Space and dread and the dark—

W. E. Henley (1849–1903) · 1898

unrhymed · 36 lines · from Poems

SPACE and dread and the dark—Over a livid stretch of skyCloud-monsters crawling, like a funeral trainOf huge, primeval presencesStooping beneath the weightOf some enormous, rudimentary grief;While in the haunting lonelinessThe far sea waits and wanders with a soundAs of the trailing skirts of Destiny,Passing unseenTo some immitigable endWith her grey henchman, Death.

What larve, what spectre is thisThrilling the wilderness to lifeAs with the bodily shape of Fear?What but a desperate sense,A strong foreboding of those dimInterminable continents, forlornAnd many-silenced, in a duskInviolable utterly, and deadAs the poor dead it huddles and swarms and styesIn hugger-mugger through eternity?

Life—life—let there be life!Better a thousand times the roaring hoursWhen wave and wind,Like the Arch-Murderer in flightFrom the Avenger at his heel,Storm through the desolate fastnessesAnd wild waste places of the world!

Life—give me life until the end,That at the very top of being,The battle-spirit shouting in my blood,Out of the reddest hell of the fightI may be snatched and flungInto the everlasting lull,The immortal, incommunicable dream.

Words in this poem

loneliness n.
The condition of being lonely; solitude; seclusion.
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
immitigable a.
Not capable of being mitigated, softened, or appeased. [L. immitigabilis; fr. pref. im- not + mitigare to mitigate.]
henchman n.
An attendant; a servant; a follower. Now chiefly used as a political cant term. [OE. hencheman, henxman; prob. fr. OE. & AS. hengest horse + E. man, and meaning, a groom. AS. hengest is akin to D. & G. hengst stallion, OHG. hengist horse, ge]
spectre n.
Something preternaturally visible; an apparition; a ghost; a phantom. [F. spectre, fr. L. spectrum an appearance, image, specter, fr. specere to look. See Spy, and cf. Spectrum.]
thrilling a.
Causing a thrill; causing tremulous excitement; deeply moving; as, a thrilling romance.
desperate a.
Without hope; given to despair; hopeless. [L. desperatus, p. p. of desperare. See Despair, and cf. Desperado.]
forlorn a.
Deserted abandoned; lost. [OE., p.p. of forlesen to lose utterly, AS. forleósan (p.p. forloren); pref. for- + leósan (in comp.) to lose; cf. D. verliezen to lose, G. verlieren, Sw. förlor]
lull v. t.
To cause to rest by soothing influences; to compose; to calm; to soothe; to quiet. [Akin to OD. lullen to sing to sleep, G. lullen, Dan. lulle, Sw. lulla; all of imitative origin. Cf. Loll, Lollard.]
incommunicable a.
Not communicable; incapable of being communicated, shared, told, or imparted, to others. [L. incommunicabilis: cf. F. incommunicable. See In- not, and Communicable.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Space and dread and the dark— is 36 lines in 4 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. 91% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 6 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 56% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 4 -A--A-- end · beingA · blood · fight · flungA · lull · dream
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
SPACE and dread and the dark—6······
Over a livid stretch of sky8···/˘···
Cloud-monsters crawling, like a funeral train10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Of huge, primeval presences8··˘/˘/˘˘
Stooping beneath the weight6/˘····
Of some enormous, rudimentary grief;10··˘/˘·˘/˘·
While in the haunting loneliness8···/˘/˘˘
The far sea waits and wanders with a sound10·····/˘···
As of the trailing skirts of Destiny,9···/˘··/˘
Passing unseen4/˘˘/
To some immitigable end8··˘/˘˘˘·
With her grey henchman, Death.6···/˘·
What larve, what spectre is this7···/˘··
Thrilling the wilderness to life8/˘·/˘˘··
As with the bodily shape of Fear?8···/˘···
What but a desperate sense,6···/˘·
A strong foreboding of those dim8··˘/˘···
Interminable continents, forlorn8˘/˘/˘˘˘/
And many-silenced, in a dusk8·/˘/˘···
Inviolable utterly, and dead8˘/˘/˘˘··
As the poor dead it huddles and swarms and styes11·····/˘····
In hugger-mugger through eternity?9·/˘/˘·˘/˘
Life—life—let there be life!6······
Better a thousand times the roaring hours10/˘·/˘··/˘/
When wave and wind,4····
Like the Arch-Murderer in flight8···/˘˘··
From the Avenger at his heel,8··˘/˘···
Storm through the desolate fastnesses9···/˘·/˘˘
And wild waste places of the world!8···/˘···
Life—give me life until the end,8········
That at the very top of being,9···/˘··/˘
The battle-spirit shouting in my blood,9·/˘//˘···
Out of the reddest hell of the fight9···/˘····
I may be snatched and flung7····˘··
Into the everlasting lull,8····˘/˘·
The immortal, incommunicable dream.11·˘/˘·······

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