Written in Keats' "Endymion"

Thomas Hood (1799–1845) · 1826–1845

iambic pentameter · English sonnet · 14 lines · from The Song of the Shirt, and Other Poems

I saw pale Dian, sitting by the brinkOf silver falls, the overflow of fountainsFrom cloudy steeps; and I grew sad to thinkEndymion's foot was silent on those mountains.And he but a hush'd name, that Silence keepsIn dear remembrance,--lonely, and forlorn,Singing it to herself until she weepsTears, that perchance still glisten in the morn:--And as I mused, in dull imaginings,There came a flash of garments, and I knewThe awful Muse by her harmonious wingsCharming the air to music as she flew--Anon there rose an echo through the valeGave back Enydmion in a dreamlike tale.

Words in this poem

brink n.
The edge, margin, or border of a steep place, as of a precipice; a bank or edge, as of a river or pit; a verge; a border; as, the brink of a chasm. Also Fig. [Dan. brink edge, verge; akin to Sw. brink declivity, hill, Icel. brekka; cf. LG. brink a grassy hill, W. bryn hill, bryncyn hillock.]
forlorn a.
Deserted abandoned; lost. [OE., p.p. of forlesen to lose utterly, AS. forleósan (p.p. forloren); pref. for- + leósan (in comp.) to lose; cf. D. verliezen to lose, G. verlieren, Sw. förlor]
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
anon adv.
Straightway; at once. [OE. anoon, anon, anan, lit., in one (moment), fr. AS. on in + an one. See On and One.]
vale n.
A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Written in Keats' "Endymion" is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poetical Works of Thomas Hood, Project Gutenberg ebook #15652; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Written in Keats' "Endymion" is 14 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes ABABCDCDEFEFGG, the pattern of the English sonnet. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

See other English sonnets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCDEFEFGG brinkA · fountainsB · thinkA · mountainsB · keepsC · forlornD · weepsC · mornD · imaginingsE · knewF · wingsE · flewF · valeG · taleG
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I saw pale Dian, sitting by the brink10···/˘/˘···
Of silver falls, the overflow of fountains11·/˘··/˘··/˘
From cloudy steeps; and I grew sad to think10·/˘·······
Endymion's foot was silent on those mountains.11·····/˘··/˘
And he but a hush'd name, that Silence keeps10·······/˘·
In dear remembrance,--lonely, and forlorn,10··˘/˘/˘·˘/
Singing it to herself until she weeps10/˘··˘/····
Tears, that perchance still glisten in the morn:--10··˘/·/˘···
And as I mused, in dull imaginings,10······˘/˘˘
There came a flash of garments, and I knew10·····/˘···
The awful Muse by her harmonious wings10·/˘···˘/˘·
Charming the air to music as she flew--10/˘···/˘···
Anon there rose an echo through the vale10˘/···/˘···
Gave back Enydmion in a dreamlike tale.10·······/··

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