blown faintly o'er the lake.

She shivered, but she turned to kiss his soft, remembered face,Lit by the pallid light he lay, in Youth's abandoned grace.

But as her lips met his she paused, in terror and dismay,The white moon showed her by her side asleep a Leper lay.

"Ah, Moghra flowers, white Moghra flowers,All love is blind, they say;The Moghra flowers, so sweet, so sweet,Though love be burnt away!"

Words in this poem

forgetful a.
Apt to forget; easily losing remembrance; as, a forgetful man should use helps to strengthen his memory.
oleander n.
A beautiful evergreen shrub of the Dogbane family, having clusters of fragrant red or white flowers. It is native of the East Indies, but the red variety has become common in the south of Europe.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
rower n.
One who rows with an oar.
deftly adv.
Aptly; fitly; dexterously; neatly. [Cf. Defly.]
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
sable n.
A carnivorous animal of the Weasel family (Mustela zibellina) native of the northern latitudes of Europe, Asia, and America, -- noted for its fine, soft, and valuable fur. [OF. sable, F. zibeline sable (in sense 4), LL. sabellum; cf. D. sabel, Dan. sabel, zobel, Sw. sabel, sobel, G. zobel; all fr. Russ. sóbole.]
swayed a.
Bent down, and hollow in the back; sway-backed; -- said of a horse.
prowling a.
Accustomed to prowl, or engaged in roving stealthily, as for prey.
leper n.
A person affected with leprosy.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Story of Udaipore: Told by Lalla-ji, the Priest is in the public domain. This text is taken from India's Love Lyrics, Project Gutenberg ebook #8197; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Laurence Hope, Story of Udaipore: Told by Lalla-ji, the Priest, in India's Love Lyrics (1901), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8197, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hope-india/story-of-udaipore-told-by-lalla-ji-the-priest.html, id L22583.

Form and metre

Story of Udaipore: Told by Lalla-ji, the Priest is 50 lines in 20 stanzas. The metre is fourteeners, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A great · intenseA · flowers · senseA
  2. 2 AA glowA · froA
  3. 3 AA sunA · oneA
  4. 4 AA makeA · lakeA
  5. 5 AA bowersA · flowersA
  6. 6 ABAB sweetA · playB · sweetA · awayB
  7. 7 AA moreA · shoreA
  8. 8 AA hairA · fairA
  9. 9 AA nayA · stayA
  10. 12 -A-A flowers · playA · sweet · awayA
  11. 13 AA curlsA · girl'sA
  12. 14 AA skyA · highA
  13. 15 ABAB flowersA · playB · flowersA · dayB
  14. 17 AA awakeA · lakeA
  15. 18 AA faceA · graceA
  16. 19 AA dismayA · layA
  17. 20 -A-A flowers · sayA · sweet · awayA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against fourteeners. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
"And when the Summer Heat is great,8···/˘···
And every hour intense,8·/˘˘/˘˘/
The Moghra, with its subtle flowers,9·····/˘/˘
Intoxicates the sense."6˘/˘···
The Coco palms stood tall and slim, against the golden-glow,14·/·········/˘·
And all their grey and graceful plumes were waving to and fro.14·····/˘··/˘···
She lay forgetful in the boat, and watched the dying Sun14··˘/˘······/˘·
Sink slowly lakewards, while the stars replaced him, one by one.15·/˘·······/····
She saw the marble Temple walls long white reflections make,14···/˘/˘···˘/˘·
The echoes of their silvery bells were blown across the lake.14·/˘··/˘···˘/··
The evening air was very sweet; from off the island bowers15·/˘··/˘····/˘/˘
Came scents of Moghra trees in bloom, and Oleander flowers.15·········/˘·˘/˘
"The Moghra flowers that smell so sweet9···/˘····
When love's young fancies play;6···/˘·
The acrid Moghra flowers, still sweet9·/˘··/˘··
Though love be burnt away."6····˘/
The boat went drifting, uncontrolled, the rower rowed no more,14···/˘·˘/·/˘···
But deftly turned the slender prow towards the further shore.14·/˘··/˘····/˘·
The dying sunset touched with gold the Jasmin in his hair;14·/˘/·····/˘···
His eyes were darkly luminous: she looked and found him fair.14···/˘/˘˘······
And so persuasively he spoke, she could not say him nay,14··˘/˘˘········
And when his young hands took her own, she smiled and let them stay.14··············
And all the youth awake in him, all love of Love in her,14····˘/········
All scents of white and subtle flowers that filled the twilight air14·····/˘/···/··
Combined together with the night in kind conspiracy14˘/˘/˘·····˘/˘˘
To do Love service, while the boat went drifting onwards, free.14···/˘····/˘/˘·
"The Moghra flowers, the Moghra flowers,10···/˘···/˘
While Youth's quick pulses play6···/˘·
They are so sweet, they still are sweet,8········
Though passion burns away."6·/˘·˘/
Low in the boat the lovers lay, and from his sable curls14·····/˘····/˘·
The Jasmin flowers slipped away to rest among the girl's.14·/˘/˘·˘/······
Oh, silver lake and silver night and tender silver sky!14·/˘··/˘··/˘/˘·
Where as the hours passed, the moon rose white and cold on high.14···/˘·········
"The Moghra flowers, the Moghra flowers,10···/˘···/˘
So dear to Youth at play;6······
The small and subtle Moghra flowers9···/˘··/˘
That only last a day."6·/˘···
Suddenly, frightened, she awoke, and waking vaguely saw14/˘˘/˘·˘/·/˘/˘·
The boat had stranded in the sedge that fringed the further shore.14···/˘······/˘·
The breeze grown chilly, swayed the palms; she heard, still half awake,14···/˘·······˘/
A prowling jackal's hungry cry blown faintly o'er the lake.14·/˘/˘/˘··/˘···
She shivered, but she turned to kiss his soft, remembered face,14·/˘·······˘/˘·
Lit by the pallid light he lay, in Youth's abandoned grace.14···/˘·····˘/˘·
But as her lips met his she paused, in terror and dismay,14·········/˘·˘/
The white moon showed her by her side asleep a Leper lay.14········˘/·/˘·
"Ah, Moghra flowers, white Moghra flowers,10···/˘···/˘
All love is blind, they say;6······
The Moghra flowers, so sweet, so sweet,9···/˘····
Though love be burnt away!"6····˘/

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