Second Song: The Girl from Baltistan

Laurence Hope (1865–1904) · 1901

iambic pentameter · 61 lines · from India's Love Lyrics

Throb, throb, throb,Far away in the blue transparent Night,On the outer horizon of a dreaming consciousness,She hears the sound of her lover's nearing boatAfar, afloatOn the river's loneliness, where the Stars are the only light;Hear the sound of the straining woodLike a broken sobOf a heart's distress,Loving misunderstood.

She lies, with her loose hair spent in soft disorder,On a silken sheet with a purple woven border,Every cell of her brain is latent fire,Every fibre tense with restrained desire.And the straining oars sound clearer, clearer,The boat is approaching nearer, nearer;"How to wait through the moments' spaceTill I see the light of my lover's face?"

Throb, throb, throb,The sound dies down the streamTill it only clings at the senses' edgeLike a half-remembered dream.Doubtless, he in the silence lies,His fair face turned to the tender skies,Starlight touching his sleeping eyes.While his boat caught in the thickset sedgeAnd the waters round it gurgle and sob,Or floats set free on the river's tide,Oars laid aside.

She is awake and knows no rest,Passion dies and is dispossessedOf his brief, despotic power.But the Brain, once kindled, would still be afireWere the whole world pasture to its desire,And all of love, in a single hour,--A single wine cup, filled to the brim,Given to slake its thirst.

Some there are who are thus-wise cursedTimes that follow fulfilled desireAre of all their hours the worst.They find no Respite and reach no Rest,Though passion fail and desire grow dim,No assuagement comes from the thing possessedFor possession feeds the fire.

"Oh, for the life of the bright hued thingsWhose marriage and death are one,A floating fusion on golden wings.Alit with passion and sun!

"But we who re-marry a thousand times,As the spirit or senses will,In a thousand ways, in a thousand climes,We remain unsatisfied still."

As her lover left her, alone, awake she lies,With a sleepless brain and weary, half-closed eyes.She turns her face where the purple silk is spread,Still sweet with delicate perfume his presence shed.Her arms remembered his vanished beauty still,And, reminiscent of clustered curls, her fingers thrill.While the wonderful, Starlit Night wears slowly onTill the light of another day, serene and wan,Pierces the eastern skies.

