To W. R

W. E. Henley (1849–1903) · 1898

dactylic dimeter · 12 lines · from Poems

THICK is the darkness—Sunward, O, sunward!Rough is the highway—Onward, still onward!

Dawn harbours surelyEast of the shadows.Facing us somewhereSpread the sweet meadows.

Upward and forward!Time will restore us:Light is above us,Rest is before us.

Words in this poem

sunward adv.
Toward the sun.
somewhere adv.
In some place unknown or not specified; in one place or another.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

To W. R is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #1568; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: W. E. Henley, To W. R, in Poems (1898), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #1568, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/henley-poems/to-w-r-2.html, id L12394.

Form and metre

To W. R is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is dactylic dimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%). 85% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.0 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 17% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in dactylic dimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 2 -A-A surely · shadowsA · somewhere · meadowsA
  2. 3 -AAA forward · usA · usA · usA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against dactylic dimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
THICK is the darkness—5···/˘
Sunward, O, sunward!5/˘·/˘
Rough is the highway—5···/·
Onward, still onward!5/˘·/˘
Dawn harbours surely5·/˘/˘
East of the shadows.5···/·
Facing us somewhere5/˘·/·
Spread the sweet meadows.5···/·
Upward and forward!5/˘·/˘
Time will restore us:5··˘/·
Light is above us,5·····
Rest is before us.5·····

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