The Enemy’s Portrait

Thomas Hardy (1840–1928) · 1917

iambic pentameter · 40 lines · from Moments of Vision and Miscellaneous Verses

HE saw the portrait of his enemy, offeredAt auction in a street he journeyed nigh,That enemy, now late dead, who in his life-timeHad injured deeply him the passer-by.“To get that picture, pleased be God, I’ll try,And utterly destroy it; and no moreShall be inflicted on man’s mortal eyeA countenance so sinister and sore!”

And so he bought the painting. Driving homeward,“The frame will come in useful,” he declared,“The rest is fuel.” On his arrival, weary,Asked what he bore with him, and how he fared,He said he had bid for a picture, though he caredFor the frame only: on the morrow heWould burn the canvas, which could well be spared,Seeing that it portrayed his enemy.

Next day some other duty found him busy;The foe was laid his face against the wall;But on the next he set himself to loosenThe straining-strips. And then a casual callPrevented his proceeding therewithal;And thus the picture waited, day by day,Its owner’s pleasure, like a wretched thrall,Until a month and more had slipped away.

And then upon a morn he found it shifted,Hung in a corner by a servitor.“Why did you take on you to hang that picture?You know it was the frame I bought it for.”“It stood in the way of every visitor,And I just hitched it there.”—“Well, it must go:I don’t commemorate men whom I abhor.Remind me ’tis to do. The frame I’ll stow.”

But things become forgotten. In the shadowOf the dark corner hung it by its string,And there it stayed—once noticed by its owner,Who said, “Ah me—I must destroy that thing!”But when he died, there, none remembering,It hung, till moved to prominence, as one sees;And comers pause and say, examining,“I thought they were the bitterest enemies?”

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
homeward a.
Being in the direction of home; as, the homeward way.
therewithal adv.
Over and above; besides; moreover. Daniel.
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
servitor n.
One who serves; a servant; an attendant; one who acts under another; a follower or adherent. [L., fr. servire to serve: cf. F. serviteur.]
abhor v. i.
To shrink back with horror, disgust, or dislike; to be contrary or averse; -- with from.
remind v. t.
To put (one) in mind of something; to bring to the remembrance of; to bring to the notice or consideration of (a person).
stayed a.
Staid; fixed; settled; sober; -- now written staid. See Staid.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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The Enemy’s Portrait is in the public domain. This text is taken from Moments of Vision and Miscellaneous Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #3255; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Enemy’s Portrait is 40 lines in 5 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-AABAB offered · nighA · time · byA · tryA · moreB · eyeA · soreB
  2. 2 -A-AA-A- homeward · declaredA · weary · faredA · caredA · he · sparedA · enemy
  3. 3 -A-AABAB busy · wallA · loosen · callA · therewithalA · dayB · thrallA · awayB
  4. 4 ---A-BAB shifted · servitor · picture · forA · visitor · goB · abhorA · stowB
  5. 5 -A-AABAB shadow · stringA · owner · thingA · rememberingA · seesB · examiningA · enemiesB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
HE saw the portrait of his enemy, offered11···/˘··/˘/˘
At auction in a street he journeyed nigh,10·/˘····/˘·
That enemy, now late dead, who in his life-time11·/˘········
Had injured deeply him the passer-by.10·/˘/˘··/˘·
“To get that picture, pleased be God, I’ll try,10···/˘·····
And utterly destroy it; and no more10·/˘˘˘/····
Shall be inflicted on man’s mortal eye10··˘/˘··/˘·
A countenance so sinister and sore!”10·/˘˘·/˘˘··
And so he bought the painting. Driving homeward,11·····/˘/˘/˘
“The frame will come in useful,” he declared,10·····/˘·˘/
“The rest is fuel.” On his arrival, weary,11···/··˘/˘/˘
Asked what he bore with him, and how he fared,10··········
He said he had bid for a picture, though he cared12·······/˘···
For the frame only: on the morrow he10···/˘··/˘·
Would burn the canvas, which could well be spared,10···/˘·····
Seeing that it portrayed his enemy.10/˘··˘/·/˘˘
Next day some other duty found him busy;11···/˘/˘··/˘
The foe was laid his face against the wall;10··········
But on the next he set himself to loosen11······˘/·/˘
The straining-strips. And then a casual call10·/˘····/˘·
Prevented his proceeding therewithal;11˘/˘·˘/˘····
And thus the picture waited, day by day,10···/˘/˘···
Its owner’s pleasure, like a wretched thrall,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Until a month and more had slipped away.10········˘/
And then upon a morn he found it shifted,11·········/˘
Hung in a corner by a servitor.10···/˘··/˘˘
“Why did you take on you to hang that picture?11·········/˘
You know it was the frame I bought it for.”10··········
“It stood in the way of every visitor,11······/˘/˘˘
And I just hitched it there.”—“Well, it must go:10··········
I don’t commemorate men whom I abhor.11··˘/˘····˘/
Remind me ’tis to do. The frame I’ll stow.”10˘/········
But things become forgotten. In the shadow11··˘/˘/˘··/·
Of the dark corner hung it by its string,10···/˘·····
And there it stayed—once noticed by its owner,11·····/˘··/˘
Who said, “Ah me—I must destroy that thing!”10······˘/··
But when he died, there, none remembering,10······˘/˘˘
It hung, till moved to prominence, as one sees;10·····/˘···
And comers pause and say, examining,10·/˘···˘/˘˘
“I thought they were the bitterest enemies?”11·····/˘˘/˘˘

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