A Fairy Tale

Thomas Hood (1799–1845) · 1826–1845

iambic pentameter · spenserian stanza · 279 lines · from The Song of the Shirt, and Other Poems

Immortal Imogen, crown'd queen aboveThe lilies of thy sex, vouchsafe to hearA fairy dream in honor of true love--True above ills, and frailty, and all fear,--Perchance a shadow of his own careerWhose youth was darkly prison'd and long-twinedBy serpent-sorrow, till white Love drew near,And sweetly sang him free, and round his mindA bright horizon threw, wherein no grief may wind.

I saw a tower builded on a lake,Mock'd by its inverse shadow, dark and deep--That seem'd a still intenser night to make,Wherein the quiet waters sank to sleep,--And, whatso'er was prison'd in that keep,A monstrous Snake was warden:--round and roundIn sable ringlets I beheld him creepBlackest amid black shadows to the ground,Whilst his enormous head, the topmost turret crown'd.

From whence he shot fierce light against the stars,Making the pale moon paler with affright;And with his ruby eye out-threaten'd Mars--That blaz'd in the mid-heavens, hot and bright--Nor slept, nor wink'd, but with a steadfast spiteWatch'd their wan looks and tremblings in the skies;And that he might not slumber in the night,The curtain-lids were pluck'd from his large eyes,So he might never drowse, but watch his secret prize.

Prince or princess in dismal durance pent,Victims of old Enchantment's love or hate,Their lives must all in painful sighs be spent,Watching the lonely waters soon and late,And clouds that pass and leave them to their fate,Or company their grief with heavy tears:--Meanwhile that Hope can spy no golden gateFor sweet escapement, but in darksome fearsThey weep and pine away as if immortal years.

No gentle bird with gold upon its wingWill perch upon the grate--the gentle birdIs safe in leafy dell, and will not bringFreedom's sweet key-note and commission-wordLearn'd of a fairy's lips, for pity stirr'd--Lest while he trembling sings, untimely guest!Watch'd by that cruel Snake and darkly heard,He leave a widow on her lonely nest,To press in silent grief the darlings of her breast.

No gallant knight, adventurous, in his bark,Will seek the fruitful perils of the place,To rouse with dipping oar the waters darkThat bear that serpent image on their face.And Love, brave Love! though he attempt the base,Nerved to his loyal death, he may not winHis captive lady from the strict embraceOf that foul Serpent, clasping her withinHis sable folds--like Eve enthrall'd by the old Sin.

But there is none--no knight in panoply,Nor Love, intrench'd in his strong steely coat:No little speck--no sail--no helper nigh,No sign--no whispering--no plash of boat:--The distant shores show dimly and remote,Made of a deeper mist,--serene and gray,--And slow and mute the cloudy shadows floatOver the gloomy wave, and pass away,Chased by the silver beams that on their marges play.

And bright and silvery the willows sleepOver the shady verge--no mad winds teaseTheir hoary heads; but quietly they weepTheir sprinkling leaves--half fountains and half trees:Their lilies be--and fairer than all these,A solitary Swan her breast of snowLaunches against the wave that seems to freezeInto a chaste reflection, still belowTwin shadow of herself wherever she may go.

And forth she paddles in the very noonOf solemn midnight like an elfin thing,Charm'd into being by the argent moon--Whose silver light for love of her fair wingGoes with her in the shade, still worshippingHer dainty plumage:--all around her grewA radiant circlet, like a fairy ring;And all behind, a tiny little clueOf light, to guide her back across the waters blue.

And sure she is no meaner than a fay,Redeem'd from sleepy death, for beauty's sake,By old ordainment:--silent as she lay,Touched by a moonlight wand I saw her wake,And cut her leafy slough, and so forsakeThe verdant prison of her lily peers,That slept amidst the stars upon the lake--A breathing shape--restored to human fears,And new-born love and grief--self-conscious of her tears.

And now she clasps her wings around her heart,And near that lonely isle begins to glide,Pale as her fears, and oft-times with a startTurns her impatient head from side to sideIn universal terrors--all too wideTo watch; and often to that marble keepUpturns her pearly eyes, as if she spiedSome foe, and crouches in the shadows steepThat in the gloomy wave go diving fathoms deep.

And well she may, to spy that fearful thingAll down the dusky walls in circlets wound;Alas! for what rare prize, with many a ringGirding the marble casket round and round?His folded tail, lost in the gloom profound,Terribly darkeneth the rocky base;But on the top his monstrous head is crown'dWith prickly spears, and on his doubtful faceGleam his unwearied eyes, red watchers of the place.

Alas! of the hot fires that nightly fall,No one will scorch him in those orbs of spite,So he may never see beneath the wallThat timid little creature, all too bright,That stretches her fair neck, slender and white,Invoking the pale moon, and vainly triesHer throbbing throat, as if to charm the nightWith song--but, hush--it perishes in sighs,And there will be no dirge sad-swelling, though she dies!

She droops--she sinks--she leans upon the lake,Fainting again into a lifeless flower;But soon the chilly springs anoint and wakeHer spirit from its death, and with new powerShe sheds her stifled sorrows in a showerOf tender song, timed to her falling tears--That wins the shady summit of that tower,And, trembling all the sweeter for its fears,Fills with imploring moan that cruel monster's ears.

