Toward the Piræus

H.D. (1886–1961) · 1924

iambic trimeter · 116 lines · from Heliodora, and Other Poems

Slay with your eyes, Greek,men over the face of the earth,slay with your eyes, the host,puny, passionless, weak.

Break as the ranks of steelbroke when the Persian lost:craven, we hated them then:now we would count them Godsbeside these, spawn of the earth.

Grant us your mantle, Greek;grant us but oneto fright (as your eyes) with a sword,men, craven and weak,grant us but one to strikeone blow for you, passionate Greek.

You would have broken my wings,but the very fact that you knewI had wings, set some sealon my bitter heart, my heartbroke and fluttered and sang.

You would have snared me,and scattered the strands of my nest;but the very fact that you saw,sheltered me, claimed me,set me apart from the rest

Of men--of men, made you a god,and me, claimed me, set me apartand the song in my breast,yours, yours forever--if I escape your evil heart.

I loved you:men have writ and women have saidthey loved,but as the Pythoness stands by the altar,intense and may not move,

till the fumes pass over;and may not falter or break,till the priest has caught the wordsthat mar or makea deme or a ravaged town;so I, though my knees tremble,my heart break,must note the rumbling,heed only the shudderingdown in the fissure beneath the rockof the temple floor;

must wait and watchand may not turn nor move,nor break from my trance to speakso slight, so sweet,so simple a word as love.

What had you donehad you been true,I can not think,I may not know.

What could we dowere I not wise,what play invent,what joy devise?

(Yet were you lost,who were there then,to circumventthe tricks of men?)

What can we do,for curious lieshave filled your heart,and in my eyessorrow has writthat I am wise.

If I had been a boy,I would have worshipped your grace,I would have flung my worshipbefore your feet,I would have followed apart,glad, rent with an ecstasyto watch you turnyour great head, set on the throat,thick, dark with its sinews,burned and wroughtlike the olive stalk,and the noble chinand the throat.

I would have stood,and watched and watchedand burned,and when in the night,from the many hosts, your slaves,and warriors and serving menyou had turnedto the purple couch and the flameof the woman, tall like the cypress treethat flames sudden and swift and freeas with crackle of golden resinand cones and the locks flung freelike the cypress limbs,bound, caught and shaken and loosed,bound, caught and riven and boundand loosened again,as in rain of a kingly stormor wind full from a desert plain.

So, when you had risenfrom all the lethargy of love and its heat,you would have summoned me,me alone,and found my hands,beyond all the hands in the world,cold, cold, cold,intolerably cold and sweet.

It was not chastity that made me cold nor fear,only I knew that you, like myself, were sickof the puny race that crawls and quibbles and lispsof love and love and lovers and love’s deceit.

It was not chastity that made me wild, but fearthat my weapon, tempered in different heat,was over-matched by yours, and your handskilled to yield death-blows, might break

