De Profundis I

Thomas Hardy (1840–1928) · 1901

iambic trimeter · ABBA · 24 lines · from Poems of the Past and the Present

WINTERTIME nighs;But my bereavement-painIt cannot bring again:Twice no one dies.

Flower-petals flee;But, since it once hath been,No more that severing sceneCan harrow me.

Birds faint in dread:I shall not lose old strengthIn the lone frost’s black length:Strength long since fled!

Leaves freeze to dun;But friends can not turn coldThis season as of oldFor him with none.

Tempests may scath;But love can not make smartAgain this year his heartWho no heart hath.

Black is night’s cope;But death will not appalOne who, past doubtings all,Waits in unhope.

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.
scath n.
Harm; damage; injury; hurt; waste; misfortune. [Icel. skathi; akin to Dan. skade, Sw. skada, AS. sceatha, scatha, foe, injurer, OS. skatho, D. schade, schaden; cf. Gr. Scathe, v.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

De Profundis I is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of the Past and the Present, Project Gutenberg ebook #3168; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Thomas Hardy, De Profundis I, in Poems of the Past and the Present (1901), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #3168, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hardy-past-and-present/de-profundis-i.html, id L16936.

Form and metre

De Profundis I is 24 lines in 6 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABBA, complete in 4 of its 6 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.1 syllables. 33% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA nighsA · painB · againB · diesA
  2. 2 A--A fleeA · been · scene · meA
  3. 3 ABBA dreadA · strengthB · lengthB · fledA
  4. 4 ABBA dunA · coldB · oldB · noneA
  5. 5 ABBA scathA · smartB · heartB · hathA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
WINTERTIME nighs;4/˘··
But my bereavement-pain6··˘/˘·
It cannot bring again:6·/˘·˘/
Twice no one dies.4····
Flower-petals flee;5/˘/˘·
But, since it once hath been,6······
No more that severing scene7···/˘˘·
Can harrow me.4·/˘·
Birds faint in dread:4····
I shall not lose old strength6······
In the lone frost’s black length:6······
Strength long since fled!4····
Leaves freeze to dun;4····
But friends can not turn cold6······
This season as of old6·/˘···
For him with none.4····
Tempests may scath;4/˘··
But love can not make smart6······
Again this year his heart6˘/····
Who no heart hath.4····
Black is night’s cope;4····
But death will not appal6······
One who, past doubtings all,6···/˘·
Waits in unhope.4····

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