The Inscrutable
Dread under-life whose dreamsAlong the midnight rush,Poured out like cavern-streamsThat from the darkness gush,A murderous thought has issued forth to floodA maiden’s sleep in blood.
He that hath swum the heavenOf woman’s loving eyes—To him a dream is given,As helplessly he lies,A dream that never nigh his thought had passed,Till in that slumber cast.
He loves her and she loves,But stern her father’s heartThat every passion movesTheir holy hope to thwart.Can they, meek sleepers, on dream-demons callTo burst the iron thrall?
That night in dreams that swayThe soul to shedding blood,One hears his own voice sayIn sleep’s half-weary mood,‘Take down your father’s sword and quickly slideThe blade into his side.
‘Disguise the seeming guilt,And bend his fingers round,And put them on the hilt,And leave him to his wound.’In that strange dream until the break of day,Asleep the lover lay.
He wakes, aghast; he strivesTo get the vision henceThat into morning lives,And fastens on his sense.’Tis but a dream, but should her hand fulfilHis will within her will!
She comes up wild and pale,She wrings her hands in pain,She utters with a wail—‘Who hath my father slain!My anguished heart sobbed all night in its sleep;I felt it sob and weep.
‘I saw you while I slept,And to my dream you spoke;All night your words I kept,I heard them when I woke:“Take down your father’s sword and quickly slideThe blade into his side.”
‘“Disguise the seeming guilt,And bend his fingers round,And put them on the hilt,And leave him to his wound.”O the false voice, that it so true should seemIn that unthought-of dream!
‘I hurried to the bed,I saw that he was slain,I saw the blood was shed,I saw the deep,—deep stain.His sword was in his side,—thrust,—to the hilt,—His fingers took the guilt.’
‘Give me a ring, good jeweller,By no one worn before,And you shall boast you gave it herWho wears it evermore.’
‘Then it shall be a ruby ring,With hoop of richest gold,And it shall be my offeringFor benefits of old.’
‘A ruby ring it must not be,Which is a thing to shine;An iron ring is best for me,No other can be mine.’
‘But surely such a ring ’twere sadTo see a lady wearAmong her guests in jewels clad,And she so young and fair.’
‘An iron ring is all I craveUpon my wedding night,For I must wear it in the grave,Where it is out of sight.’
‘Is it to be a ring to bindYour heart in wedlock’s bond,Or but to link the day behindAnd days that are beyond?’
‘It is to link me to his peaceWho is not far away;And when her lonely term may cease,The bride shall with him stay.’
‘Who is this bridegroom you would wed,And yet for ever mourn,As though you would espouse the dead,Who never can return?’
‘It is the dead I would espouse,With him lie side by side;There is a chamber in his houseHe furnished for his bride.’
Words in this poem
- spoke n.
- The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- evermore adv.
- During eternity; always; forever; for an indefinite period; at all times; -- often used substantively with for.
- clad v.
- To clothe. Holland.
- crave v. t.
- To ask with earnestness or importunity; to ask with submission or humility; to beg; to entreat; to beseech; to implore. [AS. crafian; akin to Icel. krefia, Sw. kr, Dan. kr.]
- bridegroom n.
- A man newly married, or just about to be married. [OE. bridegome, brudgume, AS. br (akin to OS. br, D. bruidegom, bruigom, OHG. pr, MHG. briutegome, G. bräutigam); AS. br bride + guma man, akin to Goth. guma, Ic]
- espouse v. t.
- To betroth; to promise in marriage; to give as spouse. [OF. espouser, esposer, F. épouser, L. sponsare to betroth, espouse, fr. sponsus betrothed, p. p. of spondere to promise solemnly or sacredly. Cf. Spouse.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Inscrutable is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poems of Thomas Gordon Hake, Project Gutenberg ebook #78947; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
The Inscrutable is 96 lines in 19 stanzas. The commonest rhyme scheme is ABAB, in 7 of the 19 stanzas; the rest vary or could not be confirmed. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).