And, lo! the scaly beast is all deprest,Subdued like Argus by the might of sound--What time Apollo his sweet lute addrestTo magic converse with the air, and boundThe many monster eyes, all slumber-drown'd:--So on the turret-top that watchful SnakePillows his giant head, and lists profound,As if his wrathful spite would never wake,Charm'd into sudden sleep for Love and Beauty's sake!

His prickly crest lies prone upon his crown,And thirsty lip from lip disparted flies,To drink that dainty flood of music down--His scaly throat is big with pent-up sighs--And whilst his hollow ear entranced lies,His looks for envy of the charmed senseAre fain to listen, till his steadfast eyes,Stung into pain by their own impotence,Distil enormous tears into the lake immense.

Oh, tuneful Swan! oh, melancholy bird!Sweet was that midnight miracle of song,Rich with ripe sorrow, needful of no wordTo tell of pain, and love, and love's deep wrong--Hinting a piteous tale--perchance how longThy unknown tears were mingled with the lake,What time disguised thy leafy mates among--And no eye knew what human love and acheDwelt in those dewy leaves, and heart so nigh to break.

Therefore no poet will ungently touchThe water-lily, on whose eyelids dewTrembles like tears; but ever hold it suchAs human pain may wander through and through,Turning the pale leaf paler in its hue--Wherein life dwells, transfigured, not entomb'd,By magic spells. Alas! who ever knewSorrow in all its shapes, leafy and plumed,Or in gross husks of brutes eternally inhumed?

And now the winged song has scaled the heightOf that dark dwelling, builded for despair,And soon a little casement flashing brightWidens self-open'd into the cool air--That music like a bird may enter thereAnd soothe the captive in his stony cage;For there is nought of grief, or painful care,But plaintive song may happily engageFrom sense of its own ill, and tenderly assuage.

And forth into the light, small and remote,A creature, like the fair son of a king,Draws to the lattice in his jewell'd coatAgainst the silver moonlight glistening,And leans upon his white hand listeningTo that sweet music that with tenderer toneSalutes him, wondering what kindly thingIs come to soothe him with so tuneful moan,Singing beneath the walls as if for him alone!

And while he listens, the mysterious song,Woven with timid particles of speech.Twines into passionate words that grieve alongThe melancholy notes, and softly teachThe secrets of true love,--that trembling reachHis earnest ear, and through the shadows dunHe missions like replies, and each to eachTheir silver voices mingle into one,Like blended streams that make one music as they run.

"Ah! Love, my hope is swooning in my heart,--""Ay, sweet, my cage is strong and hung full high--""Alas! our lips are held so far apart,Thy words come faint,--they have so far to fly!--""If I may only shun that serpent-eye,--""Ah me! that serpent-eye doth never sleep;--""Then, nearer thee, Love's martyr, I will die!--""Alas, alas! that word has made me weep!For pity's sake remain safe in thy marble keep!"

"My marble keep! it is my marble tomb--""Nay, sweet! but thou hast there thy living breath--""Aye to expend in sighs for this hard doom;--""But I will come to thee and sing beneath,""And nightly so beguile this serpent wreath;--""Nay, I will find a path from these despairs.""Ah, needs then thou must tread the back of death,Making his stony ribs thy stony stairs.--Behold his ruby eye, how fearfully it glares!"

Full sudden at these words, the princely youthLeaps on the scaly back that slumbers, stillUnconscious of his foot, yet not for ruth,But numb'd to dulness by the fairy skillOf that sweet music (all more wild and shrillFor intense fear) that charm'd him as he lay--Meanwhile the lover nerves his desperate will,Held some short throbs by natural dismay,Then down the serpent-track begins his darksome way.

Now dimly seen--now toiling out of sight,Eclipsed and cover'd by the envious wall;Now fair and spangled in the sudden light,And clinging with wide arms for fear of fall;Now dark and shelter'd by a kindly pallOf dusky shadow from his wakeful foe;Slowly he winds adown--dimly and small,Watch'd by the gentle Swan that sings below,Her hope increasing, still, the larger he doth grow.

But nine times nine the serpent folds embraceThe marble walls about--which he must treadBefore his anxious foot may touch the base:Long in the dreary path, and must be sped!But Love, that holds the mastery of dread,Braces his spirit, and with constant toilHe wins his way, and now, with arms outspread,Impatient plunges from the last long coil;So may all gentle Love ungentle Malice foil!

The song is hush'd, the charm is all complete,And two fair Swans are swimming on the lake:But scarce their tender bills have time to meet,When fiercely drops adown that cruel Snake--His steely scales a fearful rustling make,Like autumn leaves that tremble and foretellThe sable storm;--the plumy lovers quake--And feel the troubled waters pant and swell,Heaved by the giant bulk of their pursuer fell.

His jaws, wide yawning like the gates of Death,Hiss horrible pursuit--his red eyes glareThe waters into blood--his eager breathGrows hot upon their plumes:--now, minstrel fair!She drops her ring into the waves, and thereIt widens all around, a fairy ringWrought of the silver light--the fearful pairSwim in the very midst, and pant and clingThe closer for their fears, and tremble wing to wing.

Bending their course over the pale gray lake,Against the pallid East, wherein light play'dIn tender flushes, still the baffled SnakeCircled them round continually, and bay'dHoarsely and loud, forbidden to invadeThe sanctuary ring--his sable mailRoll'd darkly through the flood, and writhed and madeA shining track over the waters pale,Lash'd into boiling foam by his enormous tail.