Words in this poem 16
throb v. i.
To beat, or pulsate, with more than usual force or rapidity; to beat in consequence of agitation; to palpitate; -- said of the heart, pulse, etc. [OE. ; of uncertain origin; cf. Russ. trepete a trembling, and E. trepidation.]
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
afloat adv.
Borne on the water; floating; on board ship. [Pref. a- + float.]
loneliness n.
The condition of being lonely; solitude; seclusion.
fibre n.
One of the delicate, threadlike portions of which the tissues of plants and animals are in part constituted; as, the fiber of flax or of muscle. [F. fibre, L. fibra.]
clearer n.
One who, or that which, clears.
doubtless a.
Free from fear or suspicion.
starlight n.
The light given by the stars.
thickset a.
Close planted; as, a thickset wood; a thickset hedge.
gurgle v. i.
To run or flow in a broken, irregular, noisy current, as water from a bottle, or a small stream among pebbles or stones. [Cf. It. gorgogliare to gargle, bubble up, fr. L. gurgulio gullet. Cf. Gargle, Gorge.]
cursed a.
Deserving a curse; execrable; hateful; detestable; abominable.
assuagement n.
Mitigation; abatement. [OF. assouagement, asuagement.]
hued a.
Having color; -- usually in composition; as, bright-hued; many- hued.
sleepless a.
Having no sleep; wakeful.
reminiscent a.
Recalling to mind, or capable of recalling to mind; having remembrance; reminding one of something. [L. reminiscens, -entis, p. pr. of reminisci to recall to mind, to recollect; pref.re- re + a word akin to mens mind, memini I remember. See Mind.]
starlit a.
Lighted by the stars; starlight.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Second Song: The Girl from Baltistan is in the public domain. This text is taken from India's Love Lyrics, Project Gutenberg ebook #8197; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Second Song: The Girl from Baltistan is 61 lines in 8 stanzas. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-BBAC--C throb · nightA · consciousness · boatB · afloatB · lightA · woodC · sob · distress · misunderstoodC
  2. 2 DDEEFFGG disorderD · borderD · fireE · desireE · clearerF · nearerF · spaceG · faceG
  3. 3 -HIHJJJI-KK throb · streamH · edgeI · dreamH · liesJ · skiesJ · eyesJ · sedgeI · sob · tideK · asideK
  4. 4 LLM--MNO restL · dispossessedL · powerM · afire · desire · hourM · brimN · thirstO
  5. 5 OPOQNQP cursedO · desireP · worstO · restQ · dimN · possessedQ · fireP
  6. 6 RSRS thingsR · oneS · wingsR · sunS
  7. 7 TUTU timesT · willU · climesT · stillU
  8. 8 VVWWUUXX- liesV · eyesV · spreadW · shedW · stillU · thrillU · onX · wanX · skies
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Throb, throb, throb,3···
Far away in the blue transparent Night,10·˘/···˘/˘·
On the outer horizon of a dreaming consciousness,12··/˘/˘··/˘/˘
She hears the sound of her lover's nearing boat11······/˘/˘·
Afar, afloat4˘/˘/
On the river's loneliness, where the Stars are the only light;14··/˘/˘·····/˘·
Hear the sound of the straining wood8·····/˘·
Like a broken sob5··/˘·
Of a heart's distress,5···˘/
Loving misunderstood.6/˘·˘˘/
She lies, with her loose hair spent in soft disorder,12·········˘/˘
On a silken sheet with a purple woven border,13··/˘···/˘/˘/˘
Every cell of her brain is latent fire,10/˘·····/˘/
Every fibre tense with restrained desire.9/˘/··˘/˘/
And the straining oars sound clearer, clearer,10··/˘··/˘/˘
The boat is approaching nearer, nearer;10···˘/˘/˘/˘
"How to wait through the moments' space8·····/˘·
Till I see the light of my lover's face?"10·······/˘·
Throb, throb, throb,3···
The sound dies down the stream6······
Till it only clings at the senses' edge10··/˘···/˘·
Like a half-remembered dream.8···˘/˘˘·
Doubtless, he in the silence lies,8/˘···/˘·
His fair face turned to the tender skies,9······/˘·
Starlight touching his sleeping eyes.8/·/˘·/˘·
While his boat caught in the thickset sedge9······/˘·
And the waters round it gurgle and sob,10··/˘··/˘··
Or floats set free on the river's tide,9······/˘·
Oars laid aside.4··˘/
She is awake and knows no rest,8··˘/····
Passion dies and is dispossessed8/˘····˘/
Of his brief, despotic power.8···˘/˘/˘
But the Brain, once kindled, would still be afire11····/˘···˘/
Were the whole world pasture to its desire,10····/˘··˘/
And all of love, in a single hour,--9······/˘/
A single wine cup, filled to the brim,9·/˘······
Given to slake its thirst.6/˘····
Some there are who are thus-wise cursed8········
Times that follow fulfilled desire9··/˘˘/˘/˘
Are of all their hours the worst.8····/˘··
They find no Respite and reach no Rest,9···/˘····
Though passion fail and desire grow dim,9·/˘··˘/··
No assuagement comes from the thing possessed10·˘/˘····˘/
For possession feeds the fire.8·˘/˘··/˘
"Oh, for the life of the bright hued things9·········
Whose marriage and death are one,7·/˘····
A floating fusion on golden wings.9·/˘/˘·/˘·
Alit with passion and sun!7···/˘··
"But we who re-marry a thousand times,10····/˘·/˘·
As the spirit or senses will,8··/˘·/˘·
In a thousand ways, in a thousand climes,10··/˘···/˘·
We remain unsatisfied still."8·˘/˘/˘··
As her lover left her, alone, awake she lies,12··/˘··˘/˘/··
With a sleepless brain and weary, half-closed eyes.11··/˘··/˘···
She turns her face where the purple silk is spread,11······/˘···
Still sweet with delicate perfume his presence shed.11···/˘˘/·/˘·
Her arms remembered his vanished beauty still,11··˘/˘·/˘/˘·
And, reminiscent of clustered curls, her fingers thrill.13··˘/˘·/˘··/˘·
While the wonderful, Starlit Night wears slowly on11··/˘/˘··/˘·
Till the light of another day, serene and wan,12····˘/˘·˘/··
Pierces the eastern skies.6/˘·/˘·

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