Moments of Vision

Thomas Hardy (1840–1928) · 1917

iambic dimeter · ABABB · 20 lines · from Moments of Vision and Miscellaneous Verses

THAT mirrorWhich makes of men a transparency,Who holds that mirrorAnd bids us such a breast-bare spectacle seeOf you and me?

That mirrorWhose magic penetrates like a dart,Who lifts that mirrorAnd throws our mind back on us, and our heart,Until we start?

That mirrorWorks well in these night hours of ache;Why in that mirrorAre tincts we never see ourselves once takeWhen the world is awake?

That mirrorCan test each mortal when unaware;Yea, that strange mirrorMay catch his last thoughts, whole life foul or fair,Glassing it—where?

Words in this poem

ache n.
A name given to several species of plants; as, smallage, wild celery, parsley. Holland. [F. ache, L. apium parsley.]
unaware a.
Not aware; not noticing; giving no heed; thoughtless; inattentive.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Moments of Vision is in the public domain. This text is taken from Moments of Vision and Miscellaneous Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #3255; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Thomas Hardy, Moments of Vision, in Moments of Vision and Miscellaneous Verses (1917), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #3255, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hardy-moments-of-vision/moments-of-vision.html, id L24099.

Form and metre

Moments of Vision is 20 lines in 4 stanzas of 5 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABB, complete in 3 of its 4 stanzas. The metre is iambic dimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A-ABB mirrorA · transparency · mirrorA · seeB · meB
  2. 2 ABABB mirrorA · dartB · mirrorA · heartB · startB
  3. 3 ABABB mirrorA · acheB · mirrorA · takeB · awakeB
  4. 4 ABABB mirrorA · unawareB · mirrorA · fairB · whereB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic dimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
THAT mirror3·/˘
Which makes of men a transparency,9·····˘/˘˘
Who holds that mirror5···/˘
And bids us such a breast-bare spectacle see10·······/˘·
Of you and me?4····
That mirror3·/˘
Whose magic penetrates like a dart,9·/˘/˘····
Who lifts that mirror5···/˘
And throws our mind back on us, and our heart,10··/·····/·
Until we start?4····
That mirror3·/˘
Works well in these night hours of ache;8·····/··
Why in that mirror5···/˘
Are tincts we never see ourselves once take9···/·˘/··
When the world is awake?6····˘/
That mirror3·/˘
Can test each mortal when unaware;9···/˘··˘/
Yea, that strange mirror5···/˘
May catch his last thoughts, whole life foul or fair,10··········
Glassing it—where?4/˘··

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