See other poems in iambic trimeter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABABCC dreamsA · rushB · streamsA · gushB · floodC · bloodC
- 2 -A-ABB heaven · eyesA · given · liesA · passedB · castB
- 3 ----AA loves · heart · moves · thwart · callA · thrallA
- 4 A-A-BB swayA · blood · sayA · mood · slideB · sideB
- 5 ABABCC guiltA · roundB · hiltA · woundB · dayC · layC
- 6 ABAB-- strivesA · henceB · livesA · senseB · fulfil · will
- 7 ABABCC paleA · painB · wailA · slainB · sleepC · weepC
- 8 ABABCC sleptA · spokeB · keptA · wokeB · slideC · sideC
- 9 ABABCC guiltA · roundB · hiltA · woundB · seemC · dreamC
- 10 ABABCC bedA · slainB · shedA · stainB · hiltC · guiltC
- 11 -A-A jeweller · beforeA · her · evermoreA
- 12 ABAB ringA · goldB · offeringA · oldB
- 13 ABAB beA · shineB · meA · mineB
- 14 ABAB sadA · wearB · cladA · fairB
- 15 ABAB craveA · nightB · graveA · sightB
- 16 ABAB bindA · bondB · behindA · beyondB
- 17 ABAB peaceA · awayB · ceaseA · stayB
- 18 A-A- wedA · mourn · deadA · return
- 19 ABAB espouseA · sideB · houseA · brideB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Dread under-life whose dreams | 6 | ······ |
| Along the midnight rush, | 6 | ˘/·/·· |
| Poured out like cavern-streams | 6 | ···/˘· |
| That from the darkness gush, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| A murderous thought has issued forth to flood | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| A maiden’s sleep in blood. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| He that hath swum the heaven | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| Of woman’s loving eyes— | 6 | ·/˘/˘· |
| To him a dream is given, | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| As helplessly he lies, | 6 | ·/˘˘·· |
| A dream that never nigh his thought had passed, | 9 | ···/····· |
| Till in that slumber cast. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| He loves her and she loves, | 6 | ······ |
| But stern her father’s heart | 6 | ···/˘· |
| That every passion moves | 6 | ·/˘/˘· |
| Their holy hope to thwart. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Can they, meek sleepers, on dream-demons call | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| To burst the iron thrall? | 6 | ···/˘· |
| That night in dreams that sway | 6 | ······ |
| The soul to shedding blood, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| One hears his own voice say | 6 | ······ |
| In sleep’s half-weary mood, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| ‘Take down your father’s sword and quickly slide | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| The blade into his side. | 6 | ······ |
| ‘Disguise the seeming guilt, | 6 | ˘/·/˘· |
| And bend his fingers round, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And put them on the hilt, | 6 | ······ |
| And leave him to his wound.’ | 6 | ······ |
| In that strange dream until the break of day, | 10 | ·········· |
| Asleep the lover lay. | 6 | ˘/·/˘· |
| He wakes, aghast; he strives | 6 | ··˘/·· |
| To get the vision hence | 6 | ···/˘· |
| That into morning lives, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And fastens on his sense. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| ’Tis but a dream, but should her hand fulfil | 10 | ·········· |
| His will within her will! | 6 | ······ |
| She comes up wild and pale, | 6 | ······ |
| She wrings her hands in pain, | 6 | ······ |
| She utters with a wail— | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| ‘Who hath my father slain! | 6 | ···/˘· |
| My anguished heart sobbed all night in its sleep; | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| I felt it sob and weep. | 6 | ······ |
| ‘I saw you while I slept, | 6 | ······ |
| And to my dream you spoke; | 6 | ······ |
| All night your words I kept, | 6 | ······ |
| I heard them when I woke: | 6 | ······ |
| “Take down your father’s sword and quickly slide | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| The blade into his side.” | 6 | ······ |
| ‘“Disguise the seeming guilt, | 6 | ˘/·/˘· |
| And bend his fingers round, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And put them on the hilt, | 6 | ······ |
| And leave him to his wound.” | 6 | ······ |
| O the false voice, that it so true should seem | 10 | ·········· |
| In that unthought-of dream! | 6 | ······ |
| ‘I hurried to the bed, | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| I saw that he was slain, | 6 | ······ |
| I saw the blood was shed, | 6 | ······ |
| I saw the deep,—deep stain. | 6 | ······ |
| His sword was in his side,—thrust,—to the hilt,— | 10 | ·········· |
| His fingers took the guilt.’ | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| ‘Give me a ring, good jeweller, | 8 | ········ |
| By no one worn before, | 6 | ······ |
| And you shall boast you gave it her | 8 | ········ |
| Who wears it evermore.’ | 6 | ···/˘· |
| ‘Then it shall be a ruby ring, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| With hoop of richest gold, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And it shall be my offering | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| For benefits of old.’ | 6 | ·/˘˘·· |
| ‘A ruby ring it must not be, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Which is a thing to shine; | 6 | ······ |
| An iron ring is best for me, | 7 | ·/····· |
| No other can be mine.’ | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| ‘But surely such a ring ’twere sad | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| To see a lady wear | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Among her guests in jewels clad, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| And she so young and fair.’ | 6 | ······ |
| ‘An iron ring is all I crave | 7 | ·/····· |
| Upon my wedding night, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| For I must wear it in the grave, | 8 | ········ |
| Where it is out of sight.’ | 6 | ······ |
| ‘Is it to be a ring to bind | 8 | ········ |
| Your heart in wedlock’s bond, | 6 | ···/·· |
| Or but to link the day behind | 8 | ········ |
| And days that are beyond?’ | 6 | ······ |
| ‘It is to link me to his peace | 8 | ········ |
| Who is not far away; | 6 | ····˘/ |
| And when her lonely term may cease, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| The bride shall with him stay.’ | 6 | ······ |
| ‘Who is this bridegroom you would wed, | 8 | ···/···· |
| And yet for ever mourn, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| As though you would espouse the dead, | 8 | ····˘/·· |
| Who never can return?’ | 6 | ·/˘·˘/ |
| ‘It is the dead I would espouse, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| With him lie side by side; | 6 | ······ |
| There is a chamber in his house | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| He furnished for his bride.’ | 6 | ·/˘··· |
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