The Tragic Mice

Oliver Herford (1863–1935) · 1898

common measure · ABAB · 24 lines · from The Bashful Earthquake, and Other Fables and Verses

It was a tragic little mouseAll bent on suicideBecause another little mouseRefused to be his bride.

“Alas!” he squeaked, “I shall not wed!My heart and paw she spurns;I’ll hie me to the cat instead,From whence no mouse returns!”

The playful cat met him half way,Said she, “I feel for you,You’re dying for a mouse, you say,I’m dying for one, too!”

Now when Miss Mouse beheld his doom,Struck with remorse, she cried,“In death we’ll meet!--O cat! make roomFor one more mouse inside.”

The playful cat was charmed; said she,“I shall be, in a sense,Your pussy catafalque!” Ah me!It was her last offence!

Reader, take warning from this tale,And shun the punster’s trick:Those mice, for fear lest cats might fail,Had eaten arsenic!

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
pussy n.
A pet name for a cat; also, an endearing name for a girl. [Dim. of puss.]
catafalque n.
A temporary structure sometimes used in the funeral solemnities of eminent persons, for the public exhibition of the remains, or their conveyance to the place of burial. [F., fr. It. catafalco, scaffold, funeral canopy; of uncertain origin; cf. Sp. catafalso, cadahalso, cadalso, Pr. casafalc, OF. chafaut. Cf. Scaffold.]
offence n.
The act of offending in any sense; esp., a crime or a sin, an affront or an injury. [F., fr. L. offensa. See Offend.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Tragic Mice is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Bashful Earthquake, & Other Fables and Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #56765; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Oliver Herford, The Tragic Mice, in The Bashful Earthquake, and Other Fables and Verses (1898), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #56765, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/herford-bashful-earthquake/the-tragic-mice.html, id L22106.

Form and metre

The Tragic Mice is 24 lines in 6 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB mouseA · suicideB · mouseA · brideB
  2. 2 ABAB wedA · spurnsB · insteadA · returnsB
  3. 3 ABAB wayA · youB · sayA · tooB
  4. 4 ABAB doomA · criedB · roomA · insideB
  5. 5 ABAB sheA · senseB · meA · offenceB
  6. 6 ABAB taleA · trickB · failA · arsenicB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
It was a tragic little mouse8···/˘/˘·
All bent on suicide6···/˘·
Because another little mouse8··˘/˘/˘·
Refused to be his bride.6˘/····
“Alas!” he squeaked, “I shall not wed!8˘/······
My heart and paw she spurns;6······
I’ll hie me to the cat instead,8······˘/
From whence no mouse returns!”6····˘/
The playful cat met him half way,8·/˘·····
Said she, “I feel for you,6······
You’re dying for a mouse, you say,8·/˘·····
I’m dying for one, too!”6·/˘···
Now when Miss Mouse beheld his doom,8····˘/··
Struck with remorse, she cried,6··˘/··
“In death we’ll meet!--O cat! make room8········
For one more mouse inside.”6····˘/
The playful cat was charmed; said she,8·/˘·····
“I shall be, in a sense,6······
Your pussy catafalque!” Ah me!8·/˘/˘˘··
It was her last offence!6····˘/
Reader, take warning from this tale,8/˘·/˘···
And shun the punster’s trick:6······
Those mice, for fear lest cats might fail,8········
Had eaten arsenic!6·/˘/˘˘

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