Oily Weather

Ernest Hemingway (1899–1961) · 1923

trochaic trimeter · 9 lines · from Ten Poems

The sea desires deep hulls—It swells and rolls.The screw churns a throb—Driving, throbbing, progressing.The sea rolls with loveSurging, caressing,Undulating its great loving belly.The sea is big and old—Throbbing ships scorn it.

Words in this poem

throb v. i.
To beat, or pulsate, with more than usual force or rapidity; to beat in consequence of agitation; to palpitate; -- said of the heart, pulse, etc. [OE. ; of uncertain origin; cf. Russ. trepete a trembling, and E. trepidation.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Oily Weather is in the public domain. This text is taken from Three Stories & Ten Poems (poems only), Project Gutenberg ebook #59603; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Ernest Hemingway, Oily Weather, in Ten Poems (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #59603, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hemingway-ten-poems/oily-weather.html, id L27119.

Form and metre

Oily Weather is 9 lines in a single stanza. The metre is trochaic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ---A-A--- hulls · rolls · throb · progressingA · love · caressingA · belly · old · it
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The sea desires deep hulls—6··˘/··
It swells and rolls.4····
The screw churns a throb—5·····
Driving, throbbing, progressing.7/˘/˘˘/˘
The sea rolls with love5·····
Surging, caressing,5/˘˘/˘
Undulating its great loving belly.10/˘·˘··/˘/˘
The sea is big and old—6······
Throbbing ships scorn it.5/˘···

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