And so they sail'd into the distance dim,Into the very distance--small and white,Like snowy blossoms of the spring that swimOver the brooklets--follow'd by the spiteOf that huge Serpent, that with wild affrightWorried them on their course, and sore annoy,Till on the grassy marge I saw them 'light,And change, anon, a gentle girl and boy,Lock'd in embrace of sweet unutterable joy!

Then came the Morn, and with her pearly showersWept on them, like a mother, in whose eyesTears are no grief; and from his rosy bowersThe Oriental sun began to rise,Chasing the darksome shadows from the skies;Wherewith that sable Serpent far awayFled, like a part of night--delicious sighsFrom waking blossoms purified the day,And little birds were singing sweetly from each spray.

Words in this poem 70
vouchsafe v. t.
To condescend to grant; to concede; to bestow. [Vouch + safe, that is, to vouch or answer for safety.]
frailty n.
The condition quality of being frail, physically, mentally, or morally, frailness; infirmity; weakness of resolution; liableness to be deceived or seduced. [OE. frelete, freilte, OF. fraileté, fr. L. fragilitas. See Frail, a., and cf. Fragility.]
career n.
A race course: the ground run over. [F. carrière race course, high road, street, fr. L. carrus wagon. See Car.]
inverse a.
Opposite in order, relation, or effect; reversed; inverted; reciprocal; -- opposed to direct. [L. inversus, p. p. of invertere: cf. F. inverse. See Invert.]
sable n.
A carnivorous animal of the Weasel family (Mustela zibellina) native of the northern latitudes of Europe, Asia, and America, -- noted for its fine, soft, and valuable fur. [OF. sable, F. zibeline sable (in sense 4), LL. sabellum; cf. D. sabel, Dan. sabel, zobel, Sw. sabel, sobel, G. zobel; all fr. Russ. sóbole.]
amid prep.
In the midst or middle of; surrounded or encompassed by; among. [OE. amidde, amiddes, on midden, AS. on middan, in the middle, fr. midde the middle. The s is an adverbial ending, originally marking the genitive; the t is a la]
drowse v. i.
To sleep imperfectly or unsoundly; to slumber; to be heavy with sleepiness; to doze. [AS. dr, dr, to sink, become slow or inactive; cf. OD. droosen to be sleepy, fall asleep, LG. dr, druusken, to slumber, fall down with a noise; prob, akin to AS.]
princess n.
A female prince; a woman having sovereign power, or the rank of a prince. [F. princesse. See Prince, and cf. Princesse.]
dismal a.
Fatal; ill-omened; unlucky. [Formerly a noun; e. g., "I trow it was in the dismalle." Chaucer. Of uncertain origin; but perh. (as suggested by Skeat) from OF. disme, F. dîme, tithe, the phr]
durance n.
Continuance; duration. See Endurance. [OF. durance duration, fr. L. durans, -antis, p. pr. durare to endure, last. See Dure, and cf. Durant.]
pent p. p.
Penned or shut up; confined; -- often with up. [From Pen, v. t.]
meanwhile n.
The intervening time; as, in the meantime (or mean time).
darksome a.
Dark; gloomy; obscure; shaded; cheerless.
dell n.
A small, retired valley; a ravine. [AS. del, akin to E. dale; cf. D. delle, del, low ground. See Dale.]
panoply n.
Defensive armor in general; a full suit of defensive armor.
steely a.
Made of steel; consisting of steel.
dimly adv.
In a dim or obscure manner; not brightly or clearly; with imperfect sight.
hoary a.
White or whitish."The hoary willows."
wherever adv.
At or in whatever place; wheresoever.
elfin a.
Relating to elves.
argent n.
Silver, or money. [F. argent, fr. L. argentum, silver; akin to Gr. rajata white, silver, raj to shine, Ir. arg white, milk, airgiod silver, money, and L. arguere to make clear. Se]
dainty n.
Value; estimation; the gratification or pleasure taken in anything. [OE. deinie, dainte, deintie, deyntee, OF. deintié delicacy, orig., dignity, honor, fr. L. dignitas, fr. dignus worthy. See Deign, and cf. Dignity.]
circlet n.
A little circle; esp., an ornament for the person, having the form of a circle; that which encircles, as a ring, a bracelet, or a headband.
clue n.
A ball of thread, yarn, or cord; also, The thread itself. [OE. clewe, clowe, clue, AS. cleowen, cliwen, clywe ball of thread; akin to D. kluwen, OHG. chliwa, chliuwa, G. dim. kleuel, knäuel, and perch. to L. gluma hull,]
ordainment n.
Ordination. Burke.
amidst prep.
In the midst or middle of; surrounded or encompassed by; among. [OE. amidde, amiddes, on midden, AS. on middan, in the middle, fr. midde the middle. The s is an adverbial ending, originally marking the genitive; the t is a la]
isle v. t.
To cause to become an island, or like an island; to surround or encompass; to island.
girding n.
That with which one is girded; a girdle.
casket v. t.
To put into, or preserve in, a casket.
