When I Think of Thee, Brother

Thomas Gordon Hake (1809–1895) · 1870

anapaestic dimeter · ABABCC · 24 lines · from Poems

When I think of thee, brother,Is my heart not all thine?Yet the face of anotherSeems bending o’er mine.I call thee by name, yet a name not thy ownHas whispered already its dear undertone.

When I think thine eyes greet me,Their sweet flash of blueBrings another’s to meet meOf somberer hue;And ever before me they seem to remain,Though my heart but repines to behold thee again.

When I list, and would hear theeOnce more in our home,And thy voice appears near me,Another’s has come.I dream of thee only, for thee only sigh,Yet thy image forsakes me; another’s is nigh.

When thy fond smiles come o’er me,As in moments now flown,There riseth before meA look not thy own:’Tis thee I recall to my mind, O my brother!Yet ever with thine comes the gaze of another.

Words in this poem

undertone n.
A low or subdued tone or utterance; a tone less loud than usual.
flown a.
Flushed, inflated.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

When I Think of Thee, Brother is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poems of Thomas Gordon Hake, Project Gutenberg ebook #78947; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Thomas Gordon Hake, When I Think of Thee, Brother, in Poems (1870), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #78947, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hake-poems/when-i-think-of-thee-brother.html, id L23606.

Form and metre

When I Think of Thee, Brother is 24 lines in 4 stanzas of 6 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABABCC. The metre is anapaestic dimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCC brotherA · thineB · anotherA · mineB · ownC · undertoneC
  2. 2 ABABCC meA · blueB · meA · hueB · remainC · againC
  3. 3 ABABCC theeA · homeB · meA · comeB · sighC · nighC
  4. 4 ABABCC meA · flownB · meA · ownB · brotherC · anotherC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic dimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
When I think of thee, brother,7·····/˘
Is my heart not all thine?6······
Yet the face of another7····˘/˘
Seems bending o’er mine.5·/˘··
I call thee by name, yet a name not thy own11···········
Has whispered already its dear undertone.11·/˘˘/˘··/˘·
When I think thine eyes greet me,7·······
Their sweet flash of blue5·····
Brings another’s to meet me7·˘/˘···
Of somberer hue;5·····
And ever before me they seem to remain,10·/······˘/
Though my heart but repines to behold thee again.12·······˘/·˘/
When I list, and would hear thee7·······
Once more in our home,6···/˘·
And thy voice appears near me,7···˘/··
Another’s has come.5˘/˘··
I dream of thee only, for thee only sigh,11····/˘··/˘·
Yet thy image forsakes me; another’s is nigh.12··/˘˘/·˘/˘··
When thy fond smiles come o’er me,7·······
As in moments now flown,6··/˘··
There riseth before me6······
A look not thy own:5·····
’Tis thee I recall to my mind, O my brother!12···˘/·····/˘
Yet ever with thine comes the gaze of another.11·/······˘/˘

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