Flute Song

H.D. (1886–1961) · 1924

iambic trimeter · 15 lines · from Heliodora, and Other Poems

Little scavenger away,touch not the door,beat not the portal down,cross not the sill,silent untilmy song, bright and shrill,breathes out its lay.

Little scavenger avaunt,tempt me with jeer and taunt,yet you will wait to-day;for it were surely illto mock and shout and revel;it were more fit to tellwith flutes and calathes,your mother’s praise.

Words in this poem

avaunt v. t.
To advance; to move forward; to elevate.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Flute Song is in the public domain. This text is taken from Heliodora, and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #62456; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: H.D., Flute Song, in Heliodora, and Other Poems (1924), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #62456, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hd-heliodora/flute-song.html, id L24308.

Form and metre

Flute Song is 15 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

See other poems in iambic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A--BBBA awayA · door · down · sillB · untilB · shrillB · layA
  2. 2 AA-BBB-- avauntA · tauntA · day · illB · revelB · tellB · calathes · praise
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Little scavenger away,7/˘/˘˘˘/
touch not the door,4····
beat not the portal down,6···/˘·
cross not the sill,4····
silent until4/˘··
my song, bright and shrill,5·····
breathes out its lay.4····
Little scavenger avaunt,7/˘/˘˘˘/
tempt me with jeer and taunt,6······
yet you will wait to-day;6······
for it were surely ill6···/˘·
to mock and shout and revel;7·····/˘
it were more fit to tell6······
with flutes and calathes,5·····
your mother’s praise.4·/˘·

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