unwearied a.
Not wearied; not fatigued or tired; hence, persistent; not tiring or wearying; indefatigable.
nightly a.
Of or pertaining to the night, or to every night; happening or done by night, or every night; as, nightly shades; he kept nightly vigils.
scorch v. t.
To burn superficially; to parch, or shrivel, the surface of, by heat; to subject to so much heat as changes color and texture without consuming; as, to scorch linen. [OE. scorchen, probably akin to scorcnen; cf. Norw. skrokken shrunk up, skrekka, skrökka, to shrink, to become wrinkled up, dial. Sw. skråkkla to wrinkle (see Sh]
dirge n.
A piece of music of a mournful character, to accompany funeral rites; a funeral hymn. [Contraction of Lat. dirige, direct thou (imperative of dirigere), the first word of a funeral hymn (Lat. transl. of Psalm v. 8) beginning, "Dirige, Domine, in c]
imploring a.
That implores; beseeching; entreating.
argus n.
A fabulous being of antiquity, said to have had a hundred eyes, who has placed by Juno to guard Io. His eyes were transplanted to the peacock's tail.
wrathful a.
Full of wrath; very angry; greatly incensed; ireful; passionate; as, a wrathful man.
fain v. t.
To be glad ; to wish or desire.
impotence n.
The quality or condition of being impotent; want of strength or power, animal, intellectual, or moral; weakness; feebleness; inability; imbecility. [L. impotenia inability, poverty, want of moderation. See Impotent.]
tuneful a.
Harmonious; melodious; musical; as, tuneful notes.
needful a.
Full of need; in need or want; needy; distressing.
ache n.
A name given to several species of plants; as, smallage, wild celery, parsley. Holland. [F. ache, L. apium parsley.]
eternally adv.
In an eternal manner.
scaled a.
Covered with scales, or scalelike structures; -- said of a fish, a reptile, a moth, etc.
casement n.
A window sash opening on hinges affixed to the upright side of the frame into which it is fitted. (Poetically) A window. [Shortened fr. encasement. See Incase 1st Case, and cf. Incasement.]
soothe v. t.
To assent to as true. Testament of Love. [Originally, to assent to as true; OE. so to verify, AS. ges to prove the truth of, to bear witness. See Sooth, a.]
happily adv.
By chance; peradventure; haply. Piers Plowman. [From Happy.]
tenderly adv.
In a tender manner; with tenderness; mildly; gently; softly; in a manner not to injure or give pain; with pity or affection; kindly.
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
needs adv.
Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
fearfully adv.
In a fearful manner.
ruth n.
Sorrow for the misery of another; pity; tenderness. [From Rue, v.: cf. Icel. hryggedh, hrygedh.]
desperate a.
Without hope; given to despair; hopeless. [L. desperatus, p. p. of desperare. See Despair, and cf. Desperado.]
envious a.
Malignant; mischievous; spiteful. [OF. envios, F. envieux, fr. L. invidiosus, fr. invidia envy. See Envy, and cf. Invidious.]
wakeful a.
Not sleeping; indisposed to sleep; watchful; vigilant.
adown adv.
From a higher to a lower situation; downward; down, to or on the ground. [OE. adun, adoun, adune. AS. of dune off the hill. See Down.]
dreary a.
Sorrowful; distressful. [OE. dreori, dreri, AS. dreórig, sad; akin to G. traurig, and prob. to AS. dreósan to fall, Goth. driusan. Cf. Dross, Drear, Drizzle, Drowse.]
outspread v. t.
To spread out; to expand; -- usually as a past part. or adj.
ungentle a.
Not gentle; lacking good breeding or delicacy; harsh.
scarce a.
Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
plumy a.
Covered or adorned with plumes, or as with plumes; feathery.
pant v. i.
To breathe quickly or in a labored manner, as after exertion or from eagerness or excitement; to respire with heaving of the breast; to gasp. [Cf. F. panteler to gasp for breath, OF. panteisier to be breathless, F. pantois out of breath; perh. akin to E. phantom, the verb prob. orig. meaning, to have t]
glare v. i.
To shine with a bright, dazzling light. [OE. glaren, gloren; cf. AS. glær amber, LG. glaren to glow or burn like coals, D. gloren to glimmer; prob. akin to E. glass.]
closer n.
One who, or that which, closes; specifically, a boot closer. See under Boot.
circled a.
Having the form of a circle; round.
hoarsely adv.
With a harsh, grating sound or voice.
snowy a.
White like snow.
marge n.
Border; margin; edge; verge. [F. marge. See Margin.]
anon adv.
Straightway; at once. [OE. anoon, anon, anan, lit., in one (moment), fr. AS. on in + an one. See On and One.]
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
wherewith adv.
With which; -- used relatively.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

