Reverie of Ormuz the Persian
Softly the feathery Palm-trees fade in the violet Distance,Faintly the lingering light touches the edge of the sea,Sadly the Music of Waves, drifts, faint as an Anthem's insistence,Heard in the aisles of a dream, over the sandhills, to me.
Now that the Lights are reversed, and the Singing changed into sighing,Now that the wings of our fierce, fugitive passion are furled,Take I unto myself, all alone in the light that is dying,Much of the sorrow that lies hid at the Heart of the World.
Sad am I, sad for your loss: for failing the charm of your presence,Even the sunshine has paled, leaving the Zenith less blue.Even the ocean lessens the light of its green opalescence,Since, to my sorrow I loved, loved and grew weary of, you.
Why was our passion so fleeting, why had the flush of your beautyOnly so slender a spell, only so futile a power?Yet, even thus ever is life, save when long custom or dutyMoulds into sober fruit Love's fragile and fugitive flower.
Fain would my soul have been faithful; never an alien pleasureLured me away from the light lit in your luminous eyes,But we have altered the World as pitiful man has leisureTo criticise, balance, take counsel, assuredly lies.
All through the centuries Man has gathered his flower, and fenced it,--Infinite strife to attain; infinite struggle to keep,--Holding his treasure awhile, all Fate and all forces against it,Knowing it his no more, if ever his vigilance sleep.
But we have altered the World as pitiful man has grown stronger,So that the things we love are as easily kept as won,Therefore the ancient fight can engage and detain us no longer,And all too swiftly, alas, passion is over and done.
Far too speedily now we can gather the coveted treasure,Enjoy it awhile, be satiated, begin to tire;And what shall be done henceforth with the profitless after-leisure,Who has the breath to kindle the ash of a faded fire?
Ah, if it only had lasted! After my ardent endeavourCame the delirious Joy, flooding my life like a sea,Days of delight that are burnt on the brain for ever and ever,Days and nights when you loved, before you grew weary of me.
Softly the sunset decreases dim in the violet Distance,Even as Love's own fervour has faded away from me,Leaving the weariness, the monotonous Weight of Existence,--All the farewells in the world weep in the sound of the sea.
Words in this poem 15
- sadly adv.
- Wearily; heavily; firmly.
- insistence n.
- The quality of insisting, or being urgent or pressing; the act of dwelling upon as of special importance; persistence; urgency.
- sunshine n.
- The light of the sun, or the place where it shines; the direct rays of the sun, the place where they fall, or the warmth and light which they give.
- opalescence n.
- A reflection of a milky or pearly light from the interior of a mineral, as in the moonstone; the state or quality of being opalescent.
- futile a.
- Talkative; loquacious; tattling. [L. futilis that easily pours out, that easily lets loose, vain, worthless, from the root of fundere to pour out: cf. F. futile. See Fuse, v. t.]
- fain v. t.
- To be glad ; to wish or desire.
- assuredly adv.
- Certainly; indubitably.
- strife n.
- The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
- awhile adv.
- For a while; for some time; for a short time. [Adj. a + while time, interval.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- henceforth adv.
- From this time forward; henceforward.
- profitless a.
- Without profit; unprofitable.
- endeavour v. t.
- To exert physical or intellectual strength for the attainment of; to use efforts to effect; to strive to achieve or reach; to try; to attempt. [OE. endevor; pref. en- + dever, devoir, duty, F. devoir: cf. F. se mettre en devoir de faire quelque chose to try to do a thing, to go about it. See Devoir, Deb]
- flooding n.
- The filling or covering with water or other fluid; overflow; inundation; the filling anything to excess.
- fervour n.
