522. To His Kinswoman, Mistress Susanna Herrick

Robert Herrick (1591–1674) · 1648

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 6 lines · from Hesperides

When I consider, dearest, thou dost stayBut here a-while, to languish and decay,Like to these garden-glories, which here beThe flowery-sweet resemblances of thee;With grief of heart, methinks, I thus do cry:Would thou hadst ne'er been born, or might'st not die.

Words in this poem

languish v. i.
To cause to dr Shak.
methinks v.
It seems to me; I think. See Me. [AS. þyncan to seem, me þynceedh, me þuhte, OE. me thinketh, me thoughte; akin to G. dünken to seem, denken to think, and E. think. See Me, and Think.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

522. To His Kinswoman, Mistress Susanna Herrick is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Hesperides & Noble Numbers: Vol. 1 and 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #22421; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Robert Herrick, 522. To His Kinswoman, Mistress Susanna Herrick, in Hesperides (1648), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #22421, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/herrick-hesperides/522-to-his-kinswoman-mistress-susanna-herrick.html, id L05497.

Form and metre

522. To His Kinswoman, Mistress Susanna Herrick is 6 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCC stayA · decayA · beB · theeB · cryC · dieC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
When I consider, dearest, thou dost stay10··˘/˘/˘···
But here a-while, to languish and decay,10·····/˘·˘/
Like to these garden-glories, which here be10···/˘/˘···
The flowery-sweet resemblances of thee;10·/˘·˘/˘˘··
With grief of heart, methinks, I thus do cry:10····˘/····
Would thou hadst ne'er been born, or might'st not die.10··········

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