A Fairy Tale is 279 lines in 31 stanzas of 9 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABBCBCC, complete in 26 of its 31 stanzas; the stanza is the Spenserian stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

See other poems in the Spenserian stanza, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABBCBCC aboveA · hearB · loveA · fearB · careerB · twinedC · nearB · mindC · windC
  2. 2 ABABBCBCC lakeA · deepB · makeA · sleepB · keepB · roundC · creepB · groundC · crown'dC
  3. 3 ABABBCBCC starsA · affrightB · marsA · brightB · spiteB · skiesC · nightB · eyesC · prizeC
  4. 4 ABABBCBCC pentA · hateB · spentA · lateB · fateB · tearsC · gateB · fearsC · yearsC
  5. 5 ABABBCBCC wingA · birdB · bringA · wordB · stirr'dB · guestC · heardB · nestC · breastC
  6. 6 ABABBCBCC barkA · placeB · darkA · faceB · baseB · winC · embraceB · withinC · sinC
  7. 7 -A-AABABB panoply · coatA · nigh · boatA · remoteA · grayB · floatA · awayB · playB
  8. 8 ABABBCBCC sleepA · teaseB · weepA · treesB · theseB · snowC · freezeB · belowC · goC
  9. 9 ABABBCBCC noonA · thingB · moonA · wingB · worshippingB · grewC · ringB · clueC · blueC
  10. 10 ABABBCBCC fayA · sakeB · layA · wakeB · forsakeB · peersC · lakeB · fearsC · tearsC
  11. 11 ABABBCBCC heartA · glideB · startA · sideB · wideB · keepC · spiedB · steepC · deepC
  12. 12 ABABBCBCC thingA · woundB · ringA · roundB · profoundB · baseC · crown'dB · faceC · placeC
  13. 13 ABABBCBCC fallA · spiteB · wallA · brightB · whiteB · triesC · nightB · sighsC · diesC
  14. 14 ABABBCBCC lakeA · flowerB · wakeA · powerB · showerB · tearsC · towerB · fearsC · earsC
  15. 15 ABABBCBCC deprestA · soundB · addrestA · boundB · drown'dB · snakeC · profoundB · wakeC · sakeC
  16. 16 ABABBCBCC crownA · fliesB · downA · sighsB · liesB · senseC · eyesB · impotenceC · immenseC
  17. 17 ABABBC-CC birdA · songB · wordA · wrongB · longB · lakeC · among · acheC · breakC
  18. 18 ABABBCB-C touchA · dewB · suchA · throughB · hueB · entomb'dC · knewB · plumed · inhumedC
  19. 19 ABABBCBCC heightA · despairB · brightA · airB · thereB · cageC · careB · engageC · assuageC
  20. 20 ABACCDBDD remoteA · kingB · coatA · glisteningC · listeningC · toneD · thingB · moanD · aloneD
  21. 21 ABABBCBCC songA · speechB · alongA · teachB · reachB · dunC · eachB · oneC · runC
  22. 22 ABABBCBCC heartA · highB · apartA · flyB · eyeB · sleepC · dieB · weepC · keepC
  23. 23 ABACCDBDD tombA · breathB · doomA · beneathC · wreathC · despairsD · deathB · stairsD · glaresD
  24. 24 ABABBCBCC youthA · stillB · ruthA · skillB · shrillB · layC · willB · dismayC · wayC
  25. 25 ABABBCBCC sightA · wallB · lightA · fallB · pallB · foeC · smallB · belowC · growC
  26. 26 ABABBCBCC embraceA · treadB · baseA · spedB · dreadB · toilC · outspreadB · coilC · foilC
  27. 27 ABABBCBCC completeA · lakeB · meetA · snakeB · makeB · foretellC · quakeB · swellC · fellC
  28. 28 ABABBCBCC deathA · glareB · breathA · fairB · thereB · ringC · pairB · clingC · wingC
  29. 29 ABABBCBCC lakeA · play'dB · snakeA · bay'dB · invadeB · mailC · madeB · paleC · tailC
  30. 30 ABABBCBCC dimA · whiteB · swimA · spiteB · affrightB · annoyC · lightB · boyC · joyC
  31. 31 ABABBCBCC showersA · eyesB · bowersA · riseB · skiesB · awayC · sighsB · dayC · sprayC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Immortal Imogen, crown'd queen above10˘/˘/˘˘····
The lilies of thy sex, vouchsafe to hear10·/˘···˘/··
A fairy dream in honor of true love--10·/˘··/˘···
True above ills, and frailty, and all fear,--10·····/˘···
Perchance a shadow of his own career10˘/·/····˘/
Whose youth was darkly prison'd and long-twined10···/˘/˘···
By serpent-sorrow, till white Love drew near,10·/˘/˘·····
And sweetly sang him free, and round his mind10·/˘·······
A bright horizon threw, wherein no grief may wind.12··˘/˘·······
I saw a tower builded on a lake,10···/˘/˘···
Mock'd by its inverse shadow, dark and deep--10···˘//····
That seem'd a still intenser night to make,10··········
Wherein the quiet waters sank to sleep,--10···/˘/˘···
And, whatso'er was prison'd in that keep,9····/˘···
A monstrous Snake was warden:--round and round10·/˘··/˘···
In sable ringlets I beheld him creep10·/˘···˘/··
Blackest amid black shadows to the ground,10/˘˘/·/····
Whilst his enormous head, the topmost turret crown'd.12··˘/˘··/˘/˘·
From whence he shot fierce light against the stars,10··········
Making the pale moon paler with affright;10/˘······˘/
And with his ruby eye out-threaten'd Mars--10···/˘··/˘·
That blaz'd in the mid-heavens, hot and bright--10·····/˘···
Nor slept, nor wink'd, but with a steadfast spite10·······/··
Watch'd their wan looks and tremblings in the skies;10·····/˘···
And that he might not slumber in the night,10·····/˘···
The curtain-lids were pluck'd from his large eyes,10·/˘·······