Words in this poem

puny a.
Imperfectly developed in size or vigor; small and feeble; inferior; petty. [F. puîté younger, later born, OF. puisné; puis afterwards (L. post; see Post-) + né born, L. natus. See Natal, and cf. Puisne.]
passionless a.
Void of passion; without anger or emotion; not easily excited; calm.
broke v. i.
To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
craven v. t.
To make recreant, weak, spiritless, or cowardly.
pythoness n.
The priestess who gave oracular answers at Delphi in Greece. [L. pythonissa: cf. F. pythonisse. See Pythian.]
falter v. t.
To thrash in the chaff; also, to cleanse or sift, as barley.
deme n.
A territorial subdivision of Attica (also of modern Greece), corresponding to a township. Jowett (Thucyd).
rumbling
a. & n. from Rumble, v. i.
invent v. t.
To come or light upon; to meet; to find. [L. inventus, p. p. of invenire to come upon, to find, invent; pref. in- in + venire to come, akin to E. come: cf. F. inventer. See Come.]
circumvent v. t.
To gain advantage over by arts, stratagem, or deception; to decieve; to delude; to get around. [L. circumventis, p. p. of circumvenire, to come around, encompass, decieve; circum + venire to come, akin to E. come.]
curious a.
Difficult to please or satisfy; solicitous to be correct; careful; scrupulous; nice; exact. [OF. curios, curius, F. curieux, L. curiosus careful, inquisitive, fr. cura care. See Cure.]
lethargy n.
Morbid drowsiness; continued or profound sleep, from which a person can scarcely be awaked. [F. léthargie, L. letgargia, Gr. Lethe.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Toward the Piræus is 116 lines in 18 stanzas. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic trimeter.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A--A greekA · earth · host · weakA
  2. 3 A--A-A greekA · one · sword · weakA · strike · greekA
  3. 5 AB-AB meA · nestB · saw · meA · restB
  4. 6 -A--A god · apartA · breast · forever · heartA
  5. 8 -A-A--A---- over · breakA · words · makeA · town · tremble · breakA · rumbling · shuddering · rock · floor
  6. 9 -A--A watch · moveA · speak · sweet · loveA
  7. 11 -A-A do · wiseA · invent · deviseA
  8. 12 -A-A lost · thenA · circumvent · menA
  9. 13 -A-A-A do · liesA · heart · eyesA · writ · wiseA
  10. 14 -------A----A boy · grace · worship · feet · apart · ecstasy · turn · throatA · sinews · wrought · stalk · chin · throatA
  11. 15 --A--BA-CC-C---B-- stood · watched · burnedA · night · slaves · menB · turnedA · flame · treeC · freeC · resin · freeC · limbs · loosed · bound · againB · storm · plain
  12. 16 AB-A---B risenA · heatB · me · aloneA · hands · world · cold · sweetB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Slay with your eyes, Greek,5·····
men over the face of the earth,8········
slay with your eyes, the host,6······
puny, passionless, weak.6/˘/˘˘·
Break as the ranks of steel6······
broke when the Persian lost:6···/˘·
craven, we hated them then:7/˘·/˘··
now we would count them Gods6······
beside these, spawn of the earth.7˘/·····
Grant us your mantle, Greek;6···/˘·
grant us but one4····
to fright (as your eyes) with a sword,8········
men, craven and weak,5·/˘··
grant us but one to strike6······
one blow for you, passionate Greek.8····/˘˘·
You would have broken my wings,7···/˘··
but the very fact that you knew8··/˘····
I had wings, set some seal6······
on my bitter heart, my heart7··/˘···
broke and fluttered and sang.6··/˘··
You would have snared me,5·····
and scattered the strands of my nest;8·/˘·····
but the very fact that you saw,8··/˘····
sheltered me, claimed me,5/˘···
set me apart from the rest7··˘/···
Of men--of men, made you a god,8········
and me, claimed me, set me apart8······˘/
and the song in my breast,6······
yours, yours forever--5··˘/˘
if I escape your evil heart.8··˘/·/˘·
I loved you:3···
men have writ and women have said8····/˘··
they loved,2··
but as the Pythoness stands by the altar,11···/˘˘···/˘
intense and may not move,6˘/····
till the fumes pass over;6······
and may not falter or break,7···/˘··
till the priest has caught the words7·······
that mar or make4····
a deme or a ravaged town;7····/˘·
so I, though my knees tremble,7·····/˘
my heart break,3···
must note the rumbling,6···/˘˘
heed only the shuddering7·/˘·/˘˘
down in the fissure beneath the rock9···/˘····
of the temple floor;5··/˘·
must wait and watch4····
and may not turn nor move,6······
nor break from my trance to speak7·······
so slight, so sweet,4····
so simple a word as love.7·/˘····
What had you done4····
had you been true,4····
I can not think,4····
I may not know.4····
What could we do4····
were I not wise,4····
what play invent,4··˘/
what joy devise?4··˘/
(Yet were you lost,4····
who were there then,4····
to circumvent4··˘/
the tricks of men?)4····
What can we do,4····
for curious lies5·/˘˘·
have filled your heart,4····
and in my eyes4····
sorrow has writ4/˘··
that I am wise.4····
If I had been a boy,6······
I would have worshipped your grace,7···/˘··
I would have flung my worship7·····/˘
before your feet,4····
I would have followed apart,7···/˘˘/
glad, rent with an ecstasy7····/˘˘
to watch you turn4····
your great head, set on the throat,7·······
thick, dark with its sinews,6······
burned and wrought3···
like the olive stalk,5··/˘·
and the noble chin5··/˘·
and the throat.3···
I would have stood,4····
and watched and watched4····
and burned,2··
and when in the night,5·····
from the many hosts, your slaves,7··/˘···
and warriors and serving men8·/˘˘·/˘·
you had turned3···
to the purple couch and the flame8··/˘····
of the woman, tall like the cypress tree10··/˘···/˘·
that flames sudden and swift and free8··/˘····
as with crackle of golden resin9··/˘·/˘/˘
and cones and the locks flung free7·······
like the cypress limbs,5··/˘·
bound, caught and shaken and loosed,7···/˘··
bound, caught and riven and bound7···/˘··
and loosened again,5·/˘˘/
as in rain of a kingly storm8·····/˘·
or wind full from a desert plain.8·····/˘·
So, when you had risen6····/˘
from all the lethargy of love and its heat,11···/˘˘·····
you would have summoned me,6···/˘·
me alone,3·˘/
and found my hands,4····
beyond all the hands in the world,8········
cold, cold, cold,3···
intolerably cold and sweet.8˘/˘˘˘···
It was not chastity that made me cold nor fear,12···/˘˘······
only I knew that you, like myself, were sick11/˘······/··
of the puny race that crawls and quibbles and lisps12··/˘····/˘··
of love and love and lovers and love’s deceit.11·····/˘··˘/
It was not chastity that made me wild, but fear12···/˘˘······
that my weapon, tempered in different heat,11··/˘/˘·/˘˘·
was over-matched by yours, and your hand9·········
skilled to yield death-blows, might break7·······

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