One Evening Near Nice

Radclyffe Hall (1886–1943) · 1913

iambic pentameter · 11 lines · from Songs of Three Counties, and Other Poems

PALE depth of sky, serene and wonderful,Within whose fold the lamps of early starsShine far away and faintly luminous;Whose pensive tones merge from the afterglowInto this colour indescribable;This blending of the sea and earth and clouds,Soft and yet poignant, passionate yet calm.I know not what the spirit in me feels,When it beholds thee through my human eyes:Nor what strange craving for forgotten thingsHas stirred my soul to this disquietude!

Words in this poem

merge v. t.
To cause to be swallowed up; to immerse; to sink; to absorb. [L. mergere, mersum. Cf. Emerge, Immerse, Marrow.]
indescribable a.
Incapable of being described.
blending n.
The act of mingling.
poignant a.
Pricking; piercing; sharp; pungent. [F., p. pr. of poindre to sting, fr. L. pungere to prick, sting. See Pungent.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

One Evening Near Nice is in the public domain. This text is taken from Songs of Three Counties, and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #50591; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

One Evening Near Nice is 11 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%).

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
PALE depth of sky, serene and wonderful,10····˘/·/˘˘
Within whose fold the lamps of early stars10·······/˘·
Shine far away and faintly luminous;10··˘/·/˘/˘˘
Whose pensive tones merge from the afterglow10·/˘····/˘·
Into this colour indescribable;10···/˘·˘/˘˘
This blending of the sea and earth and clouds,10·/˘·······
Soft and yet poignant, passionate yet calm.10···/˘/˘˘··
I know not what the spirit in me feels,10·····/˘···
When it beholds thee through my human eyes:10··˘/···/˘·
Nor what strange craving for forgotten things10···/˘·˘/˘·
Has stirred my soul to this disquietude!10··˘·······

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