So he might never drowse, but watch his secret prize.11···/····/˘·
Prince or princess in dismal durance pent,10··/˘·/˘/˘·
Victims of old Enchantment's love or hate,10/˘··˘/˘···
Their lives must all in painful sighs be spent,10·····/˘···
Watching the lonely waters soon and late,10/˘·/˘/˘···
And clouds that pass and leave them to their fate,10··········
Or company their grief with heavy tears:--10·/˘˘···/˘·
Meanwhile that Hope can spy no golden gate10/······/˘·
For sweet escapement, but in darksome fears10··˘/˘··/˘·
They weep and pine away as if immortal years.12····˘/··˘/˘·
No gentle bird with gold upon its wing10·/˘·······
Will perch upon the grate--the gentle bird10·······/˘·
Is safe in leafy dell, and will not bring10···/˘·····
Freedom's sweet key-note and commission-word10/˘····˘/˘·
Learn'd of a fairy's lips, for pity stirr'd--10···/˘··/˘·
Lest while he trembling sings, untimely guest!10···/˘·˘/˘·
Watch'd by that cruel Snake and darkly heard,10···/˘··/˘·
He leave a widow on her lonely nest,10···/˘··/˘·
To press in silent grief the darlings of her breast.12···/˘··/˘···
No gallant knight, adventurous, in his bark,10·/˘·˘/˘···
Will seek the fruitful perils of the place,10···/˘/˘···
To rouse with dipping oar the waters dark10···/˘··/˘·
That bear that serpent image on their face.10···/˘/˘···
And Love, brave Love! though he attempt the base,10······˘/··
Nerved to his loyal death, he may not win10···/˘·····
His captive lady from the strict embrace10·/˘/˘···˘/
Of that foul Serpent, clasping her within10···/˘/˘···
His sable folds--like Eve enthrall'd by the old Sin.12·/˘···˘/····
But there is none--no knight in panoply,10·······/˘˘
Nor Love, intrench'd in his strong steely coat:10·······/˘·
No little speck--no sail--no helper nigh,10·/˘····/˘·
No sign--no whispering--no plash of boat:--10···/˘˘····
The distant shores show dimly and remote,10·/˘··/˘·˘/
Made of a deeper mist,--serene and gray,--10···/˘·˘/··
And slow and mute the cloudy shadows float10·····/˘/··
Over the gloomy wave, and pass away,10···/˘···˘/
Chased by the silver beams that on their marges play.12···/˘····/˘·
And bright and silvery the willows sleep10···/˘˘·/··
Over the shady verge--no mad winds tease10···/˘·····
Their hoary heads; but quietly they weep10·/˘··/˘˘··
Their sprinkling leaves--half fountains and half trees:10·/˘··/˘···
Their lilies be--and fairer than all these,10·/˘··/˘···
A solitary Swan her breast of snow10·/˘·˘·····
Launches against the wave that seems to freeze10/˘········
Into a chaste reflection, still below10····˘/˘···
Twin shadow of herself wherever she may go.12·/··˘/˘/˘···
And forth she paddles in the very noon10···/˘··/˘·
Of solemn midnight like an elfin thing,10·/˘/···/˘·
Charm'd into being by the argent moon--10···/˘··/˘·
Whose silver light for love of her fair wing10·/˘·······
Goes with her in the shade, still worshipping10·······/˘˘
Her dainty plumage:--all around her grew10·/˘/˘·····
A radiant circlet, like a fairy ring;10·/˘/˘··/˘·
And all behind, a tiny little clue10·····/˘/˘·
Of light, to guide her back across the waters blue.12······˘/·/˘·
And sure she is no meaner than a fay,10·····/˘···
Redeem'd from sleepy death, for beauty's sake,10˘/·/˘··/˘·
By old ordainment:--silent as she lay,10··˘/˘/˘···
Touched by a moonlight wand I saw her wake,10···/······
And cut her leafy slough, and so forsake10···/˘···˘/
The verdant prison of her lily peers,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
That slept amidst the stars upon the lake--10··˘/······
A breathing shape--restored to human fears,10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
And new-born love and grief--self-conscious of her tears.12·······/˘···
And now she clasps her wings around her heart,10··········
And near that lonely isle begins to glide,10···/˘·˘/··
Pale as her fears, and oft-times with a start10··········
Turns her impatient head from side to side10··˘/˘·····
In universal terrors--all too wide10··˘/˘/˘···
To watch; and often to that marble keep10···/˘··/˘·
Upturns her pearly eyes, as if she spied10/··/˘·····
Some foe, and crouches in the shadows steep10···/˘··/··
That in the gloomy wave go diving fathoms deep.12···/˘··/˘/˘·
And well she may, to spy that fearful thing10·······/˘·
All down the dusky walls in circlets wound;10···/˘·····
Alas! for what rare prize, with many a ring10˘/·····/··
Girding the marble casket round and round?10/˘·/˘/˘···
His folded tail, lost in the gloom profound,10·/˘·····˘/
Terribly darkeneth the rocky base;10/˘˘/˘˘·/˘·
But on the top his monstrous head is crown'd10·····/˘···
With prickly spears, and on his doubtful face10·/˘····/˘·
Gleam his unwearied eyes, red watchers of the place.12··˘/˘··/˘···
Alas! of the hot fires that nightly fall,10˘/···/·/˘·
No one will scorch him in those orbs of spite,10··········
So he may never see beneath the wall10···/˘·····
That timid little creature, all too bright,10·/˘/˘/˘···