- Heat; excessive warmth. [OF. fervor, fervour, F. ferveur, L. fervor, fr. fervere. See Fervent.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Reverie of Ormuz the Persian is in the public domain. This text is taken from India's Love Lyrics, Project Gutenberg ebook #8197; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
Reverie of Ormuz the Persian is 40 lines in 10 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABAB distanceA · seaB · insistenceA · meB
- 2 ABAB sighingA · furledB · dyingA · worldB
- 3 ABAB presenceA · blueB · opalescenceA · youB
- 4 ABAB beautyA · powerB · dutyA · flowerB
- 5 ABAB pleasureA · eyesB · leisureA · liesB
- 6 ABAB itA · keepB · itA · sleepB
- 7 ABAB strongerA · wonB · longerA · doneB
- 8 ABAB treasureA · tireB · leisureA · fireB
- 9 ABAB endeavourA · seaB · everA · meB
- 10 ABAB distanceA · meB · existenceA · seaB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Softly the feathery Palm-trees fade in the violet Distance, | 16 | /˘·/˘˘·····/˘˘/˘ |
| Faintly the lingering light touches the edge of the sea, | 14 | /˘·/˘˘·/˘····· |
| Sadly the Music of Waves, drifts, faint as an Anthem's insistence, | 16 | /˘·/˘······/˘˘/˘ |
| Heard in the aisles of a dream, over the sandhills, to me. | 14 | ··········/··· |
| Now that the Lights are reversed, and the Singing changed into sighing, | 16 | ·····˘/··/˘···/˘ |
| Now that the wings of our fierce, fugitive passion are furled, | 15 | ·····/˘·/˘˘/˘·· |
| Take I unto myself, all alone in the light that is dying, | 16 | ·····/·˘/·····/˘ |
| Much of the sorrow that lies hid at the Heart of the World. | 14 | ···/˘········· |
| Sad am I, sad for your loss: for failing the charm of your presence, | 16 | ········/˘····/˘ |
| Even the sunshine has paled, leaving the Zenith less blue. | 14 | /˘·/···/˘·/˘·· |
| Even the ocean lessens the light of its green opalescence, | 16 | /˘·/˘/˘········· |
| Since, to my sorrow I loved, loved and grew weary of, you. | 14 | ···/˘·····/˘·· |
| Why was our passion so fleeting, why had the flush of your beauty | 17 | ··/˘/˘·/˘······/˘ |
| Only so slender a spell, only so futile a power? | 15 | /˘·/˘··/˘·/˘·/˘ |
| Yet, even thus ever is life, save when long custom or duty | 16 | ·/˘·/˘·····/˘·/˘ |
| Moulds into sober fruit Love's fragile and fugitive flower. | 15 | ···/˘··/˘·/˘˘/˘ |
| Fain would my soul have been faithful; never an alien pleasure | 16 | ······/˘/˘·/˘˘/˘ |
| Lured me away from the light lit in your luminous eyes, | 14 | ··˘/······/˘˘· |
| But we have altered the World as pitiful man has leisure | 15 | ···/˘···/˘˘··/˘ |
| To criticise, balance, take counsel, assuredly lies. | 14 | ·/˘·/˘·/˘˘/˘˘· |
| All through the centuries Man has gathered his flower, and fenced it, | 16 | ···/˘˘··/˘·/˘··· |
| --Infinite strife to attain; infinite struggle to keep,-- | 14 | /˘˘··˘//˘˘/˘·· |
| Holding his treasure awhile, all Fate and all forces against it, | 16 | /˘·/˘˘/····/˘··· |
| Knowing it his no more, if ever his vigilance sleep. | 14 | /˘·····/˘·/˘˘· |
| But we have altered the World as pitiful man has grown stronger, | 16 | ···/˘···/˘˘···/˘ |
| So that the things we love are as easily kept as won, | 14 | ········/˘˘··· |
| Therefore the ancient fight can engage and detain us no longer, | 16 | ···/˘··˘/·˘/··/˘ |
| And all too swiftly, alas, passion is over and done. | 14 | ···/˘˘//˘····· |
| Far too speedily now we can gather the coveted treasure, | 16 | ··/˘˘···/˘·/˘˘/˘ |
| Enjoy it awhile, be satiated, begin to tire; | 14 | ˘/·˘/····˘/·/˘ |
| And what shall be done henceforth with the profitless after-leisure, | 16 | ·····//··/˘˘··/˘ |
| Who has the breath to kindle the ash of a faded fire? | 15 | ·····/˘····/˘/˘ |
| Ah, if it only had lasted! After my ardent endeavour | 16 | ···/˘·/˘···/˘˘/˘ |
| Came the delirious Joy, flooding my life like a sea, | 14 | ··˘/˘˘·/˘····· |
| Days of delight that are burnt on the brain for ever and ever, | 16 | ··˘/·······/˘·/˘ |
| Days and nights when you loved, before you grew weary of me. | 14 | ··········/˘·· |
| Softly the sunset decreases dim in the violet Distance, | 16 | /˘·/·˘/˘···/˘˘/˘ |
| Even as Love's own fervour has faded away from me, | 14 | /˘···/˘·/˘˘/·· |
| Leaving the weariness, the monotonous Weight of Existence,-- | 16 | /˘·/˘˘·˘/˘˘··˘/˘ |
| All the farewells in the world weep in the sound of the sea. | 14 | ···/·········· |
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