That stretches her fair neck, slender and white,10·/˘···/˘··
Invoking the pale moon, and vainly tries10˘/˘····/˘·
Her throbbing throat, as if to charm the night10·/˘·······
With song--but, hush--it perishes in sighs,10·····/˘˘··
And there will be no dirge sad-swelling, though she dies!12·······/˘···
She droops--she sinks--she leans upon the lake,10··········
Fainting again into a lifeless flower;11/˘˘/···/˘/˘
But soon the chilly springs anoint and wake10···/˘·˘/··
Her spirit from its death, and with new power11·/˘······/˘
She sheds her stifled sorrows in a shower11···/˘/˘··/˘
Of tender song, timed to her falling tears--10·/˘····/˘·
That wins the shady summit of that tower,11···/˘/˘··/˘
And, trembling all the sweeter for its fears,10·/˘··/˘···
Fills with imploring moan that cruel monster's ears.11··˘/˘··//˘·
And, lo! the scaly beast is all deprest,10···/˘·····
Subdued like Argus by the might of sound--10˘/·/˘·····
What time Apollo his sweet lute addrest11··˘/˘···/˘˘
To magic converse with the air, and bound10·/˘/˘·····
The many monster eyes, all slumber-drown'd:--10·/˘/˘··/˘·
So on the turret-top that watchful Snake10···/˘··/˘·
Pillows his giant head, and lists profound,10/˘·/˘···˘/
As if his wrathful spite would never wake,10···/˘··/˘·
Charm'd into sudden sleep for Love and Beauty's sake!12···/˘····/˘·
His prickly crest lies prone upon his crown,10·/˘·······
And thirsty lip from lip disparted flies,10·/˘·······
To drink that dainty flood of music down--10···/˘··/˘·
His scaly throat is big with pent-up sighs--10·/˘·······
And whilst his hollow ear entranced lies,10···/˘·˘/˘·
His looks for envy of the charmed sense10···/˘···˘·
Are fain to listen, till his steadfast eyes,10···/˘··/··
Stung into pain by their own impotence,10·······/˘˘
Distil enormous tears into the lake immense.12˘/˘/˘·····˘/
Oh, tuneful Swan! oh, melancholy bird!10·/˘··/˘·˘·
Sweet was that midnight miracle of song,10···/·/˘˘··
Rich with ripe sorrow, needful of no word10···/˘/˘···
To tell of pain, and love, and love's deep wrong--10··········
Hinting a piteous tale--perchance how long11/˘·/˘˘·˘/··
Thy unknown tears were mingled with the lake,10·˘/··/˘···
What time disguised thy leafy mates among--10··˘/·/˘···
And no eye knew what human love and ache10·····/˘···
Dwelt in those dewy leaves, and heart so nigh to break.12···/˘·······
Therefore no poet will ungently touch10···/˘·····
The water-lily, on whose eyelids dew10·/˘/˘··/··
Trembles like tears; but ever hold it such10/˘···/˘···
As human pain may wander through and through,10·/˘··/˘···
Turning the pale leaf paler in its hue--10/˘········
Wherein life dwells, transfigured, not entomb'd,10········˘/
By magic spells. Alas! who ever knew10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
Sorrow in all its shapes, leafy and plumed,10/˘····/˘··
Or in gross husks of brutes eternally inhumed?11······˘/˘··
And now the winged song has scaled the height10····˘·····
Of that dark dwelling, builded for despair,10···/˘/˘·˘/
And soon a little casement flashing bright10···/˘/˘/˘·
Widens self-open'd into the cool air--10/˘·/˘·····
That music like a bird may enter there10·/˘····/˘·
And soothe the captive in his stony cage;10···/˘··/˘·
For there is nought of grief, or painful care,10·······/˘·
But plaintive song may happily engage10·/˘··/˘˘˘/
From sense of its own ill, and tenderly assuage.11·······/˘˘/
And forth into the light, small and remote,10········˘/
A creature, like the fair son of a king,10·/˘·······
Draws to the lattice in his jewell'd coat10···/˘·····
Against the silver moonlight glistening,10···/˘/·/˘˘
And leans upon his white hand listening10·······/˘˘
To that sweet music that with tenderer tone11···/˘······
Salutes him, wondering what kindly thing10˘/·/˘˘·/˘·
Is come to soothe him with so tuneful moan,10·······/˘·
Singing beneath the walls as if for him alone!12/˘········˘/
And while he listens, the mysterious song,10···/˘·˘/˘·
Woven with timid particles of speech.10/˘·/˘/˘˘··
Twines into passionate words that grieve along10···/˘···˘/
The melancholy notes, and softly teach10·/˘·˘··/˘·
The secrets of true love,--that trembling reach10·/˘····/˘·
His earnest ear, and through the shadows dun10·/˘····/··
He missions like replies, and each to each10·/˘·˘/····
Their silver voices mingle into one,10·/˘/˘/˘···
Like blended streams that make one music as they run.12·/˘····/˘···
"Ah! Love, my hope is swooning in my heart,--"10·····/˘···
"Ay, sweet, my cage is strong and hung full high--"10··········
"Alas! our lips are held so far apart,10˘//·····˘/
Thy words come faint,--they have so far to fly!--"10··········
"If I may only shun that serpent-eye,--"10···/˘··/˘·
"Ah me! that serpent-eye doth never sleep;--"10···/˘··/˘·
"Then, nearer thee, Love's martyr, I will die!--"10·/˘··/˘···
"Alas, alas! that word has made me weep!10˘/˘/······
For pity's sake remain safe in thy marble keep!"12·/˘·˘/···/˘·
"My marble keep! it is my marble tomb--"10·/˘····/˘·
"Nay, sweet! but thou hast there thy living breath--"10·······/˘·
"Aye to expend in sighs for this hard doom;--"10··˘/······
"But I will come to thee and sing beneath,"10··········
"And nightly so beguile this serpent wreath;--"10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
"Nay, I will find a path from these despairs."10········˘/
"Ah, needs then thou must tread the back of death,10··········
Making his stony ribs thy stony stairs.--10/˘·/˘··/˘·
Behold his ruby eye, how fearfully it glares!"12˘/·/˘··/˘˘··
Full sudden at these words, the princely youth10·/˘····/˘·
Leaps on the scaly back that slumbers, still10···/˘··/˘·
Unconscious of his foot, yet not for ruth,10·/˘·······
But numb'd to dulness by the fairy skill10·······/˘·
Of that sweet music (all more wild and shrill10···/˘·····
For intense fear) that charm'd him as he lay--10·˘/·······
Meanwhile the lover nerves his desperate will,10/··/˘··/˘·
Held some short throbs by natural dismay,10·····/˘˘˘/
Then down the serpent-track begins his darksome way.12···/˘·˘/·/˘·
Now dimly seen--now toiling out of sight,10·/˘··/˘···
Eclipsed and cover'd by the envious wall;10˘/·/˘··/˘·
Now fair and spangled in the sudden light,10···/˘··/˘·
And clinging with wide arms for fear of fall;10·/˘·······
Now dark and shelter'd by a kindly pall10···/˘··/˘·
Of dusky shadow from his wakeful foe;10·/˘/···/˘·
Slowly he winds adown--dimly and small,10/˘··˘//˘··
Watch'd by the gentle Swan that sings below,10···/˘·····
Her hope increasing, still, the larger he doth grow.12··˘/˘··/˘···
But nine times nine the serpent folds embrace10·····/˘·˘/
The marble walls about--which he must tread10·/˘·······
Before his anxious foot may touch the base:10···/˘·····
Long in the dreary path, and must be sped!10···/˘·····
But Love, that holds the mastery of dread,10·····/˘˘··
Braces his spirit, and with constant toil10/˘·/˘··/˘·
He wins his way, and now, with arms outspread,10········˘/
Impatient plunges from the last long coil;10˘/˘/˘·····
So may all gentle Love ungentle Malice foil!12···/˘·˘/˘/˘·
The song is hush'd, the charm is all complete,10········˘/
And two fair Swans are swimming on the lake:10·····/˘···
But scarce their tender bills have time to meet,10···/˘·····
When fiercely drops adown that cruel Snake--10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
His steely scales a fearful rustling make,10·/˘··/˘/˘·
Like autumn leaves that tremble and foretell10·/˘··/˘·˘/
The sable storm;--the plumy lovers quake--10·/˘··/˘/˘·
And feel the troubled waters pant and swell,10···/˘/˘···
Heaved by the giant bulk of their pursuer fell.12···/˘···˘/˘·
His jaws, wide yawning like the gates of Death,10···/˘·····
Hiss horrible pursuit--his red eyes glare10·/˘˘˘/····
The waters into blood--his eager breath10·/˘····/˘·
Grows hot upon their plumes:--now, minstrel fair!10·······/˘·
She drops her ring into the waves, and there10··········
It widens all around, a fairy ring10·/˘····/˘·
Wrought of the silver light--the fearful pair10···/˘··/˘·
Swim in the very midst, and pant and cling10···/˘·····
The closer for their fears, and tremble wing to wing.12·/˘····/˘···
Bending their course over the pale gray lake,10/˘········
Against the pallid East, wherein light play'd10···/˘·····
In tender flushes, still the baffled Snake10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Circled them round continually, and bay'd10/˘··˘/˘˘··
Hoarsely and loud, forbidden to invade10/˘··˘/˘·˘/
The sanctuary ring--his sable mail10·/˘·˘··/˘·
Roll'd darkly through the flood, and writhed and made10·/˘·······
A shining track over the waters pale,10·/˘····/˘·
Lash'd into boiling foam by his enormous tail.12···/˘···˘/˘·
And so they sail'd into the distance dim,10·······/˘·
Into the very distance--small and white,10···/˘/˘···
Like snowy blossoms of the spring that swim10·/˘/˘·····
Over the brooklets--follow'd by the spite10·····/˘···
Of that huge Serpent, that with wild affright10···/˘···˘/
Worried them on their course, and sore annoy,10/˘······˘/
Till on the grassy marge I saw them 'light,10···/˘·····
And change, anon, a gentle girl and boy,10··˘/·/˘···
Lock'd in embrace of sweet unutterable joy!12··˘/··˘/˘˘˘·
Then came the Morn, and with her pearly showers11·······/˘/˘
Wept on them, like a mother, in whose eyes10·····/˘···
Tears are no grief; and from his rosy bowers11·······/˘/˘
The Oriental sun began to rise,10··˘/˘·˘/··
Chasing the darksome shadows from the skies;10/˘·/˘/····
Wherewith that sable Serpent far away10˘/·/˘/˘·˘/
Fled, like a part of night--delicious sighs10······˘/˘·
From waking blossoms purified the day,10·/˘/˘/˘···
And little birds were singing sweetly from each spray.12·/˘··/˘/˘···

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